Beta Reader Group discussion

I'm looking for beta readers for my complete YA Fantasy, Fighting Fear.

100k word count

I'm looking for advice on the book in general e.g. how it reads, characters, writing style, as well as anything else you think that would help.

As a first time writer, I'd like opinions from those with more experience. Be brutal, I can take it if it helps me make improvements, but I'd love to here what positives you can see too.


The book.........

Fighting Fear - Part One, The Fear That Lies Inside


There is fear inside each and every one of us.

Fear of the dark, fear of not fitting in, fear of not looking a certain way, fear of failure, fear of not being good enough, or that good old childhood favourite ………. the fear of the creatures that wait in the dark corners of our minds (and homes), to torment our waking hours and our dreams.

Whether it’s the monster in the closet, the one under the bed, the one that lurks in the corridor making those late night toilet runs so hesitantly creepy, or the shadow following you home in the dark of night.

These are just a few of the creatures whose job it is to seep fear into our consciousness, and they do so at the bidding of their master, The Darkness.

The same creatures that we all saw, felt, and accepted so readily as children, remain unseen in adulthood. Yet their power over us is equally as strong, and equally as real, however many times we try to reassure ourselves.

Luckily, there is a group of people here to help. A group that for centuries have been tasked with battling The Darkness’s forces which spread fear and uncertainty in us all. A group known as Hunters.

The Hunter's are about to get a new recruit. Albeit an awkward, gangly one, lacking in a great deal of self belief.



Fighting Fear - Part One, is the first of a five part series, of a worldwide humorous, and sometimes creepy adventure, taking opportunities to explore and learn from the teachings, cultures, traditions, and the people met along the way.

In a break in the fourth wall, some of these are highlighted and discussed at the end of each book, by one of the story’s main protagonists. Showing the reader how they themselves could use them to make their own lives a little better.


Give me a shout if you think you could help with a book that aims to help as well as entertain

Thanks

Paul

Hi Paul!

Congratulations on successfully writing your book! That is a HUGE milestone and is no small feat as a first time writer. I am happy for you!

I’d love to beta read for you. As a professional beta reader, I’ve worked with authors across genres, including YA fantasy.

Fear is a tricky thing. It's everywhere and anywhere. It lingers and hinders. I'm excited to read about these hunters and how they attempt to get rid of fear.

I'm able to provide feedback on all the aspects listed and more. You can check for information about me and my services on my website. https://bibliobeastreads.wordpress.com/
Email: booktailor31@gmail.com

Looking forward to your response.

Hey Paul
Good morning/evening
How are you?
I would love to read your book.
Please find my terms and testimonials on this page
https://digitalcreativepages.com/beta...
If you think I can help you strengthen your book, the contact form is right on the page
Kindly let me know
Have a great day
Cheers
Nila
Digital Creative Pages

Whilst choosing betas, please take note of this thread (https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...).
There has been an influx of spammers and scammers lately. It's daunting.

Stay safe.

HEY

^That was me giving a shout. I kid, I kid.

This sounds interesting. If you'd like to chat further about a potential beta read, you can either PM me here on Goodreads or reach me at my email: bookwormlisa@gmail.com

Have a good one,

Lisa

P.S. Blessing is right, please do take a look at that thread!

P. S wrote: "I'm looking for beta readers for my complete YA Fantasy, Fighting Fear.

100k word count

I'm looking for advice on the book in general e.g. how it reads, characters, writing style, as well as an..."


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Hi,

I’d love to work with you. My email id is menonmamta02@gmail.com


Here is my link with testimonials:


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Looking forward to hearing from you.

Regards,
Mamta

Howdy Paul!

Sarah here — book editor and writer. I have edited over 30+ manuscripts and fantasy is one of the genres I specialize in. The premise of your book is honestly intriguing, I mean we all were afraid of the monsters underneath our bed and it just dissipated over time… all because we thought it ain’t real so now when you say otherwise…

Anyway, I would love to work with you. My beta reading service includes
• Chapter-wise report
• Character report
• Overall feedback on plot and pacing
• Customized questionnaire
• In-line commentary
You can check out details like pricing on my website https://www.narrativenook.blog/servic... and my GoodReads thread for testimonials provided directly from authors who have worked with me https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...

If you’re interested, shoot me an email at sarah.narrativenook@gmail.com with your exact word count and desired timeline.

I look forward to hearing from you :)

Hey Paul!

This is unlike anything I’ve read before. Fear is such a constant in so many lives, that it grabbed my attention right away!

I’m Fiza, with over 3 years of experience in beta reading, and I’d love to offer you my insights as a part of your target audience. Here’s the link to my website where you can find more about me and my services: https://fizabbas.com/.

Also, here’s the link to my clientele testimonials so you can hear directly from some of the writers I’ve worked with before: https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...

Feel free to reach out to me at fizaabbas.562@gmail.com if you think I’d be a good fit for your manuscript or if you’ve any questions.

I’ll be looking forward to connecting and making friends :)

Best regards,
Fiza – The Penpal

Hi P.S,am interested in working with you, kindly send me an email jochebedpraise37@gmail.com

P. S wrote: "I'm looking for beta readers for my complete YA Fantasy, Fighting Fear.

100k word count

I'm looking for advice on the book in general e.g. how it reads, characters, writing style, as well as an..."

Hi Paul,
Congratulations on completing your book. I'm Bassey and I offer experienced beta reading services. I am really intrigued by the blurb. I am running a free first chapter read and $0.0008 per word for the remaining chapters. I have a fast turnaround time of 2 weeks. 

My deliverables includes;
- Chapterly review
- feedback on your characters, pace, plot, tension, and suspense
- Honest in-line comments and reactions in the manuscript
- Full and detailed report of the full story
- I'll always answer any questions you have.
- I'll make corrections on any typos if you won't be offended by it
- I'll give opinions on how to improve your work if needed.
- We can also hop on a call if it's needed

You can check the link below for my testimonials

https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...


You can reach me at basseyblessing118@gmail.com or reply under this thread, let's work together

Hi Paul,
I am interested in beta reading for you and I specialize in the fantasy genre.
My website, www.wordcraftedits.com has more information about my services, examples of my commenting style, and testimonials. There are also more testimonials on my Goodreads thread:
https://www.goodreads.com/topic/show/...



Thanks,
Ayesha
ayesha@wordcraftedits.com

P. S wrote: "I'm looking for beta readers for my complete YA Fantasy, Fighting Fear.

100k word count

I'm looking for advice on the book in general e.g. how it reads, characters, writing style, as well as an..."

Hi there, Paul!
This sounds like a good fantasy adventure romp, and I like how you didn't give away too much information.
I'm interested in beta reading your work. I've got a degree in English, a postgrad in English lit, currently studying an MA in creative writing and hold an editing certificate - all from the University of Cape Town, one of the top universities in the world. I've also got severals years of professional beta reading and editing experience (testimonials can be provided via email).
In order to see that we're a good fit, and to show that my work is up to snuff, I'll do the first 2 chapters of your novel for free.
Please Dm me to discuss further.

regards
Gio

Hi Paul,

I would love to beta read for you. I have one year of experience in beta reading. My services include inline comments and a detailed report with chapter by chapter feedback and overall feedback.

You can check out my portfolio here: https://www.fiverr.com/s/38qeXGY

Here's my email: laiba.ctn@gmail.com

looking forward to hearing from you (and fighting fear!)

Hi P.S,

I'd love to work with you. I have over four and a half years of experience as a beta reader, having worked with over 250 clients so far. Fantasy is my favorite and most read genre.

My service includes:
✅️ Thorough feedback report addressimg elements such as: plot and character development, narration and writing style, plot holes and inconsistencies, worldbuilding and magic system, pacing, dull and confusing moments, etc.
✅️ Inline comments on the manuscript with my reactions and specific suggestions.
✅️ The option to answer up to 20 specific questions, which you can submit either before or after receiving my feedback.

My rate is $1 per 1000 words and I still have a couple openings for July.

Here is my page in case you'd like to take a look at my info and testimonials: https://bellerosereads.wordpress.com/...

If you'd like to work with me, you can contact me via email: cielobellerose@gmail.com

Thank you for your time and consideration!

Hello! I would love to beta read your book! It sounds like a unique concept. My only two requirements is no erotica or foul language. I have been an English teacher for 8 years now, and am actually in the process of writing my own fantasy book! I have worked as a beta reader before, and my clients were pleased with my quick turnaround time. My rate is .008 per word, which would be $80 for your 100k. Please message me or email me at littlepeach02@gmail.com so I can help you make your story even better!

P. S wrote: "I'm looking for beta readers for my complete YA Fantasy, Fighting Fear.

100k word count

I'm looking for advice on the book in general e.g. how it reads, characters, writing style, as well as an..."

Hi Paul,

I would like to offer my professional beta reading service for your young adult fantasy novel, "Fighting Fear," which is approximately 100,000 words long. The blurb is intriguing and has captured my interest.

Young adult fantasy is one of my favorite genres, and I have completed numerous beta reading and editing projects within this category.

I would love to collaborate with you on your writing project.

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* Characterisation and motivation
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* Pacing
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I can't wait to read your story!

Kind regards,
Luculle Stols

Hello P.S Bunter, I'm interested to beta read your novel Fighting Fear. I've worked with hundreds of writers spanning over 6 years. And I promise brutally honest feedback and fast turnaround period. I can definitely provide constructive feedback that can help you improve your story that aims to help as well as entertain.

The was I provide feedback is a little different. First I provide chapter-wise feedback and then a feedback report at the end to tie everything together. It will include what I loved about the novel, what I didn't like, what feels off, any plot holes, believability, confusing parts, things that can be improved as well as suggestions to how it can be improved. If you think about it, it's kind of similar to developmental edit except it's up to you how much you take away from the feedback and what you ignore. My offer is 70$ for 100k. You can check-out my website as well:

https://t.co/L20wy69TMZ

Reach out to me if you think we're a good fit or if you have any questions:

reganflow23@gmail.com


Thank you
-Regan

I'd love to work with you.

Here's my email: folajioluwadarasimi17gmail.com

Hey! Congratulations on your novel! I see you already have a lot of responses but I'd though to pop on this thread as well as I'd love to help you with perfecting your story.

I've been beta-reading for quite a while now, and I recently took my business to Fiverr to ensure a safe environment for both the client and me when it comes to communication and payment.

Feel free to check out my gigs and reach out!
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Are you still looking for a professional Beta Reader, Book Cover Designer, Proofreader, Book Editor? If Yes i would love to discuss that with you.
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Hi Paul,

Your book sounds super interesting, and I'd love to beta read it if you are still looking for beta readers.

I'm an editor and beta reader with a decade of experience, and I specialize in fantasy. I provide detailed reports with my beta read feedback and focus on things like characters, setting and worldbuilding, pacing, plot holes, readability, and genre conventions.

My rate is $30 per 10,000 words, so $300 for a 100,000-word book.

If you'd like to know more about my beta reading service, or if you'd like to contact me, you can check out my website: https://www.emmarobbinseditorial.com/

Hi Paul!

That sounds like a lot of fear! But I'm intrigued! I would love to beta read your manuscript.

I focus on:

In-line commentary and reactions (in a separate doc).

In-depth dive into characters and their motivations.

Intensity of plot and pacing.

Scrutinization of plot tensions, twists and how they affect the book pacing for your target readers.

Highlighting the Show and Tell Indicators throughout your book.

Highlighting persistent errors and personal insights.

An overall report on the book.

All of the above includes constructive criticism where necessary, suggestions and corrections if necessary, also gentle guidance if needed or requested.

My report comes in two documents.

One of which will contain my In-line commentaries and reaction and the second will contain my full-length report.

Thank you! :-)

Send me a message if you'd like us to work together at reshyreads@gmail.com

Hi Paul

I’d love the chance to beta read your young adult fantasy! Stories that explore courage and the battle against fear really resonate with me, and I’d be excited to provide thoughtful feedback on how the themes, characters, and pacing land with a YA audience. My goal would be to support your vision while highlighting what’s already working well and where readers might want more.

If you’re open to it, I’d be glad to discuss your timeline and what kind of feedback would be most helpful to you.
Contact me on my email, anushka.makwanaa@gmail.com
Warm regards,
Anushka.