Hi everyone! I hope you had a great week and that you're all healthy!
I have a short fantasy story with vampires and I'm seeking beta readers to offer feedback. The first 7 chapters can be found at this link: https://www.webnovel.com/book/1661556...
What I'm looking for are the following things: Is the story interesting? Does it have good pacing? Are the characters likable? Overall opinion + Would you consider reading more? If no, then why?
Let me know if you're interested in the comments or in private. Thank you!
I have a short fantasy story with vampires and I'm seeking beta readers to offer feedback.
The first 7 chapters can be found at this link:
https://www.webnovel.com/book/1661556...
What I'm looking for are the following things:
Is the story interesting?
Does it have good pacing?
Are the characters likable?
Overall opinion + Would you consider reading more? If no, then why?
Let me know if you're interested in the comments or in private. Thank you!