Hi, I'm Anneliese Dahl, 24 years old and a devoted poet. I recently published 2 collections of my poetry, Kindle & paperback, "in these flowers of eden" and "under forgotten skies", about hardship, and faith, and loss, and finding my way in the world. Mostly short poems, but some longer. A close friend, likely my only friend, provided multiple beautiful color illustrations. I would so much like people to try my poetry and give some honest feedback. I will do the same, in return.
I spent the summer evenings singing, and playing the flute for him, but he always walked away. I hoped the music could change him, But it was only me who really changed inside. The summer sun still sings in me now.
in these flowers of Eden
Under forgotten skies
Singing sun
I spent the summer evenings singing,
and playing the flute for him,
but he always walked away.
I hoped the music could change him,
But it was only me who really changed inside.
The summer sun still sings in me now.
reply | edit | delete | flag *