Character storage discussion

So yeah, my characters :P

[<.b>First Name:<./b>] Zore

[<.b>Last Name:<./b>] Rizix
{<.i>Titles<./i>} The Mountain Cleaver

[<.b>Age:<./b>] 257

[<.b>Gender:<./b>] Male

[<.b>Personality:<./b>] Zore may appear brash and quick to action at first, but once you get to know him you won't think so anymore. He always thinks everything through before acting, but he thinks it though in just mere seconds. He thinks that tose with power should rule over the lesser beings, and thinks of himself above all but his Dragon. He will do what it takes to assert his claim on the throne, even if it means killing Riders and their Dragons that he was initially trained with. He always gives other Riders a chance to join him before he kills them, but only one chance.

[<.b>Physical Appearance:<./b>]
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Hair: White
Eyes: Red
Weight: 150 lbs
Height: 6' 5"
Distinguished Markings (If any): His skin is unnaturally pale

[<.b>Backstory:<./b>] Zora was born right before Galbatorix rose to power, and spent his first hundred years of life in fear. He fought at Ceunon, at Gil'ead, and finally at Urû'baen. He nearly died in Urû'baen, but was able to live and see another day. He was one of the elves that went with Eragon into unknown lands to help raise the Dragon hatchlings, and actually had one hatch for him and create the bond. He was the proudest of all Elves, only the second elven Rider in a century. He was a bright, strong, student and Eragon and the Eldunarí saw much potential in him. They praised him, told him that he was an outstanding Rider. His power grew with the years,as did his ambition. Eventually, he was made a Master himself, and he started training young Riders. Then, one day, his favorite pupil was slain in a fight with a Shade. In outrage, Zore sought revenge on the Shade. He killed it, brutally, but not before he touched the Shade's mind. The Shade had massive power, and it did whatever it wanted with that power. It didn't have elders telling it what to do, it told itself what to do. He often thought on this, and eventually he became the same way. He decided it was his turn to be in charge.

[<.b>Sexuality:<./b>] Hetero

[<.b>Relationship Status:<./b>] Single

[<.b>Other:<./b>] Zore Is an Elf, and is bonded to the red dragon, Krim. Krim is 110 years old, and so has had plenty of time to grow and become huge.