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okay I get it Thanks your the bomb and continue to help me and talk on here
Carrie sighed and said:" You need to get dressed for school you cant be absent on your first day."
I was so tired of her bossing me around so I got dressed in a pair of shorts and my shirt that says Don't care about you. I went and all I heard was Anna my older foster sister.
"ewwwww!" Anna says" Take it off what are you wearing mom don't let her go to my school like this!"
Anna was dressed in the usual her pink cute skirt and dress.
Oops the other quotation mark got there by accident and thanks your really a good helper
I also always by accident put one quotation mark
Charlotte - “Plot is no more than footprints left in the snow after your characters have run by on their way to incredible destinations.” wrote: "Dont let anyone who hurt you see you cry wrote: "Oopsthe other quotation mark got there by accident and thanks your really a good helper"no problem!
Let me know about that Beta Reader thing."
yes you are my beta reader your awesome
Yes someone who read your work and offers inputs and looks for typos and corrections
okay im about to do that, then I can revise later
okay you can look at it later its alright
She looked way to dressed just to go to school so I walked out the door and said:"I'm riding my motorcycle to school"
I put on my jacket to cover my scars and hopes on my motorcycle. I rode off to school and parked then hoped off and rushed to the bathroom. When I got inside the stall I started cutting my self repeating the words people say to her:
"just a scratch ,now you cut but just another mean less girl"
I do 5 cuts almost to the meat I know where to stop and where to begin. I clean up my self and walks out making sure no know knows that I cut. I walk into class saying:
Hey Ms.P, did I leave my notes in here?'
Ms. P says:
"no, but you can check"
As I take a look around I see that maybe im not alone. I sit and take out my journal to write more than I have said.
cant help you" I put the note down and walk to my room which is trashed and as I look around I see....................."Brenda, Brenda!" Ms. p yelled, "can you answer the question?"
I stutter a bit then say:
" is it 48?"
Ms. P says:
" incorrect its 37, and since you didn't pay attention I will need you to write a letter about why your focus if off"
I frown but then say:
"okay, fine"
Everyone walks out the class as I head to lunch and sit at an empty table away from Anna's clique as possible.
Anna's friends says:"Anna isn't that your foster sis, omg whatis she wearing?"
Anna says:
"I don't know but she has no sense in style"
They all laugh as I look at them and frown then starts, cutting myself with a paper clip.
A boy sits next to her and sees me and says:
"You shouldn't do that"
I say:
"I can't stop"
The bell rings before he can say anything and I walk to my last period.
тнє ѕнα∂σωѕ ∂αηcє ση тнє є∂gє σƒ тнєιя ωσяℓ∂ wrote: "There's not much emotion or... anything like that at all. Kinda bland, typical, unbelievable.
Obviously it's only me that feels that way, but I think the other's are liars."
Sora, you are free to express your opinion and constructive critism, but that was kinda mean... Maybe just tell her how you think she could improve?
Obviously it's only me that feels that way, but I think the other's are liars."
Sora, you are free to express your opinion and constructive critism, but that was kinda mean... Maybe just tell her how you think she could improve?
"Brenda, Brenda!" The Carrie my foster mom yelled.
"what" I say "you made me stop in the middle of a sentence what do you want"
Carrie is a foster mom who doesn't believe in happiness all she believes in is alone and sadness, but what she doesn't know is that somewhere inside me im alone and dark and sad and maybe even dying.