Sword & Sorcery: "An earthier sort of fantasy" discussion

Set in a secondary world based on the more or less contemporary rural south, It's about an undead courier named Chalundra who is stitched together from bodies of different races and genders. This is only the first of many short stories, so I don't want to give away too much and let the work speak for itself. Not looking for too heavy of criticism here, just wanted to share my progress with fellow S&S fans. Here goes:

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1C...

Thanks!

The premise sounds fun. Lot you could do with that. So you are looking for some beta-readers?

certainly, link's right there in the post if you wanna give it a whirl.

I'd like to clarify by saying beta readers are fine, but I'm kinda looking for anybody to read it for any reason! I'm pretty new to this and just want people to check it out and enjoy it.