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message 1: by Beth (new)

Beth Bennett | 4 comments Hello folks!

I have written a vampire book that is approximately 174,000 words. It is the first in a series. My novel is 98% finished (I'm correcting minor errors - very minor, really), and I am looking for folks interested in beta reading my novel.

It is a serious book with a dark atmosphere, and lots of action. And even though my book centers around vampires, it is so much more than that. It's about a hero who becomes an enemy, and an enemy who becomes a hero. It's about the manifestation of something purely evil and whether or not anyone be able to stop it on time. Here is a little snippet of the summary:

"A thousand shrieks filled the damp air, and blood caked the walls..."

Jezebel and Josith were best friends and lovers in the beginning, until their town was attacked by vampires one night, setting them irreversibly down separate paths.

Both enter into a world of darkness and danger, of secrets and destinies. There is something evil manifesting, something that terrifies the human race. A war is on the horizon as the humans must enter into a battle to save themselves from a fate worse than death.

Please let me know if you're interested in beta reading. Thanks!


message 2: by Kimberly (new)

Kimberly (kimberlyreich) | 3 comments I would really like to read it. And help you improve it. I love the little snippet above here.


message 3: by Ailsa (new)

Ailsa H (goodreadscomailsa_h) | 1 comments hi beth. yes I would be interested. I have a book blog and could write about it there as well as promoting on other social media sites.


message 4: by [deleted user] (new)

I would love to read it. If its in eread format though it might take longer. Having to read on a cellphone and that kills my eyes, at least until I can replace my kindle.


message 5: by Beth (new)

Beth Bennett | 4 comments Ailsa wrote: "hi beth. yes I would be interested. I have a book blog and could write about it there as well as promoting on other social media sites."

Hey Alisa, yes it's in electronic MS Word format right now. There is nothing published until I get some lovely beta readers to tell me what works for them and what doesn't. I appreciate y'alls interest. My email address is beth8507@yahoo.com.

If you email me there, I can email you my book. Thanks again! So glad to have fans of the vampire genre!


message 6: by Beth (new)

Beth Bennett | 4 comments Oops! Janel, I meant for the comment about the book being in MS Word format to be directed for you. Sorry!


message 7: by Beth (new)

Beth Bennett | 4 comments Ok, for those who emailed me, I'll get back to you tonight. That's when I've got a free moment. Sorry!


message 8: by Robin (new)

Robin | 1 comments I would be interested in reading your book.


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