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A Fine Balance
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A Fine Balance - Chapter 10 & Chapter 11
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I was curious about the book series ASOFAI so checked it out. Do you mean ASOIAF, with it being Ice and Fire rather than Fire and Ice? Your abbreviation does sound more natural.


we'll need more of a backstory in regards to shankar. He has a lot of beggars under his wing. it seems odd that he would focus on just one so intently.

Good reason to be cautionary. Not only is Chapter 11 not a 'happy chapter' due to the landlord, but the 'family' splinters as 'brothers' fight because one brother wants to spy on 'mom' getting naked.
While Om and Maneck both engage in crude Porky's-type behavior while at the tailors, it is really Om's idea and it is only Om who disgustingly brings the behavior home. At times it is hard to have sympathy for Om and I find myself longing for further comeuppance for him.
I agree the Beggarmaster seems more like a businessman adapting to the time and place than a ruthless man. However, there is still more story so we may see him again and we may see which way he acts.

I'm glad you brought up Avinash. I hope he returns; I hate the thought that he may have been terminated because of his ideals and unionism.
The four become a family. A happy chapter but i'm cautionary. The author likes to pull the rug out from under you at any moment.
Family planning is a Chekhov's gun to this story, so far.