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It took her WAY too long to accept Henry as a companion, and even when she did, Ann Liang didn't spend enough time writing about their active relationship; they only get together at the very end, when it's too late to see more of their interactions as a couple.
I liked Henry as a character, but he should've taken some responsibility for the kidnapping, too. He had a major role along with Alice.
Chanel and Alice's friendship wasn't developed enough, and the short amount of time it took for them to click didn't feel believable. Chanel and Rainie were the exact same characters, but I think Rainie could've brought more originality to the table if she had been in Chanel's place.
The writing was repetitive. Nearly every paragraph was some different way of wording the same throat analogies over and over: laughter bubbling up in her throat, a lump in her throat—I get why Liang was trying to do, but it's clique and annoying.
The ending is so shallow! Everyone's takeaway from the whole event is is: "'Oh, Alice wouldn't have been put in a position to feel the need to aid in the kidnapping of her classmate if she hadn't been poor.'" She committed a CRIME, and got away with it! Peter Oh is the one traumatized, at the end of the day!
I had high hopes.