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Judith G (t swizzle version) | 367 comments Mod
Time for a poetry challenge- we have to have at least 3 members for it to go into affect, but regardless, this is the challenge:

Make a poem about school, something that captures the essence.
BUT
It can only be up to 10 lines
Happy writing,
-JUDITHG🫶🏻💜💙💙💕🎶


message 2: by ʀᴏᴄʜɪ (ʜɪᴀᴛᴜs) ♡, I'm a dinosaur rawr (new)

ʀᴏᴄʜɪ (ʜɪᴀᴛᴜs) ♡ (imeancamadarie) | 212 comments Mod
Maybe…
But for when?


message 3: by Molly (new)

Molly Obergefell | 26 comments 18 Years

It was safe, it was a danger zone.
It was predictable and erratic.
It was comfortable yet made me feel like crawling out of my skin.

It was never boring for me, but some would say it was.
It challenged me, it kept me sane, towards purpose, friendship, justice, love.

In all these contradictions, it was always there. “Now what?” I say, then answer, “The road below, the sky above.”


message 4: by Molly (new)

Molly Obergefell | 26 comments The draft was ten lines but then the format changed 🤦‍♀️


Judith G (t swizzle version) | 367 comments Mod
Molly wrote: "18 Years

It was safe, it was a danger zone.
It was predictable and erratic.
It was comfortable yet made me feel like crawling out of my skin.

It was never boring for me, but some would say it w..."

Yes, this is the type of stuff I’m looking for. Great job


Judith G (t swizzle version) | 367 comments Mod
Maybe I’ll right one too


message 7: by Molly (new)

Molly Obergefell | 26 comments Thanks guys!


message 8: by Molly (new)

Molly Obergefell | 26 comments I’d love to do another poetry challenge with y’all if you have any ideas for rules!


Judith G (t swizzle version) | 367 comments Mod
Yes! I’ll post one tomorrow hopefully


message 10: by Molly (new)

Molly Obergefell | 26 comments Thanks!


message 11: by .*zayda*. (last edited Jul 26, 2023 07:14AM) (new)

.*zayda*. warner-kavanagh-cyrus-cardan-hudson-wes's version | 21 comments idk what this is im making it up on the spot:

a glass prison where everyone sees me fail
"try harder" they say,
"but dont be a try hard"
"work smarter" they say
"but dont try to cheat the cause"
reach for what i want
yet be content with what i have?
you want me to strive for perfect
but then be okay when it turns out bad?
i think its time for this prison to shatter.


message 12: by Molly (new)

Molly Obergefell | 26 comments Wow that’s great!


message 13: by .*zayda*. (new)

.*zayda*. warner-kavanagh-cyrus-cardan-hudson-wes's version | 21 comments Srijan wrote: "I love it! And the part where you say it’s time to shatter out of it is my fav"

thank you sm!!


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