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Unauthorized Access (Lightspeed Sept. 2016) by An Owomoyela (March 2021h
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I liked the story and I liked how the diversity of gender and neurodiversity was included without the story being *about* that. I also learned some things about tech and hacking.
I also appreciated the ending (view spoiler)

Last year's short fiction challenge turned into a habit. Now reading a least one short fiction story a day and like finding new sources/authors.


* Like y'all upthread, I liked the way Aedo's neurodivergence was worked into the narrative, in the way she communicated and in how she thought about her interactions.
* As someone who does not know much about hacking, I liked the metaphors Aedo used when explaining to Cadaares what she did (and how that differed from what people thought she did), and then I was amused when it turned out she did end up having to physically break into a building.
* And on a worldbuilding note, the beauty salon name FASHION: Real World Incoming! made me laugh.
I really enjoyed the writing and character building here, but am a bit miffed at the "sketch" quality of the story. I was sucked in, and was hoping there would be some sort of resolution, rather than what feels like the end of a first chapter of a book se didn't get to writing fully yet.

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