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message 1: by Caela (last edited Aug 10, 2025 10:46AM) (new)

Caela Gemma | 27 comments Hi! I'd like to swap with someone who is interested in fantasy and sci-fi elements.

Here's my blurb:

Mint Bluefield, a quirky and energetic teen from the sky kingdom of Aurelia, descends to the groundlands on a mission—to find a genius engineer who can stop a reality-shattering catastrophe. But the world below is nothing like the laboratories and logic-driven minds she’s used to. Here, there are a variety of people and sinister entities.

Her search takes an unexpected turn when she crosses paths with a cunning merchant—charming on the surface but hungry for power beneath. As his grip tightens and his ambitions spiral toward world domination, Mint realizes she’s caught in something far bigger than a simple repair job. With time running out, she must outsmart the merchant, track down the elusive engineer, and unravel the mysteries of the human heart—learning that love comes in many forms, and not all of them are as easy to understand as science.

For readers who enjoy slight chaotic humor, adventure, and unlikely friendships.

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I can swap with any genre that doesn't include non-fiction, memoirs, or erotica (just not interested or passionate enough about these genres).

Feel free to post something here with your email with your genres and summary.

I'm still in the process of writing, so the word count may increase after this post.

Regarding my feedback, I usually give honest thoughts without any filters and in-line comments if allowed.

Hope to pair up with someone who is interested!


message 2: by Julianne (last edited Aug 08, 2025 12:24PM) (new)

Julianne Munich | 3 comments Hello!

I'm interested- I enjoy fantasy with quirky and chaotic humor! I'm also beginning two writing projects, but they're both in the early stages- just two chapters for each right now.

Email- jmunich1123@gmail.com


message 3: by Caela (new)

Caela Gemma | 27 comments Julianne wrote: "Hello!

I'm interested- I enjoy fantasy with quirky and chaotic humor! I'm also beginning two writing projects, but they're both in the early stages- just two chapters for each right now.

Email- ..."


I've sent you an email! Feel free to send me both of your manuscripts! I'd be happy to read them.


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