Free book editing/beta reading discussion

Hello, everyone, I'm Arshdeep and have just gotten over with the first draft of my high fantasy novel which is about 110K words. Romance forms some part of the story. Anyone keen on reading mystical creatures, magical communities, and quests is welcome to offer their services.

Blurb of the story:

Cressida Marfoiden is a Stellar, and will never dare to step into the Lunar territory for she has always been taught to steer clear of them. Such searing enmity, but one day when she is practicing her sword in a forest, she heals an injured Lunar, and in the process, accidentally forges a bond with him against her sister's will.


Two lands divided by an ancient rift, but when a single bond pushes two people to perform these deadly Rites, they have no choice but to face the terrors and risks that come with them.

And Cressida cannot turn down this offer, for she has only one choice: Perform the Rites, or be dead.

I'd prefer if more focus was given to the following things:

a) Plot holes
b) Character depths
c) Inconsistencies

Anyone willing to lend out a helping hand may reach out to me on my Goodreads PM or e-mail me at the following address so that we can see if we'd make a good team to work on my book.

E-mail: anshkhalsa45@gmail.com