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Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer | 10083 comments 90 pages or so into this

So far have had a “I DECDIED TO BECOME BLIND”, “cellotape”, “she could have poured bleached into her eyes” and “no cars had past us on our way” (and I suspect others I have not spotted)

Has anyone else read this (perhaps I should say red this) - I am assuming this all has to be deliberate but not sure I understand why?


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Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer | 10083 comments I would say though that I am enjoying it so far.


Paul Fulcher (fulcherkim) | 13392 comments Is it a commentary on the inability of small presses to afford proof readers if people buy their books from Amazon or Waterstones? Although it is a bit disappointing if it is proof reading as small presses to tend to pride themselves on production quality - some of them have rather raised the bar on the high quality paperback form.

My copy of Cipher’s latest book Brainwryms arrived today with a link to a very nice Spotify playlist (Deftones, Nine Inch Nails and Slipknot amongst others).


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WndyJW That has to be intentional. Even a cursory twice over would have caught those.


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer | 10083 comments Having completed the book I dint see any indication they are deliberate but to be honest I think a lot of the book past (sic) me by


David | 3885 comments Inrested to see ur reveiw.


David | 3885 comments Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer wrote: "Not sure I understood this very much at all"

Same here. This was quite different than I was expecting. A lot more fun to read. A lot more Pepsi too.


David | 3885 comments There are several references to characters drinking Pepsi. One example of the unexpected.


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer | 10083 comments I had not really noticed that but brand names in books are an affectation that passes me by

This really was not my type of novel to be honest


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Paul Fulcher (fulcherkim) | 13392 comments The pop culture references in this one are great and lead me down a worm hole of research. I don't think it was brand names here so much as working class 1990s Cheshire culture - McDonalds, Neighbours, George Michael, The Sun etc.

I'll add some to the thread.

More generally I though this was really strong - could see it taking the prize.


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Paul Fulcher (fulcherkim) | 13392 comments Actually I can't add the links - we seem to back to Goodreads not allowing links in comments (why do they keep turning that blocker on and off!). So see my review instead: https://www.goodreads.com/review/show...

Contains links to Fin's music, photographs of the Cheshire Salt Mines and stories behind those mention in the novel (George Michael falling out of a car, the lady with the bleached eyes etc)


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Paul Fulcher (fulcherkim) | 13392 comments "Birdsfoot trefoil, the flower of revenge" from an Instragram page set up for an earlier version of the novel:

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A collapse in 1907 of the ground around the Cheshire salt mines, taken from a series of photos of the Lion Salt Works (same series as featured on page 78)

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A house in Castle Chambers, Castle Street, Northwhich suffering from subsidence (image dated 1890-99) and included in the novel (p204), from Cheshire Archives and Local Studies:

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Craig-McLachlan, who played Henry in Neighbours, appearing both as himself and in character in a self-made video when he was excluded from the Neighbours reunion:

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Elvis appears in the bottom of a McDonalds ketchup pot - wonderfully the person who took the photo didn't keep the evidence as she used the remnants of Elvis to season her last Chicken Nugget:

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The National Archives relocated to a Cheshire salt mine:

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The Centralia mine fire in Philidelphia:

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A plaque marking the 1966 Compton's Cafeteria Riot, which closes the novel:

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Paul Fulcher (fulcherkim) | 13392 comments That's what impresses me with this - in many respects it is historical fiction but told in a completely surreal and beautiful way.


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer | 10083 comments I found the prose often quite clunky


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer | 10083 comments Amazing links though Paul - you should offer your services to authors, I know Isabel felt your reviews improved their books.

What is the significance of Trefoil - doesn’t Man Eating Typewriter have a character called that?


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Paul Fulcher (fulcherkim) | 13392 comments It did symbolise revenge in Victorian times perhaps because of the small doses of cyanide it contains.


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Hugh (bodachliath) | 4398 comments Mod
Not sure I can add anything to the what it all means debate, but I really enjoyed this one and think it is very much a Goldsmiths book.


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer | 10083 comments The author just referenced Paul’s review in his New Statesman interview.


Gumble's Yard - Golden Reviewer | 10083 comments In fact there is even an embedded link to a Paul’s review in the article.

https://www.newstatesman.com/culture/...

That’s next level Paul.


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Paul Fulcher (fulcherkim) | 13392 comments That’s nice. I did rather like my link to the video about Henry so I’m pleased the author did.


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