Language & Grammar discussion

These two are in my third manuscript, now making the rounds a-courting editors:

A Boy, A City and Loyalty

Wonderful, Ken!

Shucks thanks, Ruth. Sometimes I think these "Language in Literature" announcements are as good as direct messages between us, poet to poet.


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I loved the Boy. Just today my grandson came home with a bunch of bolts and nuts he found. He shared with grandpa and they were last seen trying to get them to stay together. It was priceless. This poem says it all about a boy and his dreams.

Thank you much, Carol. It was rejected by Rattle (or, as they say in the poetry business: RbR).