This or That ? discussion

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someone posts a paragraph. then the next person writes another one and so on.. and ta-da! a group story in born

This night was very quiet. Renata driving her car in the darkness of the hill toward her aunt's house is behind the last hill she had to pass it. street car lights shone almost all of them so she could see clearly. there are occasional passing car from the opposite direction. but it does not help to move away from feeling sad.

Renata thought about Michael. They had been really happy together but he had cheated on her. And what was worse, with her best friend, Sarah.

And now, Renata do not know what to do. all she would do would make it destroyed. if she chose Michael, she will lose, Sarah as a friend. but if he chose Sarah ... He must lose Michael.

Renata was very confused.

think about it, making her tears began to flow again.

She arrived at her home and unlocked the door. Once she was inside her mother hurried over to her. "Oh my goodness! What happened to you?!"

"I"she began,"I." she finished. then she fainted and hit her head and fell to the floor, breaking a table.

but because he did not want to make her worry, and he left her to her room upstairs. 'I'm ... okay mom .. ' she said, trying to calm down.

Her mother gave her a look.

"Of course you're not."

Renata knew that her mother feel that too. "but i wont talking about that now, mom.. pleasee..." she said and left her.

She ran into a jammed elevator, and she was now stuck upstairs, because they stairs were being painted

"oh suck!" she said madly and decided to go to her car back. and she saw her mother really confuse of her. "i promise, i'll tell you latr, not now.." then she turn on her car again to go without destination.

((what????!!!))

(make the next story here nikos...)

((*superly-duperly confuzzled beyond belief*))

(just follow from the last story, anythin on your head)

((cj! u need to continue the story we were writing!))

((i did...see the last story is from me.))

((someone continue the story...someone who knows what is happening.))

((i did, look at message 15 in here, above))

((ummm))

(why?)

she think again... "damn Michael.." she cursed him again. now she thingking about the beach, forest, mountain, and lake. cuz she doesn't know where will she go.

She came to a four-way intersection. She closed her eyes, spun the car around a few times, stopped, and checked where she was pointing. Left. Or East. Same thing. She drove off, only hitting a few cars on her way.
Only two of them blew up. And then, at that perfect moment at the beach, almost in the water, the gas ran out and the car stopped. So much for the fun drive underwater.

after she made her self got tired, she sitting on the sides of the sand below the coconut tree. she make a hole on the sand until she found somethin hard, square, and... big. thts box was interesting her so much, untill she forget about her problem.