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Chasing the Wendigo, A Justin Case adventure trilogy.
A locked room whodunit; a mysterious disappearance; and hunt for lost treasure.

This sounds pretty interesting, loved to read and review! kyannbarton3@gmail.com thanks

Thank you, Kyann, for offering to Beta Read, Chasing the Wendigo. Just to be clear, this is not a supernatural book.
A pdf copy has been emailed to you.
Cheers,
James D. A. Terry

James wrote: "Chasing the Wendigo, A Justin Case adventure trilogy.
A locked room whodunit; a mysterious disappearance; and hunt for lost treasure."

Hi James,

I'm interested in providing a beta read of your manuscript. Please see my offer to writers and authors for the month of June below my note, here. Kindly message me if you have any questions.

Kind regards
Luculle

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Thank you for offering, Luculle, unfortunately, I am not able to avail myself of your services.
Best wishes on your endeavours,
James D. A. Terry

James wrote: "Thank you for offering, Luculle, unfortunately, I am not able to avail myself of your services.
Best wishes on your endeavours,
James D. A. Terry"

Hi James,

Thank you, no worries. After I sent you the message, I noted that your book is already published and available on Amazon. If I may offer a few suggestions:

1. Request book reviews. Beta reading is a process meant for pre-publication, even before editing and proofreading.
2. It may be beneficial to have the book available on Amazon in Kindle format as well.
3. If it is a great story it deserves a well-designed book cover. The cover of a book is mostly what attracts and interests readers before they read the blurb and follow through with a purchase.

Good luck with your book, Chasing the Wendigo.

Kind regards
Luculle

Hi Luculle,
I unpublished all of my books and have added more than 9,000 words and made many changes to the original publication. I am looking to re-publish and that is why I am looking for Beta Readers.
Thank you, kindly, for your advice.
Cheers,
James

James wrote: "Hi Luculle,
I unpublished all of my books and have added more than 9,000 words and made many changes to the original publication. I am looking to re-publish and that is why I am looking for Beta Re..."

Hi James,

Fabulous. Try asking on the Beta Reader Group, here on Goodreads, if you are not already a member. See the link below for your convenience:

https://www.goodreads.com/group/show/...

Good luck.

Kind regards
Luculle

Hi Luculle,
Thank you for kind advice. I will, indeed,look into this group.
Kind Regards,
James