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TD: compared to the other books like First Law
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For me, the characters feel flat and the world...meh. I get the parallels and the "fun" he's poking at the church. But...it's just not drawing me in. I think my entry point requires more movement of a story and interesting characters. To me, they feel very two dimensional.

For me, the characters feel flat and the world...meh. I get the parallels and the "fu..."
I’m losing steam with this book now tbh. The world-building drew me in at first but now (about two-thirds in) the plot has become very repetitive and the characters, while fun, haven’t really developed much. They each have their thing, and they do it, then they do it again. I’m hoping for a cool climax.



Sand dan Glotka was super funny! The tone seems similar. yeah.

I think this might be exactly the problem. Maybe it would work better as a TV show where you can get some visual cues that firmly separate everyone? Or, like Firefly, the show could do a background episode for each main character. Those flashbacks would have made The Devils way too long, but really there's only about half the characters that feel like they're in it enough to care about.



All true, and yet...
...I kinda fell in love with alt-Troy. Found the ending pretty good. Pounding action all the way through, yes. Some good twists also.