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I do not think that it's impossible to write a genuinely good novel like that, but the truth is that most of it is not worth reading. These authors' problem is that they try, and fail, to immitate Jane Austen, or what they think Jane Austen is, or what they think their readers think Jane Austen is.
The result is that these novels are very stylized. They disappoint because they are doubly not genuine: they are not genuine Jane Austen novels, because after all, these books are written by Jane Austen; but they also disappointing for not being genuine because one gets the feeling that they are not the best novel that these authors themselves could have written, if they were not trying so hard to be Jane Austen.

I do not think that it's impossible to write a genuinely good novel like that, but the truth is that most of it is not ..."
Juan Manuel, I agree with just about all you said. I have read a few and have been disappointed. The worst ones for me is the plagiarized ones. Let's just lift Jane's dialogue right into our story! It is an alternate version of P&P, S&S, MP so lets use the real text and go from there!
And you are probably right, many could write a better book if they would be themselves.

Yes, I know I went from agreeing with Juan to fan fic which is not what you are talking about. Sorry.
I still agree with Juan.

In a similar vein, I really liked the book Pride, Prejudice, and Other Flavors by Sonali Dev. It’s set in modern-day California but doesn’t simply retell the story; it’s a much more complex novel and part of a family saga. And it makes you think about the themes of the original by virtue of what it changes—for instance, the Darcyish character is female and the Elizabethish character is male, which makes you think about class and gender in different ways.
In both of these examples, the reader’s knowledge of Austen’s novels enriches their relationship with the modern work. They’re like palimpsests, texts with a different text underlying the one on the surface. And that practice has a long history in literature—James Joyce’s Ulysses, anyone?
Similarly, I would push back a bit on the characterization of Austenesque fiction that uses Austen’s own narrative and dialogue as “plagiarism.” They would be plagiarism if the intent was to deceive. Some are just exploiting the Austen name to sell books. But I think the intent is usually very different—to extend the experience of reading her books in one way or another. Many writers, I agree, have a very limited grasp of what they are reading when they read an Austen novel, so the results they achieve are very limited. But some are celebrating the beauties of her language or revealing hidden aspects of the original by telling the same events from a different character’s point of view. Modern adaptations that thoughtfully use Austen’s words are seeking to show the reader the modern world through Austen’s eyes, the way a sci-fi story set in the present but told from the point of view of an alien might do. The better ones are thoughtful fiction building on a common vocabulary to add layers to their meaning.

Perhaps plagiarism was a poor word choice. I do not believe there is an intent to deceive. Partially it was a cooment on Juan Manuel's assertion that many of these writers would write better in their own words. Also, sometimes, I find it lazy - skipping the hard work of finding the perfect words and sentence structure. I am all in favor of quoting JA in conversation when the perfect oppurtunity comes along.
I am not against telling JA stories from another characters point of view per se. I just have not found one that I think is really good.
Jane Austen in Scarsdale is a pretty decent modern Persuasion.

Of the various attempts to tell P&P from Darcy’s point of view, I liked Pamela Aidan’s (at least vols. 1 and 3, I never reread vol. 2 after the first time) as well as Stanley Hurd’s. I remember rather liking Jane Fairfax by Joan Aiken when I read it decades ago, but that might be just because I always liked The Watsons better than Emma and the character of Jane Fairfax reminds me a bit of Emma Watson. And there’s a two?-volume retelling of Emma from Mr. Knightley’s point of view that interested me—it wasn’t overwhelmingly Austenesque but then Mr. Knightley’s world is very different from Emma’s, so that seemed appropriate. It broadened the range of all the things Emma Woodhouse was oblivious to! 😁
That said, I tend to like modern Austen-based stories better than period ones, both because the writers of period stories so often get the manners and sensibilities wrong and because the modern stories have to focus more on theme and idea. It’s actually quite a challenge to fit Austen’s words smoothly into a modern setting, if I may say so as someone who perpetrated that atrocity.
Have any of you read Molly Greeley’s books, The Clergyman's Wife: A Pride & Prejudice Novel (about Charlotte Collins) and The Heiress: The Revelations of Anne de Bourgh? Both are well written and take on Austen in interesting and creative ways. There is some worthy Austenesque fiction out there!

I have enjoyed plenty of contemporary writers of Regency fiction. I don't read much fan fiction with the exception of Stephanie Barron who writes convincingly in Jane Austen's voice. She's the only one who can do it though. Shades of Milk and Honey was written with a Regency dictionary so there are no glaring anachronistic phrases which is refreshing. Other authors don't try but write nice, heartwarming, charming stories.
Did anyone see the short film of Mr. Malcolm's List? I'm going to pull it up on YouTube and watch it this weekend.

Clueless is a fun movie. Lost in Austen is fun when you accept the weirdness and just let it go.

I have enjoyed some of the professional/published Austen fanfic, but mostly alternative tellings, I've never read a sequel where the author had the skill to pull it off.
Films that are modern retellings I take for fun, they're honest in what they are, instead of bad adaptations that 'tell the story the author really wanted to tell'.

Of the various attempts to tell P&P from Darcy’s point of view, I liked Pamela Aidan’s (at least vols. 1 ..."
Perhaps these are the Knightley books you were thinking of(I love love love them)....



Did you mean, " they come off as bodice rippers " to be critical of The Flame and the Flower?



I wasn't calling anyone out in particular, just expressing my disappointment in what they consider romance.

I just bought and read Barbara Cornthwaite’s two volume set of George Knightley Esquire. Thank you for the recommendation! I really loved the story from Mr. Knightley’s point of view. He certainly does live in a different world from Emma. But it was very intriguing (and romantic) to watch his friendship with her become something else entirely.

I just bought and read Barbara Cornthwaite’s two volume set of George Knightley Esquire. Thank you for the recommendation! I really loved the story from Mr. Knightley’s point of ..."
Yeah!!! Team Knightley :)

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That's lost me, straight off!!!
That said, I did see one episode of Bridgerton and after a while one goes 'colour blind', I agree. Also, of course, the author (screenwriters?) have set it as an Alternative History/Counterfactual etc, 'as if' England in the Regency did actually have a non-white (Afro-Caribbean/Indian) aristocracy who were socially acceptable in white circles. It's actually quite a poignant idea...(ie, given what 'reality' was at the time!)


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That's lost me, straight off!!!
That said, I did see one episode of Bridgerton and after a while one goes 'colour blind', I agree. Also..."
I'm Ok with color blind.
Bridgerton is not color blind. What I have a problem with is when the characters say "The queen did so much for our people" and then just drop it without explanation.
Malcolm's List was inspired by Hamilton and Hamilton works.
Malcol'ms list does it one better than Birdgerton. Mr. Malcolm speaks Yoruba. “I was conscious of not color-washing the story,” Dìrísù says. “I didn’t want this to just be a white character played by a person of color. I wanted him to feel like a real, lived-in person.”
Pinto, who is Indian, was inspired by what Dìrísù did and followed suit, doing research on the South Asian community in England at the time and asking to tweak little bits of dialogue. The film paid homage to her culture with the costuming, threading “hints of paisley” into her wardrobe, Pinto says.
https://www.vanityfair.com/hollywood/...
I'm interested and I could probably go to the theater when no one else is there but it's SO expensive, I'll probably wait for it to come on TV.


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Yes, I see what you mean - but I do think Bridgerton does work in its own alternative-history way.

I think you are either 'into' it, or you're not.



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