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I can give you access to a google doc with the book if you are interested :)
I am in the same boat. I am seeking the same thing for a fantasy / horror novel, and a bunch of short stories. If anybody is interested in maybe looking at the prologue, let me know. Lexi, I can take a look if you'd like.
Doug wrote: "I am in the same boat. I am seeking the same thing for a fantasy / horror novel, and a bunch of short stories. If anybody is interested in maybe looking at the prologue, let me know. Lexi, I can ta..."https://www.wattpad.com/story/1647132...
Is the link on wattpad :)
I would also be totally willing to swap. Mine is high fantasy, first person ensemble cast. YA, trigger warning for violence, fantasy bigotry and subtle mentions of sexual assault. Social justice oriented, meaning that most characters are queer in some way (though that's not explicit at first), and only one protagonist is a white male. 123K Words. Blurb: On the Isle of Those Dearest, two fourteen year olds, from wildly different worlds meet for a second time. Emmelyne Grenbol is a Wyclathi, a witch of phenomenal and dangerous power. Peter Tane is the Crown Prince of the Saldarian Imperial Republic. The year since they last met has been hard on both of them, and each have witnessed horrors that haunt their nightly dreams. They are hoping, therefore for a quiet week, and both are in for disappointment.
Henihan's Cove, the island's only town, is suffering the disappearances of its citizens according to Peter's cousin Lysander. And Emmelyne keeps getting attacked by the other Wyclathi in the town, a boy her age, an old, drunken woman, and a girl with orange eyes who appears in her dreams. By virtue of misunderstanding, and unfortunate timing, Peter blames Emmelyne, and the island's other Wyclathi for these disappearances. Meanwhile, both deal with the personal trials of family and teenage life, as they navigate the political and magical dangers of The Isle of Those Dearest.
Lexi wrote: "Looking for someone to sanity check with me. I have already had a bunch of reads and improved a ton but I would love more feedback. It has already been through an editor so grammar and punctuation ..."Hey there,
I offer beta reading services on my Fiverr.
I always track all changes and give feedback on plot, character development, writing style, dialogue, pacing, coherence, minor grammar issues and more.
I have only recently opened an account of Fiverr so my prices are very low at the moment!:
https://www.fiverr.com/evil_socks/bet...
You can also contact me via email- thesocksareevil@gmail.com
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Every citizen on Earth knows the vivid stories from survivors, of the day the planet shattered. When the Eldars fulfilled their duty and saved the world or at least pieces of it.
Jemna, a hacker from the outer farming communities on Ziria, never wanted an adventure. Because of her snooping around the local Zirian servers, she finds herself imprisoned, slated for execution. Maybe her destiny is kind, and her adventure will end. That is if fate hasn't abandoned the post-shift world altogether.
Growing up believing that the Eldar were infallible saviors, Jemna in an effort right a terrible wrong will come face to face with the ugly truth. She has a lot more in common with them than she ever could have imagined.
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I hope that you will prevent the shift by caring for our planet. Even though it will alter the timeline. It will alter it for the better if humans take responsibility for keeping the planet whole. -Animus, AI from Post-Shift Earth