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Mr. Nightingale's Diary: A Farce in One Act (hosted by Sam)

Because it is a one act farce, I am going to deviate a bit from our usual approach and encourage you to read this straight through once and try to imagine it as if you were seeing it on stage performed by a company of celebrity writers and amateur actors, with Charles Dickens playing the character of Mr. Gabblewig, a lovelorn soul whose suit to marry has been rejected by the girl's uncle, Mr. Nightingale. played by Dudley Costello, a Victorian journalist and writer. The foil in this play is a character Slap, using an alias, Mr. Flormiville and is played by Mark Lemon , co-author of the play and a very well known farce writer and founding editor of Punch. These primaries will all meet in the Water Lily hotel in Malvern Hills which was known for the supposed healing properties of its spring water with Wilkie Collins playing the landlord.
As you imagine the play try to think of what each actor might bring to their role to add to the humor.
Sharing our thoughts on this will be the goal of the first six days of our read. September 1-6. I will try and post something of how I imagined it each day and hope you will do the same because I may see things differently from you.
On September 7-8 we will discuss authorship and I will share some information on varied sources that give us the present play.
On September 9-10 we will discuss the water cure and how Dickens references it and other health related motifs in the play.
On September 11-12, we will discuss any other interesting elements associated with the play.
The final days of this topic shall be devoted to our feelings about the whole of our readings, what we thought of the dramas, or learned or anything generally related.
So I hope you will join me in exploring this last of our sunmmer reads.




I will be joining in, Sam. I love the creative way you are approaching the play. It nearly drove me wild to take No Thoroughfare in pieces, especially as Charles Dickens had Wilkie Collins re-format it as a play to be seen all at once.
Looking forward to the discussion!

For me to imagine this, I wanted to whet my appetite with a little more background information. Specifically, I wanted to be able to better picture a place and time, along with the occasion if there was one, and get a rough idea of the theater company, Thankfully, there is a lot of information on this play due to the scholarship of Leona Weaver Fisher in her book Lemon, Dickens, and Mr. Nightingale's Diary: A Victorian Farce which studies the play's origins and is helpful beyond measure. Unfortunately, I found little online about the author except from her bio from the back of the book. She was a professor of English at Georgetown University in Washington D.C. at the time of printing in 1988, and also authored " Mark Lemon's Farces on the 'Woman Question.' "
According to Ms. Fisher, the play premiered at Devonshire House, (Piccadilly, I presume) on May 27, 1851. One of these days, I will risk adding artwork but for now I am linking a Wikipedia article on Devonshire House with pictures for those interested.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Devonsh...
The play was to be an afterpiece to Edward Bulwer Lytton's "Not So Bad As We Seem," which had premiered previously and had already played to the Queen. We have spoken of Lytton in the past and despite a somewhat bad reputation his work developed to due to his association with the line, 'a dark and stormy night, he was a fine author and very popular in Dickens' time. The player's company consisted of a group of well known amateurs whose goal was to raise funds through productions for a new Guild of Literature and Art. originated by Dickens and Lytton. So we are going to be in an amateur theatrical setting in the well known Devonshire House, watching a who's who of of the literary elite having a bit of fun for a good cause. It is late May with predictable accompanying weather, and a good year for entertainment with the Great Exhibition having just started not far away with its spectacular Crystal Palace built for the occasion.
I am going to try and imagine this from a seat in the audience rather than as a director or writer, since I am not well-acquainted with the theater of the time. For that I want to send you to another link to a picture, (actually, a drawing of the performance of Lytton's play from a couple of weeks earlier than ours performed before the Queen.) I am using the Amazon link because the picture is copyrighted.
https://www.amazon.com/Private-Namate...
With our setting established, my next post will begin the play.
That's a fantastic engraving, and really captures the feel of the stage and setting - great find, thanks Sam! We commented in an earlier read how sad it was that Devonshire House has been demolished.
Oh just in case, to avoid confusion with similar names ...
the Devonshire House the plays were staged at is not where Charles Dickens lived in in 1839 to 1851 (the year this farce was produced). His address was 1 Devonshire Terrace https://www.londonremembers.com/subje...
and they were just about to move to Tavistock House.
the Devonshire House the plays were staged at is not where Charles Dickens lived in in 1839 to 1851 (the year this farce was produced). His address was 1 Devonshire Terrace https://www.londonremembers.com/subje...
and they were just about to move to Tavistock House.

The scene opens with a doorbell being rung "violently," according to the stage notes and offstage a voice is heard yelling for the landlord , a waiter,..."Somebody!!" obviously wanting help. Then our first player enters carrying a large amount of luggage. A second character enters and it is the landlord, Lithers. He is played by Wilkie Collins, but we don't see Wilkie Collins, the famous author, because the character is young man of 26 and that fame would come from works to be written many years ahead. the young man is made up to appear older, but the youth would show through and he invites our first player, named Tip, into the common room of the Water Lily Hotel. We do recognize the first character since it is the same actor who played the lead in the feature play we just saw and he is played by Augustus Egg. People would know of him if not outright recognize him for his family name and status. He is an artist and too will achieve quite some fame in years to come. He is about ten years older than the landlord character.
Lithers addresses Tip, calling him, "boy," and our farce instantly is begun. Tip is offended and now comes a playful verbal struggle as the two exchange power roles engaging in wordplay rife with misunderstanding and we are chuckling because of the obvious age and class difference between the two that reinforces the dialogue,
Now a new voice is heard from without calling for his "puppy, which answers to the name of Tip," and if we don't recognize the voice, we do anticipate it as the famous Boz, and this is confirmed as he enters the stage, probably to some applause, and here we will stop, continuing tomorrow with the entrance of Gabblewig, played by Charles Dickens.


I love your description Sam, and really felt I was there!
"He is played by Wilkie Collins, but we don't see Wilkie Collins, the famous author, because the character is young man of 26 and that fame would come from works to be written many years ahead. the young man is made up to appear older,"
This is a very good point! We are now in 1851, and the 3 youngish men Charles Dickens, Wilkie Collins (far younger of course) and Augustus Egg all had a very youthful appearance. I think I've posted before about their beard-growing competition (sorry- can't find it to link to!) when they went to Italy in 1853, just 2 years later.
Charles Dickens grew a moustache and ‘Newgate Fringe’ (hair under the chin). All three men were attempting to cultivate facial hair and Charles Dickens said:
“Collins’s moustache is gradually developing … He smooths it down over his mouth, in imitation of the present great Original …”
and compared Egg’s to those of the Witches in William Shakespeare's Macbeth. He also expressed chagrin that his valet had also begun to grow one. (Perhaps it was much more luxurious!)
John Forster disapproved, and called them a ‘hideous disfigurement’.
I remember from the recent exhibition about Charles Dickens and Wilkie Collins at Doughty Street, that they were so measly, that after a while all three shaved them off!
Here's more: https://blogs.bl.uk/untoldlives/2012/...
"He is played by Wilkie Collins, but we don't see Wilkie Collins, the famous author, because the character is young man of 26 and that fame would come from works to be written many years ahead. the young man is made up to appear older,"
This is a very good point! We are now in 1851, and the 3 youngish men Charles Dickens, Wilkie Collins (far younger of course) and Augustus Egg all had a very youthful appearance. I think I've posted before about their beard-growing competition (sorry- can't find it to link to!) when they went to Italy in 1853, just 2 years later.
Charles Dickens grew a moustache and ‘Newgate Fringe’ (hair under the chin). All three men were attempting to cultivate facial hair and Charles Dickens said:
“Collins’s moustache is gradually developing … He smooths it down over his mouth, in imitation of the present great Original …”
and compared Egg’s to those of the Witches in William Shakespeare's Macbeth. He also expressed chagrin that his valet had also begun to grow one. (Perhaps it was much more luxurious!)
John Forster disapproved, and called them a ‘hideous disfigurement’.
I remember from the recent exhibition about Charles Dickens and Wilkie Collins at Doughty Street, that they were so measly, that after a while all three shaved them off!
Here's more: https://blogs.bl.uk/untoldlives/2012/...

Sam, I absolutely love how you're bringing this to life!

Sam
You have captured the mood of the play perfectly. What fun it must have been to be in the audience and see this farce.
Such energy goes into a farce. Constant movement, fast witty dialogue, costume - and sex - changes by the actors.
It is so difficult to imagine any play. Plays are meant to be seen; even more so a farce. I agree with you on how we need to imagine the exaggerated body movements, the overly-expressive facial expressions.
I don’t think I’m romanticizing too much. And then to consider the gaslit stage. Wow.

Hi Connie
Yes indeed. The Guild of Literature and Art was both a welcome aid to artists in need and an incredible gathering of 19C personalities. When I look at the actor's list for some of the performances it’s hard to believe so many notable people could be assembled to prepare, rehearse, and then perform. Certainly, a testament to both the assembled group and to Dickens for bringing so many important figures together.
Peter "we need to imagine the exaggerated body movements, the overly-expressive facial expressions" and Sam -
This triggered a memory of Lori's excellent posts on acting melodrama, from our recent read of The Frozen Deep ... Mr. Nightingale's Diary: A Farce In One Act is not only a farce but a melodrama. There are several posts before this, but these diagrams of conventional poses are so good! LINK HERE
(I love your new profile pic Peter! It's so nice to see you without Queen Victoria grabbing all the limelight!)
This triggered a memory of Lori's excellent posts on acting melodrama, from our recent read of The Frozen Deep ... Mr. Nightingale's Diary: A Farce In One Act is not only a farce but a melodrama. There are several posts before this, but these diagrams of conventional poses are so good! LINK HERE
(I love your new profile pic Peter! It's so nice to see you without Queen Victoria grabbing all the limelight!)


The staging notes written into the play are helping my imagination as well. There is a very explicit one right at the beginning which instructs Lithers to come face to face with Gabblewig. I'm picturing them almost nose to nose in an exaggerated fashion, which would be hilarious.

"... Gabblewig indulges in quantities of self-parodic posturing which suggest Dickens’s own pleasure in showing off and up-staging everyone. In this opening scene, Gabblewig goes on at great length to describe and exaggerate his torments, while Lithers merely feeds him questions."
From what I have read, Dickens enjoyed his staged presence and though they were a bit "hammy," it appears audiences loved this from him, so I imagine even more exaggeration from him and the characters engaged with him.
Also this seems a good time to address asides which are numerous in this play. I believe they are especially of note in an amateur production such as this since the audience as well as the stage would be filled with people that know one another fairly well. So imagine not just an anonymous audience but one filled with friends and family and a who's who of the arts scene in London at the time.
My last word is also from material in Ms. Fisher's book, and I will say more about it when we discuss authorship, There was extemporaneous creation or in simple terms a lot of ad-libbing. So the heart of the play might remain the same but variations in dialogue might occur from performance to performance .

Sam
Yes, I imagine Dickens would have really enjoyed farces as they allow, indeed encouraged, acting up ‘over the top.’ With audiences who were friends attending the play what a grand time to play up to the crowd. I wonder how many times what was written into the text of the play could be decoded by friends in the audience during the grand gestures and language and have had an additional extended meanings. The Frozen Deep comes to mind as an example.
How I would have enjoyed being at a performance.


The Morgan Library and Museum
https://www.themorgan.org/drawings/it...

At risk of showing my ignorance, I'm going to ask a couple clarifying questions. When Lithers says "ever since you paid out that execution for me when I was in the green-grocery way", what does that mean? What execution and what is a green-grocer?
My second question is about "cold veal". That sounds disgusting to me . . . . would that have also been disgusting to Victorians? I'm guessing there is a joke here that I'm missing, because later on Slap orders - what seems to be - better food: steak, ham, fowl.

At risk of showing my ignorance, I'm going to ask a couple clarifying questions. When Lithers says "..."
Thank you very much for these questions! I was going to bring the subject up of not understanding certain things in a play because of difference in meanings over time, use of slang, and other various reasons. There are a number that confused me as well but most are later in the play.
I took the picking of "cold veal," term to mean a poor, distasteful, or unwise choice maybe because it is a more expensive cut and not considered as tasty cold , would be a waste to order it that way if there were better options. Another thought might be bacteria. Refrigeration was more of an issue in Victorian Times and perhaps veal was thought to spoil faster when leftover from cooking that would make it a poor choice, or maybe because the delicacy of flavor would be lost.
A green-grocer would be a person with a store or cart that sold fruits and vegetables, produce. I took the "execution"' to mean a writ or warrant of execution which are terms related to collecting on something owed to someone, a debt or compensation. I believe Lithers meant that Gabblewig paid off a debt for Lithers incurred when he was a green-grocer..


That's amazing Kathleen ... Perhaps they no longer exist in America and Canada, (where most in this thread live)? "Greengrocer's" is standard here. It would be a real mouthful to have to say "Can you call in at the fruit-and-vegetable-shop up the road for an apple please?"


"He says I speak too fast, and am too slow — want reality of purpose, and all that. He says I 'm all words. What the devil else does he suppose I can be, being a lawyer ! He says I happen to be counsel for his daughter just now, but after marriage might be counsel for the opposite side." Gabblewig in his misery has come to Malvern for the "cold water cure." The dialogue on this is witty and exaggerated-- "If the waters of Malvern were the
waters of Lethe, I'd take a douche forty feet high this afternoon, and drink five-and-twenty tumblers before breakfast to-morrow morning. Anything to wash out the tormenting remembrance of Rosina Nightingale."
I was going to give a whole day to the water cure but since I am running late, I will probably just add a note as we go along. for, now, the water cure was a health fad from a few years prior, that consisted of dinking and bathing in the healthy waters from Malvern springs. Feel free to comment on this now if you wish.
Gabblewig had ended his his plaint with the name of Nightingale
and Lithers exclaims "Mr.Nightingale!" and Gabblewig replies "Nightingale," followed by some lines from Richard Barnfield's "As it fell upon a day," ( also known as "Address to a Nightingale, and also Philomel) Gabblewig attributes these to Shakespeare because the poem was published by Barnfield in a collection of poems, called, The Passionate Pilgrim all attributed to Shakespeare, but this was by Barnfield and I am not sure if this was an intended joke the audience would catch or an error.
But Surprise!, Guess who's coming to dinner!! Or at least to get the water cure himself, and it is none other than Mr. Nightingale on that very afternoon! There is lovely wordplay in the reading of the confirmation letter with Gabblewig misreading what's written and Lithers leaning over his shoulder correcting. And of course he is bring his niece!
Gabblewig--Support me.
Lithers-- Hold up Mr.Gabblewig.
Gabblewig--You might knock me down with a feather.
Lithers-- But you needn't knock me down with a barrister,
I knw I am doing a lot of quoting, the more often we read this the funnier it gets, imagining the physical humor that must have been carried on by Dickens and Collins.
We now get a link to the title of the play. It appears, Mr. Nightingale is a hopeless hypochondriac and keeps a record of his ailments and attempted cures in a diary which he has quoted in his letter of confirmation for the visit to the Water Lily. This visit prompts some scheming between Lithers and Gabblewig but ends with Gabblewig saying, "uncle won't give consent--stick won't beat dog--dog won't bite pig--pig won't get over stile--and so the lovers will never be married! Bring me the cold veal..." and quite soon after we here another voice form offstage "Halloa here!"
Continued tomorrow..
s

It is quite fun to picture Dickens and Collins doing slapstick on stage.



According to Wikipedia this illustration dates to 1 November 1819 by John Harris. The rhyme itself was part of verbal lore and first published on 27 May 1806 as "The True History of a Little Old Woman Who Found a Silver Penny" by Tabart & Co. at No. 157 New Bond Street, London.

According to Wikipedia this illustration dates to 1 November 1819 by John Harris. The rhyme itself was part of verbal lore and first published on 27 May 1806 as "The True History of a Little Old ..."
Thank you again Sara.

His acting was recognized, was known for his Shakespearean character imitations and he had a lead in the Bulwer-Lytton play performed earlier the same night of our play.
He is going to play the role of Snap and is about to enter the stage in our play.
He is especially important for our discussion of authorship. Leona Fisher in her previously mentioned book, Lemon, Dickens, and Mr. Nightingale's Diary, a Victorian Farce has included not only the text of the printed version of the play but a carefully transcribed copy of the hand written Mark Lemon's Autograph manuscript, Needless to say, this is invaluable to anyone wanting to see the actual differences in the copies and while Ms. Fisher points out some major differences leading her to believe this was Lemon's play than emended by Dickens, the opportunity to do some amateur scholarship of your own exists, since she mostly leaves fuller comparisons of the copies to readers. I got this late for the discussion which is probably good since I am sure I would have been arguing some fool idea I got from comparing the two and wasting your time by posting it here. Better to let you discover things for yourself if interested.
But there are numerous differences like, for example, the names of characters. Gabblewig, played by Dickens, was named Frank Heartwell in the autograph copy.
One of Mark Lemon's distinguishing characteristics was his size and shape. I am adding this picture if it works and try to picture him in respect to Dickens as the play continues.


Hi Sam
Mark Lemon was certainly a man with wide literary talents. ‘Punch’ magazine was one of the preeminent literary magazines of the 19C. It, like the Guild of Literature and Art, attracted many of England’s best writers and illustrators. Indeed, there was a cross-pollination of people who were active in both enterprises.
I’ve often wondered about the chemistry between Mark Lemon and Henry Mayhew. Mayhew’s ‘Life and Labour of the London Poor’ seems very different from ‘Punch.’
I have been unable to get my hands on the Leona Fisher book you have mentioned. It sounds fascinating.
Oh to have seen Lemon and Dickens on the stage together.

Thank you, Sam for doing all this research on Mark Lemon. I had not heard of him before reading this play, and he seems to be someone worth knowing more about.
I found a small bit of information about his relationship with Dickens, which some might find interesting. It started when I clicked on the link Jean provided about 1 Devonshire Terrace. I discovered that Charles and Catherine's 8 month old daughter, Dora, died at Devonshire Terrace. When I looked further into her short life, I read that Mark Lemon kept watch with Dickens over Dora's body all night on April 15, 1851 - just about a month before this play was performed.
Interestingly, Catherine wasn't home. She was recuperating in Malvern.

The story of Dora is very sad, Bridget. It is hard to realize how many parents in those days dealt with infant deaths. Also difficult for me to fathom Dickens' life being such a mix of blessings and tragedies.

"Halloo, here." was where we left off and that offstage voice belonged to the character "Slap," played by Mark Lemon, who enters using the alias, Mr. Formiville and asking about his luggage as he is greeted by Lithers. Lithers informs him it is here, three boxes and two foils, and then Slap, engages Lithers in a little stage business, where he removes his cap and asks Lithers to take it which he does and sets it down; then Slap removes his gloves, asks Lithers to take them and put them in the cap, which Lithers does; and then Slap asks Lithers to pick up the cap and hand it back to him, which Lithers does and you might be asking yourself what this is all about. My guess, and I am not sure, is that it is just a bit of stage business that helps to define Slap's character as the joker and scam artist and his victim here is Lithers who plays the straight man. I imagine audiences were familiar with this type of shtick and would have understood. More recent examples of this type of business can be seen in Marx Brothers' movies with Harpo being an absolute master of this type of game and Benny Hill aloused to use these type of routines in the skits on his TV series. I am afraid I cannot recall any really recent examples but you may think of them. Slap orders a quantity of food and wine from Lithers as well, and as he orders the wine, he says, "The price is no consideration, {aside) as I shall never pay for it."
So Slap is our somewhat likable villain. He is here to fleece someone. We shall move a little faster now with most of our characters introduced.
Lithers exits to get Slap's food and drink and Slap meanwhile sees Gabblewig and seeks to introduce himself as Formiville, but Gabblewig has already observed Slap and knows his tricks. Slap realizes it is Gabblewig and that he owes the man "£ 15, four shirts, and a waistcoat." He tries some flattery on Gabblewig, " —O sir, if I drop a tear upon that hand—" Gabblewig allows it but makes it clear to Slap, he knows Slap's dealings, mentioning Slap being involved in the "begging-letter business," a scam to fleece wealthier individuals of their money pretending to represent some charity. The equivalent now would be a fake "Go Fund Me," plea.
Gabblewig is building himself up to potential violence, "...when a gentleman of that description drops a tear on my hand, my hand has a tendency to drop itself on his nose." Slap begs him off blaming Nightingale for denoucing him to the Mendicity Society thus prejudicing Gabblewig against him, and tells Gabblewig he plans to get revenge on Nightingale when he arrives.
Gabblewig sees in this "trap for Nightingales," a possibility to redeem himself in the uncle's eyes and lays off Slap for now. He exits with a warning to slap to not steal the silverware.
We will end today with Slap rubbing his hands and plotting away as the best evil villains do, "But arise, black vengeance, Nightingale shall suffer doubly." And so we end today with Nightingale about to enter. Tomorrow, we will meet the last of our principal characters and remember the foils, Gabblewig's words about dresses in his luggage since these will figure in our play soon.
See the following link for more on The Society for the Suppression of Mendicity, a charitable organization with the aim of discouraging begging by letter or in person on the streets.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Society....

Hydrotherapy or "water cure," has a long history and is still present today but for our purposes, I will limit our discussion to Malvern in Victorian times. James Mamby Gully and James Wilson started a water cure clinic in Malvern in 1842 to take advantage of the supposed medicinal properties of Malvern spring water following the success of such clinics in Austria. Hydrotherapy caught on, became a fad, and Malvern became host to many celebrities including Charles Dickens himself.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Hydroth...
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/James_M...
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Malvern...
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Malvern...
The treatments are various and let the pictures serve instead of text.



For a further read on the Malvern water cure clinics you might want to look at Ruler of the Night by David Morell, a modern mystery set in 1855 Malvern.
https://www.hachettebookgroup.com/gue...


I am thoroughly enjoying your summaries and comments. They help put the play in our minds and imaginations.
I agree that the rather liberal use of the aside adds greatly to the plot. The asides help the reader/audience define the speaker, get a feeling for how the plot will advance, and adds to the farce’s humour. In my imagination I always picture the speaker of the aside’s face being very comical and playing to the audience. Since the speech is an aside I also imagine how the lines would be delivered.
Reading a farce is quite the exercise for one’s imagination.

I was wondering if Mr Nightingale was named for the nurse Florence Nightingale since he is a hypochondriac, and writes such detailed accounts of his health in his diary.


Mr. Nightingale while busy noting his symptoms sends his niece off with Lithers to fid her room and Lithers manages to whisper to Rosina that Gabblewig is in the establishment. Rosina screams in response but bluffs off this reaction as if she "felt something touch her heart." Her uncle thinks "a crick in his back" symptom of his is contagious and she has caught it. He asks Susan, the maid, if she feels anything but the maid does not and all of this is being delivered in witty dialogue. Rosina exits with Lithers and Susan follows seeing something is up. Mr. Nightingale notes Slap eating but goes back to noting his various ailments in his diary when struck by a new pain and exits after Susan for more ink to notate it, leaving the diary behind. Snap sees it, and thumbs through it, finding a potential blackmail in the fact that Mr. Nightingale has had a wife with whom he is "unconjugal." He sets the diary down, returns to his table and Mr. Nightingale comes back looking for it and thankfully finding it, exits again.
Gabblewig enters disguised as "Boots," and sits at Slap's table and pretends to be a fellow performer flattering Slap to no end while helping himself liberally to Slap's food and wine. This is one of the funnier parts in the play with the dialogue alluding to various roles Lemon could exaggerate as a known Shakespeare character impressionist. Eventually Slap and Boots (actually Gabblewig) exchange information on Nightingale's wife and their verbal contest comes to an end. I will stop here before the Goodread gods take what I have written but wil be back early tomorrow with some words on the bit I omitted, the swordfight, a highlight of the play.

Sam, thank you so much for the info on the water treatments. Fascinating!!
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It is another collaborative work, this time between Charles Dickens and ... well I'll let Sam tell you all about it 😊
Reading of this fun work will be between 1st and 14th September.
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