Time Travel discussion

Hello!

I'm looking for fans!!
To be 100% honest, I'm not really into reading books, but I do love time travel movies. But you know how, like in Looper... It just doesn't make sense... But in Harry Potter 3, it makes perfect sense. I have written a time travel book in accordance with Harry Potter 3 rules. Everything you do, you've already done. I want to add my novel to the list of greatest time travel stories of all time, and I need your help. Here is my elevator pitch:

Tom the protagonist, his ex-girlfriend the villain, and an old scientist, create a serum allowing human’s to safely travel through the CIA’s newly invented time portals. It is quickly discovered that the serum has a major side effect, the ability to walk through walls. But before the chaos ensues, Tom’s future self appears and sends him 5 years into the future where adventure, action, romance, and saving the broken world awaits.

My novel can be found here for free:
https://drive.google.com/file/d/1jj0a...

Or at white.selz.com for $5.

I am 95% done with the sequel and the concluding part 2 to White, White: Shade of Grey, and I will be uploading that in the coming weeks. I feel like this is a good place to really earn some serious fans of the genre. Thank you! Enjoy! I would love to hear from anyone. :)

Nick

Hi Nick,
Congratulations on the book; it sounds awesome. I wonder if it's something peculiar to authors that some of us never seem to have a lot of time for reading, though I tend to try not to read too much around the genre I am writing in, so I don't get too influenced.
Time portals and serums sound interesting, though very far from my approach to time travel in the Time Detective Chronicles series; then again, these are also cross-genre books, (time travel/mystery/future war) which adds a bit more complexity to the storytelling.
Best wishes for the sequel,
Regards NEB

Neb wrote: "Hi Nick,
Congratulations on the book; it sounds awesome. I wonder if it's something peculiar to authors that some of us never seem to have a lot of time for reading, though I tend to try not to rea..."

Do your characters teleport through time like the movie Jumper? Mine do that as well, in addition to the time machine portal.
Future war stuff is awesome! Do you have like laser blasters or something tech wise that we don't have? My books have a war in the future as well...lol, but it's basically the same tech we have now. It's 2015 then go 5 years into the future. I looked up your book on Amazon, 130 years in the future! Pretty intense. :)

Mine have basically zero mystery in them though. But I like detective stuff. I'll read your book if you read mine... o.0

Thanks!