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Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer | 10083 comments On that outstanding Orwell Prize shortlist


Paul Fulcher (fulcherkim) | 13392 comments Was this the one you failed to mention as part of our annual tradition.


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer | 10083 comments Yes absolutely. Proud to keep that record up.


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David | 3885 comments I’m eager to understand the Mel’s boss reference.


Paul Fulcher (fulcherkim) | 13392 comments 464 pages. Seriously. Does the author not read the Spectator?


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer | 10083 comments Feels a very topical book - given the election results over the weekend.


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Tommi | 659 comments Her debut really did not work for me, I appear to have given it two stars plus one support star for a young debut novelist.

That was 400 pages too but had a lot of short vignettes and a lot of white space. Don’t know how it is with this one.


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer | 10083 comments FWIW any review of this observed …

This is the author’s second novel after the intriguing debut novel 2019 “Stubborn Archivist” which as well as various book prize recognitions (Dylan Thomas longlist, Desmond Elliott shortlist, Observer Debut Novelists feature, Sunday Times Young Writer of the Year shortlist) also contributed to her recognition by the FT as one of the “planet’s 30 most exciting young people” across art, books, music, tech and politics – the political angle also recognising her activism and her involvement in boosting the youth vote in the 2017 General Election via the use of a bot on Tinder which encouraged voter registration and tactical anti-Conservative voting.

(For a different take on the ethics of the latter – see https://www.wired.co.uk/article/tinde...)

The author’s first book had a distinct style – one that was on one level experimental but in a way which was far less conscious and more natural than much experimental literary fiction. Non-chronological, copious blank space, a mix of first/second/third person, of different points of view, of conventional prose and fragmentary prose poetry, and perhaps most distinctly in the way the text switched in a natural flowing way from English to occasional and typically untranslated Portugese. It was also a book which aimed at lightness and avoiding the “oppresive weight of the [linear. Realist] British novel” but where I felt the lightness, and the sense of a debut novel searching for a narrative voice was perhaps a weakness.

This book I believe has exactly what one looks for (but so often does not find) in a second novel – something which retains the distinctiveness and strengths of the author’s debut novel (perhaps a little less switch of person, and a more obvious chronological signposting but with more developed use of Portuguese) but adds a greater conviction of touch and a weightier and more purposeful story to make for a really strong and accomplished read.


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Tommi | 659 comments It really sounds like a step-up from the debut then. Should give it a go for sure.


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer | 10083 comments Well I felt so but others may disagree.


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Hugh (bodachliath) | 4398 comments Mod
This one is currently unavailable to order at Blackwells and full price (£16.99) at Waterstones (which makes me wonder whether Waterstones blocked Blackwells from offering a discount), so it may be a while before I get round to it.


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Paul Fulcher (fulcherkim) | 13392 comments There is an Author’s Note at the back with list of things that “did really happen”.

One of the first reads:

In 2010 the Labour Party proposed a bill to raise university tuition fees from £3000/year to £6000-9000/year. This sparked mass protests across the UK. However, the bill passed and came into effect in 2011.

Am I misremembering? Labour set up the Browne report that looked at student fees, but the report didn’t come out till after the 2010 election. The new Coalition government proposed the increase in min fee to 6,000 and cap increase to 9,000 (Browne’s report actually recommended that fees were uncapped), and Labour voted against it.

Also odd coincidence to get to page 46 and see council workers in a park in Mile End planting bulbs - that’s what I (and my team at work) spent Friday doing.


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer | 10083 comments I think you will work out if you have not already Paul that the author and her characters consider New Labour an extreme right wing party - so I don’t think she would distinguish them from the Coalition government.


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Paul Fulcher (fulcherkim) | 13392 comments Yes I have to say that this is definitely falling into the dislikable characters bucket for me as someone who think Boris was a bit of a lefty.

That link you posted below is quite eye opening. I think many assume social media manipulation of elections in favour of Putin apologists is a right wing US thing, not a left wing UK one.

It is raising some interesting questions for me though on a topic I always find fascinating - the morality of political protest outside of the democratic system. In one sense it is undemocractic - one person one vote means your opinion shouldn’t be any louder because you shout louder. On the other hand
- as one of the characters says, firms and economic actors get things done via quiet lobbying and protest gives the voiceless a voice (eg I am having dinner with a senior recent ex cabinet minister tonight)
- in reality much social change comes this way first only then the ballot box.

But then how about protests like, say, marching on the Capitol because you believe an election was manipulated?

This line on the Dilma impeachment was a good one, from the Brazilian character to some Brits. As that is exactly what the stop Brexit campaign did - tried to overturn a democratic decision by technical means:

Their motivations are political - a technicality is not a reason to remove a democratically elected president. You would not countenance such a thing here


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WndyJW If this is political I have zero interest. I live in a constant state of low key anxiety about the future of so-called liberal democracies as it is.


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David | 3885 comments In what sense was Boris Johnson a lefty? I mean that as a sincere question.

I have doubts that anyone marched on the US capitol because they genuinely thought the election was manipulated. They just didn't like the results.


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Roman Clodia | 675 comments David wrote: "In what sense was Boris Johnson a lefty? I mean that as a sincere question."

He wasn't and isn't!


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Paul Fulcher (fulcherkim) | 13392 comments Well Johnsononmics in terms of public spending on Covid furlough schemes and printing money to fund it we’re ironically rather closer to the Labour party’s policy than his own stated economic views.

Although there was a once in several generations pandemic.

It was a bit of a glib remark though in terms of my views - although it was the view of much of his party.

And David my point is the attempt to overturn Brexit here was largely not liking the result. And would Democrats really resist an opportunity to impeach Trump if it came along?

Wendy this is I think a very political book although more about the need to be politically active.


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Roman Clodia | 675 comments Personally, I'd see that more as BJ's complete lack of integrity or ability to hold to any kind of conviction, and his almost psychotic need to be seen to be popular and liked.

I like the sound of this book.


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Alwynne Roman Clodia wrote: "Personally, I'd see that more as BJ's complete lack of integrity or ability to hold to any kind of conviction, and his almost psychotic need to be seen to be popular and liked.

I like the sound o..."


Absolutely R. C. although compared to the current cabal he's positively socialist!


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Paul Fulcher (fulcherkim) | 13392 comments The second greatest PM of UK since WW2for me, but I do seem to be in a minority in that view.

Which means I am not exactly enjoying this book.


message 23: by Alwynne (new)

Alwynne A minority of one, perhaps? On paper this should probably appeal but I read an extract and wasn't keen, so will await your review.


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Paul Fulcher (fulcherkim) | 13392 comments Or a majority of 80!


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Paul Fulcher (fulcherkim) | 13392 comments So far this is getting bogged down on South London school day remembrance - then me, and Shaz and Jess smoked a spliff on the 57 bus type stuff.


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Alwynne I would never have had the courage to do that on the 53 which is the bus route through South London I remember most, so sounds as if this will just make me think my wasted youth wasn't sufficiently wasted!

As for the majority, those were the heady days of yore, when a rippling shock of blonde hair, and an OE accent could seem like the keys to fame and wealth beyond the dreams of avarice...


message 27: by Alwynne (new)

Alwynne Although I'd love to know what happened to the wallpaper.


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Paul Fulcher (fulcherkim) | 13392 comments The true sign of a properly misspent youth is of course trashing a restaurant (then getting daddy to send a cheque to cover damages) or getting intimately acquainted with a pig’s head.

Or running through a field of wheat.


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Paul Fulcher (fulcherkim) | 13392 comments On the wallpaper Liz was pretty clear - on the grounds the money had been spent she has left it up.


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Paul Fulcher (fulcherkim) | 13392 comments Two 57 buses have just driven past me in either direction. This novel is oddly geographically resonant at the same time as it is politically alienating.


endrju | 357 comments Yeah, the teenage section is quite a let down after the really strong beginning. Hopefully it'll pick up.


message 32: by Alwynne (new)

Alwynne Paul wrote: "The true sign of a properly misspent youth is of course trashing a restaurant (then getting daddy to send a cheque to cover damages) or getting intimately acquainted with a pig’s head.

Or running..."


I'd forgotten May's wheat fields! But not alas the pig.


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Paul Fulcher (fulcherkim) | 13392 comments Actually given the discussion on Diego Garcia the main character has just started at an East London Uni that may well be, or based on, Goldsmiths. And all the fresher week events are in “Dalston, Horton and Shoreditch”.

Although here I think this is heading to more of a conclusion of get out of that bubble and get on the streets.


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Alwynne Paul wrote: "Actually given the discussion on Diego Garcia the main character has just started at an East London Uni that may well be, or based on, Goldsmiths. And all the fresher week events are in “Dalston, H..."

Possibly although quite likely UEL given the locations. There are strong links between the more politically minded/left-wing academics at UEL and Goldsmiths, Jeremy Gilbert at UEL, for example, close to Mark Fisher when he was at Goldsmiths, and there are political discussion groups made up of academics from these and other universities in London.


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WndyJW I think I’ll skip this.


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Paul Fulcher (fulcherkim) | 13392 comments May well be UEL. I know East England universities rather better than East London.


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Alwynne Paul wrote: "May well be UEL. I know East England universities rather better than East London."

Although it looks as if she was at Oxford and post-grad UCL:

https://ucl.academia.edu/YaraRodrigue...


message 38: by Alwynne (last edited Oct 10, 2022 04:28PM) (new)

Alwynne Yep, Oxford English degree than post-grad UCL, so presumably not totally autobiographical?


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer | 10083 comments The parts in Brazil are where this takes off I think.


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Paul Fulcher (fulcherkim) | 13392 comments Hopefully as so far it is very tedious.


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David | 3885 comments My order of this was abruptly cancelled due to lack of availability. It must be the Goldsmiths bump.


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Neil 130 pages in and I think I agree with Paul - it’s not very exciting yet. I also feel I am missing stuff because I don’t know London.


message 43: by Neil (new) - rated it 2 stars

Neil I should explain that last comment. Most books I read are about places I don’t know very well but somehow this one is making me feel that that is failing on my part.


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Alwynne Neil wrote: "I should explain that last comment. Most books I read are about places I don’t know very well but somehow this one is making me feel that that is failing on my part."

Couldn't it just as easily be the novel? We all read translated fiction that is based in places we've never been, or historical settings we can't ever visit, and yet manage to get a lot out of it


message 45: by Neil (new) - rated it 2 stars

Neil Yes, agreed. Like most of us, I normally love reading about places I haven’t been to or could never go to - it’s one of the joys of reading. But the London stuff here is putting me off the book instead.


endrju | 357 comments Indeed. There's too much of very local stuff, which is supposed to mean something (class difference?) but it's rarely clearly stated and it's mostly lost to non-Londoners.


message 47: by David (last edited Oct 11, 2022 06:56AM) (new)

David | 3885 comments Based on these comments, I'm surprised to see this book on the Goldsmiths shortlist. Political fiction, yes. But it doesn't sound innovative to me.


endrju | 357 comments There are poems. And lots of white space.


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Paul Fulcher (fulcherkim) | 13392 comments Well the Goldsmiths does love London set books.

And it is very resonant for Londoners, as mentioned I’ve been to both a park in Mile End and walked past 57 buses in the last week.

Oddly though haven’t been on any anti Tory or Brexit marches but had dinner with a senior recently-ex Conservative cabinet minister last night instead. So the politics isn’t working so well for me.


message 50: by Alwynne (new)

Alwynne I'm currently reading another novel that, from the sound of things, overlaps with this one so makes it less likely I'll try it, An Experiment in Leisure by Anna Glendenning who was an editor at And Other Stories and has connections to The White Review. Similar themes around place, class, politics.


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