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I would like to offer my book to an interested beta reader. It is a CIA undercover thriller with an enemies-to-lovers subplot. 70,000 wordsRevenge Doesn’t Sleep
He hunted a killer. But the lies hunted him.
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From the age of ten, Matt Cavallo lived for one thing—revenge. The man he called father died in a fiery car bombing, a brutal message from Sicilian crime lord Antonio Moretti, lashing out over the shame of a wife's affair. The explosion that killed them shattered two families. Matt was left an orphan. Sofia Moretti, Antonio’s daughter, was left without a mother.
From eighteen, Matt had been forged into a weapon inside the U.S. military’s elite special operations. When the CIA offered him an off-the-books mission to infiltrate Moretti’s fentanyl empire spanning the globe—he didn’t hesitate. This was the path to justice… or vengeance.
But Sofia complicates everything. Beautiful, intelligent, and unaware of her father’s criminal world, she may be Matt’s way in—or the only person who can undo him.
As Matt descends deeper into Moretti’s empire, he walks a razor’s edge between mission and obsession. Each step brings him closer to the truth and to a final reckoning with the man who orchestrated his father’s murder and drove his mother to suicide.
Perfect for fans of David Baldacci, Tom Wood, and James Patterson—Revenge Doesn’t Sleep is a pulse-pounding, emotionally charged thriller where truth is as slippery as the past it tries to bury.
Murray wrote: "I would like to offer my book to an interested beta reader. It is a CIA undercover thriller with an enemies-to-lovers subplot. 70,000 wordsRevenge Doesn’t Sleep
He hunted a killer. But the lies h..."
I'll be happy to beta read yours, if you reciprocate. I have a 102,000-word psychological (political) thriller. I’m an author and editor, I’m NOT on Fiverr, I don’t want money, but I’d like an honest review of my work on Amazon and Goodreads (Goodreads is free but you have to have bought stuff worth $50 from Amazon before they’ll let you post a review. If you hate the book or can’t afford it, it’s OK). Contact me hgmartin@protonmail.com if you are interested. We can swap chapter by chapter. Word format, and I can use the markup for comments. The same applies to you.
FYI: I’m Thom Tate’s editor, and he also writes CIA thrillers.
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