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Hiya Loves <3

I'm putting the writing prompt of this week up for y'all. However, Abi and I won't be able to do this one due to our exams, but have fun! Can't wait to read what y'all come up with.
"Center your story around someone who will stop at nothing to get what they want."

MIAcat <3

It's kinda off the prompt and its more of a poem, or something. I hope that's alright.
(I don't really write poetry that much so I know its not great but whatever lol)



I did it.
I sacrificed the world for my own desires.
It cost me everything, the world is on fire.
I did what they asked, got cut on the glass, and acquired my pass.
Why do I feel to empty?
I got what I thought I wanted, I got what I thought I needed. I achieved my goal, so why am I feeling like a burnt lump of coal?
I got everything I wanted and more, but my heart feels like glass shattered on the floor.
Was it worth it?
Can't tell. Like a corpse. Only shell.
My body is tired, empty. I did everything I could and all my energy has left me.
I feel my body leaving, separating from my soul. I seem to have, let everyone go.


lemme know what yall think

Wow, I really like that. Don't worry about it being off prompt, that's totally okay, its just there to get you thinking!

MIAcat <3

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This is a really nice poem. I admit that with the rhythm and cadence, my brain filled in:
can't tell. like a corpse. only shell.
my body is tired, empty as hell. (just my brain, haha).
Very nice though!

Thanks! It does make more sense like that

No, I think that the poem is perfect the way it is. It was just my brain being my brain.