Free book editing/beta reading discussion

The wind is blowing, the leaves rustle, and whispers of adventure fill the air. Join the Mossgrove Detectives as they navigate their way through the twists and turns of the Money Maze. A mystery that will test their bravery, wits, and cunning, and they just may learn a thing or two. They are ready to solve puzzles, decipher clues, and unravel the secrets of the maze, all while discovering life lessons along the way. Will the young detectives be able to find their way out? Only time will tell... and you, beta reader, will be one of the first to find out!

I have an epub file ready to send you: I can be reached here or at j.j.piddleton@gmail.com

This is my first foray into the world of authorship.
I am looking for HONEST feedback.
The book is 5 chapters and short at less than 4000 words.
Vivid illustrations

It is written so be read by a child up to 14 years old, or as a bed time story for ages 5 and up (1 chapter per night)
If you feel like offering editorial services, that would be appreciated

Correction the email is jjpiddleton@gmail.com