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Hi! I hope someone else might be struggling with their author bio right now... I've love both advice on my draft and to help anyone who is looking for feedback!

Current draft:
After one too many steps down the writing book road, J.L. Kegley is thrilled and terrified to present The Famine Princess, Book 1 in the Tales of Tamen trilogy. If J.L. isn’t climbing a mountain or dreaming about flying around the world, you can find J.L. around her sweet as moonflowers rescue dog. J.L. says it’s the best book ever written after a fire, before a job change, published on a Tuesday night under a full moon. No really, J.L. said it. Follow the adventure at www.mywebsiteisacompletemess

I'd love to read your bio!

J.L.

My current author bio is as follows:
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Dale E. Lehman is a writer, veteran software developer, amateur astronomer, and bonsai artist in training. He principally writes mysteries, science fiction, and humor. In addition to his novels, his writing has appeared in Sky & Telescope and on Medium.com. With his wife Kathleen he owns and operates the imprint Red Tales. They have five children, six grandchildren, and two feisty cats. At any given time, Dale is at work on several novels and short stories.
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At one point, I had a mention of what specifically I was working on, but I had to change it every time I published a new book. Eventually I got tired of that and made it generic enough that I wouldn't have to change it, at least not for that reason. So instead of using it as a marketing tool for a specific book, I use it to let people know a few interesting (I hope!) things about me.

Carole P. Roman is the award-winning author of over fifty children's books. Whether it's pirates, princesses, and spies, or discovering the world around us, her books have enchanted educators, parents, and her diverse audience of children. She hosts a blog radio program called Indie Authors Roundtable and is one of the founders of the magazine, Indie Author's Monthly. She's been interviewed twice by Forbes Magazine. Carole has co-authored two self-help books. Navigating Indieworld: A Beginners Guide to Self-Publishing and Marketing with Julie A. Gerber, and Marketing Indieworld with both Julie A. Gerber and Angela Hausman. She published Mindfulness for Kids with J. Robin Albertson-Wren. The Big Book of Silly Jokes for Kids: 800+ Jokes! has reached the number one best-selling book on all of Amazon.
She writes adult fiction under the name Brit Lunden and is currently helping to create an anthology of the mythical town of Bulwark, Georgia with a group of indie authors. She lives on Long Island near her children and grandchildren.