I would love some feedback. The last section is a bit rough. Organization and tense are not my forte. I will give feedback on anyone's work if they want.
Good to see you're still at Rachel. I wrapped up "The Apocalypse and You" a few weeks ago and am already working on my next story. I'll try to look over your new pages this weekend.
I would love some feedback. The last section is a bit rough. Organization and tense are not my forte. I will give feedback on anyone's work if they want.