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Sep 26, 2014 05:33PM

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The snow queen is such an obscure fairy tale(less so, of course, after frozen.) but it is one of my favorites, and this is a really enjoyable retelling!"
Thanx! I have to admit I expected a lot from Frozen (because I like the Snow Queen too), but was really let down. There was barely anything that connected to it's original roots (save it be a snow queen, and a frozen somebody). It was a bit sad.
Are you going to enter this in the competition? It's reeeeally good! ;)

Oh thank you! Yeah, I probably will. It went better than I thought, I made it a bit more simplistic so it kind of matches the fairy-tale story structure, but it has a bit of me-elements. So I'm glad it was good and friend-approved!

And the thing was, it was almost completely accurate, Anna's friend gets ice stuck in his heart so she goes to find the Ice queen. And then halfway thr..."
I know!!!!!!
I just think the plot lacked so much. Anna was supposed to be Gerda and Kai at the same time, and Kristoff was Robber Girl.... and Hans? I was like 'where did this guy come from?'

Needless to say, her book sounds interesting (I wonder if her Hans actually betrays her lol)
This would be a great entry!!! One thing: it has to be 5 paragraphs. Other than that, you're set!
I don't know.... Maybe it WAS at least 5 paragraphs, not at most... I'm gonna go check.
Okay, so actually it's AT LEAST 5 paragraphs, so you're fine :)

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