❀The Never-ending TBR❀ {You Are Loved} discussion

Y'all, I just found out that we don't have a chat thread! O_O

hey can you tell me if my poem is good?

Yes, if you share it with us.

alright cool here it is
title: the difference-black lives matter
by: me

let us all be better
let it be our safe place where we get letters
let it be where every mans the same
and where every man came
seeking shelter and a roof over every man today
that don't have anywhere to stay
that hide in the dark
and can't make their mark
them who are afraid of their own shadow
and no one will feel sympathy or sorrow
for every black man could not play away
cause their scared of the next day to day
and we don't care what happens to them in the years
cause we're the hunters and their the deer's
for every black man that won't come and play
it is still the same today
for we're on a boat in which we sing and laugh
and they sat bored on that raft
when they try to rise
we rose back in cries
for we did care where they sit
and if they rose they're hit
so they can't have pride
cause we never chose their side
for we get bikes and go race
but they just sit, cause they know they have a case
for every food they ate
we would always hate
for they care what they wear
and we would called them out and swear
for they had a prize to win
but be did nothing but sin
for america isn't the same
since the time where every man came
for now i will change that today
cause i am that one man that stands out everyday
for i go to any race and ask them to come out and play

-cause black lives matter

Hi Taylor!!

Taylor wrote: "hey can you tell me if my poem is good?"

Please share it here and Id love to give you some advice! https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...

@Taylor Evans it's a great poem!!

Taylor wrote: "alright cool here it is
title: the difference-black lives matter
by: me

let us all be better
let it be our safe place where we get letters
let it be where every mans the same
and where every man c..."

its great
i believe you have already shared it tho!

Taylor I said hello to you :(

Since we are sharing poems, here's my poem of today!

Title: Still Friends?
By: Cloudyxoxo

Note: this poem expresses what I felt at the moment and may be exaggerated/partially not true/dramatic

Are we still friends?
Can you help me answer that?
Because I truly don't know
not anymore.

We used to talk with each other
every single day
for hours upon hours without end.
But in just a few days,
that slowly faded,
into a, "How are you?"
every day.
And two days after that,
even that little bit we had left
faded
into nothingness.

We used to comfort each other,
made sure the other was okay.
That faded as well.
Sometimes,
I thought of you as a stranger
and lied about how I felt.
I said that I was fine
and that everything was alright.
But what I meant was
that I felt unbearable pain
and wanted the world
to end.

We used to have fun together,
and laugh until our cheeks were red
with happiness and love.
Until that faded,
when you said you needed "space."
Afterwards,
after you accepted me again
and I thought all was fine,
you betrayed me
and accused me
for stuff I never said.
Stuff I'd never done.

And that hurt.
That hurt like hell.
How you just guessed
that I was the villain
and didn't think
before you spoke.
before you accused.

I felt like
I just got thrown out
with the garbage
by my own family.
I cry.
But it's useless and faint.
I pound.
But I'm too weak to be heard.
I scream.
But my voice is broken,
and won't make a sound.
Then, the cycle starts over
and I start crying
Again.

Somehow,
I escaped the truck
and
as I sit under a tree,
I think...
Life is miserable
without you.
Like a girl
without a family.
Like a flower
that doesn't bloom.
Like leaves
under someone's boots.
I would trade my life
if anyone offers anything,
at this moment.
I promise you,
I will
without a flinch.

Okay,
maybe not yet,
but I'm that close,
to leaving this world,
and giving up.

Let me ask you these last words
this last time...

Do you care for me enough
to save
our friendship?
To save us?
Are we
still
friends?

Mrunal wrote: "Taylor I said hello to you :("

LMAO its like, where are you...why dont you say hello back?

thanks if i did share it im sorry but when i did i had to delete it cause i miss placed it

Actually maybe she got confused as there aretwo Taylors...

im myself am suprised that u guys think that it is good because i get a lot of doubt

Taylor {This dump is our hotel?} wrote: "Mrunal wrote: "Taylor I said hello to you :("

Which Taylor?"

You.

oh sorry hello my notifications don't pop up that fast

꧁☁ᴄʟᴏᴜᴅʏ☁꧂ wrote: "Title: Still Friends?
By: Cloudyxoxo

Note: this poem expresses what I felt at the moment and may be exaggerated/partially not true/dramatic

Are we still friends?
Can you help me answer that?
Beca..."

how is my poem? LOL
the taylor thing is confusing

Your poem is great!

We should do something to distinguish between them...

LOL wdym
like i get what you are saying
but what you are saying has two different meanings

distinguish my other poems with this or with taylor evan's poem

Distinguish between the two Taylors

hey cloudy ur poem is awesome if i say so myself which is rare so when i say its awesome i mean it and same goes for everyone else

Mrunal wrote: "Distinguish between the two Taylors"

ohh okay ik

taylor (dump is our...)=tay
and
taylor evans=taylor

maybe

Taylor wrote: "hey cloudy ur poem is awesome if i say so myself which is rare so when i say its awesome i mean it and same goes for everyone else"

thank you taylor!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wow
tay and mackenzie
totally diff names
LOL

Tay is fine with me.

same here
tay!

sup tay how r u

pfttt LOL

if it makes it easier my nick name that everyone called me is Evan

noice
okay evan

yes ma'am

hey cloudy what grade u in

sorry curiosity

just asking cause ur really smart

Can I just say my brother decided to eat his orange with a flipping STRAW and it’s stressing me out

THE SLURP NOISES

How do eat an orange with a straw??

I'm curious...

Should I Google it??

He peeled a bit from the top, then literally just stuck a straw in it

He says it works

Ummm... I feel a little strange now that I know that....

😂

XD

lol

HELLO YALL

Ello on phone and typing so slow waaa

hi

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