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I haven't updated it in a while, but I write fanfictions. Here's a link to my supernatural one:https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12378755...
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https://www.fanfiction.net/s/12378755..."
Oh great! Since it's so long, I'll read and let you know..😁
I'm working on a novel I can share the a chapter
Chapter 2
Friends in the Shadows
Jim sat in the garden thinking He looked at the cats eating the meal had left and he was alone with a sack,a gun,the cat, and a dreadful conscience “I guess your mother lives on the outside of them walls hm? Not that I care, it's just…..well...its this I got a job to do out there mind you I don't like it much but well she's a big cat and well I don't exactly feel safe doing it with her around with the thing I got to do” he sighed “I know you ain’t done it you can’t have! I can’t kill ya I can’t. I don’t even want to put ya in the woods..but the king he’ll hurt my family. I’m sorry kitty and I’m sorry to your family too. But I can’t let him hurt my family.” He laid the gun down. He smiled “I ain’t talked like this for a long time. I had to learn that fancy talk when I got a job here.” He moved toward Augustus but Augustus jumped out of his reach and licked his children and wife. Then he crawled into the sack. ‘Well I be!” Jim exclaimed he patted the other cats and gave them a little more fish then he gently picked up the sack and headed out of the castle towards the woods. He reached the woods shortly and then he sat the sack down and opened it “Now don’t you ever come back to this place it’s dangerous and not just for you” Augustus leapt from the sack and ran into the woods. “Don’t come back!” Jim yelled he turned and went back to the castle
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“No Tit No!” Silva ran through the garden jumping over the plants. “Stop!” Tit was playing in the garden he was next to a glue trap that the rats had managed to stay away from. She jumped a row of potatoes and landed on Tit rolling with him into a garden chair. She got up slowly hissing quietly “If I tell you to stop you had best stop son. Unless you wish to rot in a glue trap meant for a demon rat. Because I will not bring you food in water daily so you can be rewarded for your arrogance.” Silva said icily “Yes, Mother'' Tit replied dryly looking around for an escape. “Why are you acting like this Tit? Is it your father? You have to learn to let go.” Tit hissed lowly “father has been gone for 6 months I am not acting like anything.” His mother turned Tit saw his escape and ran. “ Tit! Come back!” but Tit was gone and not just out of the garden.His mother knew all too well there would be trouble with the alley-cats soon. “Jewel, please look after him...you know what to do.” “Yes mother” she said and she was gone. Star came up to her mother. “I know it’s hard on all of us” she said, laying a reassuring paw on her mother’s side. Tears brimming in her eyes. “He’s not ready to let go yet..he may never be” “Oh, Star, I know we all miss your father but...something else is wrong with Tit I can tell'' Silva said “But then why do you always ask him about father?” “Because if he won’t talk to me about your father how can I expect him to talk to me about something he’s already hiding from me?” Star was very quiet. “Speak daughter” Silva said “Will he turn mother?” “Star..that’s not for us to know. But know this not one thing happens by mistake every little thing that happens happens for a reason. Evil is still evil and has no excuses and never will. But we can make an evil start have a good end. If your brother turns and does evil things and says they are evil there is hope..But if he does good or sees good being done and calls it evil....A cat must turn very dark for that to happen.” Silva looked at her daughter and sighed “I know how hard it is for you” she said gently “What does he do out there?” “In the alley?” Star asked “I don’t know” Silva answered “Well...why don’t we go see?” “Are sure? It may not be what you’d think?” “I want to remember my brother for who he really is...you know I have to leave soon...being the first born” Star’s voice cracked as she talked about her upcoming trip “This may be my last chance” “Very well but the alley is dangerous we must be very careful” “Of course mother” they set off together the same way the other cats had gone. To the alley past the castle walls.
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Tit ran through the alley. Cats were everywhere and Tit knew there were more in the shadows. No alley cat was friendly to outsiders. He remembered the first time he came.Cats had attacked him from every side. He had fought hard to hard. He had killed a cat. He had been afraid of what would happen to him. But the cats had all just left. He came again and they attacked. Again he killed a cat he had done this nine times. Now he was feared in the alley. Eyes watched him mixed with fear, hate, and a little admiration. Many of the cats thought he was going to take over the alley. And many of the cats were unhappy with that idea. Tit saw a cat sitting on an old crate. He came up to her. “I’ve got a job for you” Tit growled the words. The cat flicked her tail “If you're talking to me your answer is no.” she said flatly “No my answer is yes. I think you know that.” “Oh, your Tit. The palace cat” she spat “What kind of name is that anyway?” she asked “My name” Tit answered “And you will do a job for me” he growled “Okay sure whatever you say” she said lazily. She jumped off the crate and began to walk away. Tit jumped in front of her “You have not heard your job yet” he said “That would be because I don’t have a job palace pet” “Yes, you do. Your job is to go find Jasper, Luke, and Rollow and tell them to find me. And tell me your name. ” she looked at him for a minute then answered “I’ll find them and tell them you're in the alley. And my name is Lily” and she was off. Melting into the shadows as is the way of a true alley cat. Soon two cats came creeping out of the shadows. Tit flicked his tail “Where’s Luke?” he asked quietly. “Your new kitty friend is going to find him” Jasper laughed “She’s not my kitty friend” Tit said defensively “You answered way too quickly” Rollow said with a grin. Jasper was a large tom cat. One of his ears had been badly torn in a fight. The half that was left drooped down and covered part of his eye. His eyes were a stunning orange. And in the dark looked like two bright fires.His coat was a dark red splashed with yellow. He had small scars on his legs. And He had two long scars. The first was on his nose. It started at the base of his nose and made its way up to his shredded ear. The second one was along his neck. Starting just below his ear and ending a little past his shoulder. Rollow had a little of everything in him. There was a rumor that he even had some lion in him. And the way the fur around his neck grew made you wonder if they were true. His fur was a deep gold flecked with gray. And his eyes were black and stood out against his golden face. Rollow had not received any large scars like jasper yet. But he had many small scars and cuts everywhere. That was mainly because his enemies were never able to do much damage before he ended their life. He not only had amazing fighting skills but also his incredible size allowed him to easily overwhelm and overcome anyone who made the poor choice of fighting him. Rollow never said anything about where he learned to fight or where his size came from. Which left the alley cats to make all the rumors they wanted. And that is exactly what they did and did well. A gray cat walked up to them. “What’s the job today Tit? Also I like your kitty friend better than the last cat that you sent for me.” The gray cat said. Tit flicked his tail across the cat’s face. “Hey! I was the last cat he sent for you.” Rollow said “ I know that. But you can’t blame me for liking Lily more than you.” the gray cat said. His blue eyes shone. “Yes, I can!” Rollow said “No you cannot Tit had just woken you up and you know how grumpy you are after being woken up.” the gray cat said. “ Alright Luke, you win.” Rollow said laughing. “Alright if you two are done being kittens can we get to work?” Tit asked “ I second that.” Jasper said. they all laughed “ Alright we're on to phase two. all the cats that came to join need to be tested” Tit said “How many came forward?” Luke asked “forty” Jasper answered “Forty? We are going to make an army with forty cats assuming they all pass?” Luke said “Be quiet! Anything could be listening to us. This is not a private place. We won’t be doing anything if you tell the world first.” Tit growled. “Sorry” Luke said. “ If you want a private place you should not be in the alley” Lily walked out of the shadows. “And I may know of the perfect place.” “How long have you been there?” Tit said, hiding a smile. “Long enough to know I’m definitely not your kitty friend.” she mocked a hurt tone. Jasper, Luke, and Rollow laughed uncontrollably and even Tit chuckled. “But I really do know a place where you can talk alone.” she said “And why should we trust you?:” Jasper asked. Lily glared at him “ Because I’ve been watching you. I know everything you do. Every cat that came to you. Everything they did before and after that meeting. Every plane you have for your test, training, and attack. And I’ve been helping you.” she said coolly “You may have seen and heard some things but not everything and you have not been helping us.” Rollow said “Oh really? How come you only knew of two of the forty cats that came to you? You had never even seen them in the alley. How come every time you started a fight my friends and sometimes even me were nearby and stepped in to help you all the time? And how come you always found everything you needed for phase one almost as soon as you said you needed it out loud?” They all stared at her in shock “ I was always there. And I want your plan to work. But if you really think you four can do it alone you're even dumber than you look. I’ve even kept Tit’s sister away. Jewel follows him every time he leaves. Even I have not been able to keep her away all the time, she knows you're planning something.” Lily said “So the only reason we made this far is because you’ve been helping us?” Tit asked “ You’ve made it this far because it’s a good plan and you’ve had half the alley making sure it happens. And more and more cats are joining your side every day.” Lily answered “Half the alley?” Luke asked “Don’t forget how big the alley is there's still a lot of cats who want us dead.” Lily said “us? Who’s us?” Jasper asked Lily, laughing, answered “ One of your biggest mistakes was keeping this quiet. Most of the alley knows about it now and that’s why phase one was so easy for you. “Tit?” the cats turned to see Star dripping in blood a broken arrow in her side. “ Star! What happened?” Tit rushed to her “the king's men attacked us Jewel is gone and mother..mother is dead.” Star began to cry into her brother’s shoulder. Tit couldn't move, he couldn’t speak, mother was dead.
Chapter 2
Friends in the Shadows
Jim sat in the garden thinking He looked at the cats eating the meal had left and he was alone with a sack,a gun,the cat, and a dreadful conscience “I guess your mother lives on the outside of them walls hm? Not that I care, it's just…..well...its this I got a job to do out there mind you I don't like it much but well she's a big cat and well I don't exactly feel safe doing it with her around with the thing I got to do” he sighed “I know you ain’t done it you can’t have! I can’t kill ya I can’t. I don’t even want to put ya in the woods..but the king he’ll hurt my family. I’m sorry kitty and I’m sorry to your family too. But I can’t let him hurt my family.” He laid the gun down. He smiled “I ain’t talked like this for a long time. I had to learn that fancy talk when I got a job here.” He moved toward Augustus but Augustus jumped out of his reach and licked his children and wife. Then he crawled into the sack. ‘Well I be!” Jim exclaimed he patted the other cats and gave them a little more fish then he gently picked up the sack and headed out of the castle towards the woods. He reached the woods shortly and then he sat the sack down and opened it “Now don’t you ever come back to this place it’s dangerous and not just for you” Augustus leapt from the sack and ran into the woods. “Don’t come back!” Jim yelled he turned and went back to the castle
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“No Tit No!” Silva ran through the garden jumping over the plants. “Stop!” Tit was playing in the garden he was next to a glue trap that the rats had managed to stay away from. She jumped a row of potatoes and landed on Tit rolling with him into a garden chair. She got up slowly hissing quietly “If I tell you to stop you had best stop son. Unless you wish to rot in a glue trap meant for a demon rat. Because I will not bring you food in water daily so you can be rewarded for your arrogance.” Silva said icily “Yes, Mother'' Tit replied dryly looking around for an escape. “Why are you acting like this Tit? Is it your father? You have to learn to let go.” Tit hissed lowly “father has been gone for 6 months I am not acting like anything.” His mother turned Tit saw his escape and ran. “ Tit! Come back!” but Tit was gone and not just out of the garden.His mother knew all too well there would be trouble with the alley-cats soon. “Jewel, please look after him...you know what to do.” “Yes mother” she said and she was gone. Star came up to her mother. “I know it’s hard on all of us” she said, laying a reassuring paw on her mother’s side. Tears brimming in her eyes. “He’s not ready to let go yet..he may never be” “Oh, Star, I know we all miss your father but...something else is wrong with Tit I can tell'' Silva said “But then why do you always ask him about father?” “Because if he won’t talk to me about your father how can I expect him to talk to me about something he’s already hiding from me?” Star was very quiet. “Speak daughter” Silva said “Will he turn mother?” “Star..that’s not for us to know. But know this not one thing happens by mistake every little thing that happens happens for a reason. Evil is still evil and has no excuses and never will. But we can make an evil start have a good end. If your brother turns and does evil things and says they are evil there is hope..But if he does good or sees good being done and calls it evil....A cat must turn very dark for that to happen.” Silva looked at her daughter and sighed “I know how hard it is for you” she said gently “What does he do out there?” “In the alley?” Star asked “I don’t know” Silva answered “Well...why don’t we go see?” “Are sure? It may not be what you’d think?” “I want to remember my brother for who he really is...you know I have to leave soon...being the first born” Star’s voice cracked as she talked about her upcoming trip “This may be my last chance” “Very well but the alley is dangerous we must be very careful” “Of course mother” they set off together the same way the other cats had gone. To the alley past the castle walls.
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Tit ran through the alley. Cats were everywhere and Tit knew there were more in the shadows. No alley cat was friendly to outsiders. He remembered the first time he came.Cats had attacked him from every side. He had fought hard to hard. He had killed a cat. He had been afraid of what would happen to him. But the cats had all just left. He came again and they attacked. Again he killed a cat he had done this nine times. Now he was feared in the alley. Eyes watched him mixed with fear, hate, and a little admiration. Many of the cats thought he was going to take over the alley. And many of the cats were unhappy with that idea. Tit saw a cat sitting on an old crate. He came up to her. “I’ve got a job for you” Tit growled the words. The cat flicked her tail “If you're talking to me your answer is no.” she said flatly “No my answer is yes. I think you know that.” “Oh, your Tit. The palace cat” she spat “What kind of name is that anyway?” she asked “My name” Tit answered “And you will do a job for me” he growled “Okay sure whatever you say” she said lazily. She jumped off the crate and began to walk away. Tit jumped in front of her “You have not heard your job yet” he said “That would be because I don’t have a job palace pet” “Yes, you do. Your job is to go find Jasper, Luke, and Rollow and tell them to find me. And tell me your name. ” she looked at him for a minute then answered “I’ll find them and tell them you're in the alley. And my name is Lily” and she was off. Melting into the shadows as is the way of a true alley cat. Soon two cats came creeping out of the shadows. Tit flicked his tail “Where’s Luke?” he asked quietly. “Your new kitty friend is going to find him” Jasper laughed “She’s not my kitty friend” Tit said defensively “You answered way too quickly” Rollow said with a grin. Jasper was a large tom cat. One of his ears had been badly torn in a fight. The half that was left drooped down and covered part of his eye. His eyes were a stunning orange. And in the dark looked like two bright fires.His coat was a dark red splashed with yellow. He had small scars on his legs. And He had two long scars. The first was on his nose. It started at the base of his nose and made its way up to his shredded ear. The second one was along his neck. Starting just below his ear and ending a little past his shoulder. Rollow had a little of everything in him. There was a rumor that he even had some lion in him. And the way the fur around his neck grew made you wonder if they were true. His fur was a deep gold flecked with gray. And his eyes were black and stood out against his golden face. Rollow had not received any large scars like jasper yet. But he had many small scars and cuts everywhere. That was mainly because his enemies were never able to do much damage before he ended their life. He not only had amazing fighting skills but also his incredible size allowed him to easily overwhelm and overcome anyone who made the poor choice of fighting him. Rollow never said anything about where he learned to fight or where his size came from. Which left the alley cats to make all the rumors they wanted. And that is exactly what they did and did well. A gray cat walked up to them. “What’s the job today Tit? Also I like your kitty friend better than the last cat that you sent for me.” The gray cat said. Tit flicked his tail across the cat’s face. “Hey! I was the last cat he sent for you.” Rollow said “ I know that. But you can’t blame me for liking Lily more than you.” the gray cat said. His blue eyes shone. “Yes, I can!” Rollow said “No you cannot Tit had just woken you up and you know how grumpy you are after being woken up.” the gray cat said. “ Alright Luke, you win.” Rollow said laughing. “Alright if you two are done being kittens can we get to work?” Tit asked “ I second that.” Jasper said. they all laughed “ Alright we're on to phase two. all the cats that came to join need to be tested” Tit said “How many came forward?” Luke asked “forty” Jasper answered “Forty? We are going to make an army with forty cats assuming they all pass?” Luke said “Be quiet! Anything could be listening to us. This is not a private place. We won’t be doing anything if you tell the world first.” Tit growled. “Sorry” Luke said. “ If you want a private place you should not be in the alley” Lily walked out of the shadows. “And I may know of the perfect place.” “How long have you been there?” Tit said, hiding a smile. “Long enough to know I’m definitely not your kitty friend.” she mocked a hurt tone. Jasper, Luke, and Rollow laughed uncontrollably and even Tit chuckled. “But I really do know a place where you can talk alone.” she said “And why should we trust you?:” Jasper asked. Lily glared at him “ Because I’ve been watching you. I know everything you do. Every cat that came to you. Everything they did before and after that meeting. Every plane you have for your test, training, and attack. And I’ve been helping you.” she said coolly “You may have seen and heard some things but not everything and you have not been helping us.” Rollow said “Oh really? How come you only knew of two of the forty cats that came to you? You had never even seen them in the alley. How come every time you started a fight my friends and sometimes even me were nearby and stepped in to help you all the time? And how come you always found everything you needed for phase one almost as soon as you said you needed it out loud?” They all stared at her in shock “ I was always there. And I want your plan to work. But if you really think you four can do it alone you're even dumber than you look. I’ve even kept Tit’s sister away. Jewel follows him every time he leaves. Even I have not been able to keep her away all the time, she knows you're planning something.” Lily said “So the only reason we made this far is because you’ve been helping us?” Tit asked “ You’ve made it this far because it’s a good plan and you’ve had half the alley making sure it happens. And more and more cats are joining your side every day.” Lily answered “Half the alley?” Luke asked “Don’t forget how big the alley is there's still a lot of cats who want us dead.” Lily said “us? Who’s us?” Jasper asked Lily, laughing, answered “ One of your biggest mistakes was keeping this quiet. Most of the alley knows about it now and that’s why phase one was so easy for you. “Tit?” the cats turned to see Star dripping in blood a broken arrow in her side. “ Star! What happened?” Tit rushed to her “the king's men attacked us Jewel is gone and mother..mother is dead.” Star began to cry into her brother’s shoulder. Tit couldn't move, he couldn’t speak, mother was dead.
Please note this chapter has not had any editing yet :)
I'm in a writing club, so I write little bits here and there. I'm in the process of developing an OC world, where I have a variety of OCs that I write short stories, dialogues, etc for. That means I don't have to do character development every time I write something! XDI have a tendency to write humor into everything because I like making people smile or laugh (so I very rarely write angst lol). I'm also working on improving my dialogue so that it sounds natural. I'm also developing speech patterns for each character. For instance, the children actually talk like children, not educated college students. Maybe give one person a stutter, another the habit of saying 'like' a lot. Someone could have the habit of trailing off mid-sentence, while someone else could have a particular word that they use a lot. Things like that!
Ok so do you want to join the group or like I send the docs with all the chapters??
Sarah wrote: "Ok so do you want to join the group or like I send the docs with all the chapters??"Um... What?
Lol sorry that didn’t make sense. I’m like working on something with werewolves and powers and I have a couple of chapters on a group I created on GR so.... or I can send the link to my docs with my work
Ohh that's really cool! idk I just showed up lol But I imagine it would be fine :)
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Do share your group! I am sure people interested would like to join!
@RushaliOOPS SORRY I DIDNT REPLY! I want on GR for a while ahah.. ok so umm you can see my chapters on WattPad it’s called “the snakes awakening” or u can search my account which is boozysarah
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I really like it Savana! Good work.. would love to read more and know where you are going to take this story :-)
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That's just my opinion though ofc, it's great and I don't write, so I can't be the critical judge here...lol
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I see what you mean. I will see what I can do about him narrating the story!"
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I'm in the middle of publishing my book and would love to post a teaser chapter!! Let me know what you think!CHAPTER 1
What happens when you leave a baby alone in a room with a wild dog?
The baby dies. It gets eaten, or bitten and infected. But regardless of the process, the outcome is still the same. Death and bloodshed.
Humanity is much like that baby. Squabbling, stumbling over her own two feet, crying that they cannot do anything for themselves. In this situation, the wild dogs also represent humanity. Constantly thwarting her own efforts at success and posing a constant threat to itself.
Why, you ask, am I saying this? Because it is true. You listen to me and you hear my truth ringing in your hearts like the revelation it is. I also say this, because, in this situation, there is also a solution.
How do you calm and discipline an ungrateful and troublesome baby? How do you tame a wild dog so it is no longer a threat?
Easy; an adult. Someone who can take charge to ensure both the well-being of the baby and the dog. Someone to simultaneously discipline and babysit the infant, and to punish and tame the dog.
That is why I am here.
If anyone would be interested, I'm creating a Groupchat on Instagram with my book account to talk books and whatnot and get to know each other better! Drop your handle if you want me to add you! If this is against the group guidelines, please let me know and I will take this comment down immediately, thaks!
I'm interested... @kavya_meghwani that's my acc
heyy this teaser chapter was really good... i like to write as well... and i think ur book is gonna be great...it appears so by wht i just read.
Abigail wrote: "I'm in the middle of publishing my book and would love to post a teaser chapter!! Let me know what you think!CHAPTER 1
What happens when you leave a baby alone in a room with a wild dog?
The ba..."
This is going to be an amazing book! What I just read, it certainly has my attention!
I have some different writing things, here's a link to all of my writing: https://www.goodreads.com/story/list/...Also, I'm working on a book, the going is painfully slow, but should I post it in my creative writing?
i really liked ur poems....u should probably open a blog or a Instagram page or smthinnn for it... it's amazinn
