Vampire Academy Lovers discussion

Yep. Give me a few days. I'm going to right about Rose's dad.

i dk what i will right whens the dead line?????

Yeah,when IS the deadline??

THE UNDEAD THOUGHTS
Dimitri
By:Kristin Olivas (nerdlover)

I walked out of the well secured room, not knowing if i could take Rose's scent any longer. I thought I could control the ache. I ached for her, for her mind and spirit. For that smart ass talk of her's. And I truly ached for her physically. But i couldn't live with myself if I took advantage of her body that way. I walked away from the code secure locked door that entrapped my Rose. I went into one of the rooms in this large estate. I passed by a mirror and suddenly went still. I looked at my reflection and saw the dramatic changes. The cold, pale, white as paper skin. The grim and fierce expression that seemed to be frozen on my face. The red and lustful way my eyes seemed to look at everything since I turned. The soft warm dark eyes that were, were now gone. I felt powerful, invincible, and disgusted. I didn't like to say that i've changed much, but i have. It seemed wonderful and also felt like the ultimate rape of the gift of life. I was going against all i believed in. A hypocrite in every sense. I thought of Rose and the day we rode to the mall and the promise we made to ourselves, to each other. We would rather die than be strigoi. I felt a pang in my chest. I felt the beat of my heart. It shouldn't be there at all, Im undead, and the undead don't have heart beats. Then i thought about a time, in another life not that long ago when i heard Rose's heart. The night we made love. The ache came and I felt ashamed. Then the feeling vanished and i felt the surge of invincible power. i looked out side the window and noticed most o the night went by. i will kiss Rose tonight. I will kiss her so deeply, and give her imense pleasure and ecstasy, she'll be just another addict.
(Dimitri's thoughts when Rose is held prisoner in Blood Promise)

Nerd ♥er 4 Life! ♥ing u is cherry pie!
Awsome story.
I think my story is to long for this page.
Haha.

awwwww shucks! thanx

Depends when dose it end.

I'll try to write a new one.

Abes thoughts.
By Alexis

I was sitting there. In my living room with firer place setting at blazed. Thinking. I had seen her. My daughter. She was there. And I let her go.
I was starting to have second thoughts. She was here. In the flesh. Where is she now? Home, and safe, I hope. What is wrong with me? I never thought of her before. But I didn't know her then. I should be thinking of my buisness. Not her.
But she wont leave my mind. I have to see her again. What about Jayneey? I want to see her too. But I can't. I know I had a chance to have a family with her. But I thought of me first. What's wrong with me?
That's it. I will see them. Even if they don't notice. I'll look out for them.
I grabed my jaket and called the plane. I was going to see them again.

That's the best I can do for right now. I remeind you I rote that in 5 minutes.

Dimitri
- Thoughts at night

I crouched down. I was as silent as a rock. No heartbeat. No need to breathe. I listened closely and sniffed the air. I smiled coldly. She was outside, wandering the grounds of the academy. I could smell her scent and I could hear her breath. She was alone. I relaxed in my crouch. Well, I couldn’t do anything as long as she was on the other side of those goddamned wards. It really was too bad, that she had refused the eternal life. I had been like her once, a dumb mortal. They didn’t understand how very different it was to be Awakened. The speed, the strength, the senses. The way blood tasted. My smile turned into a grin as I remembered the taste of her blood. It had been sweet, and at the same time strong, just like her. She would have made a magnificent immortal, but she had too many enemies among us now. It was very regrettable; I would have liked to posses her. But it was just as well, at least now I could drink every drop of her sweet blood. I was looking very much forward to killing Rose.

I think i'll do this contest :)

go for it!:D

LOVE STRUCK
Rose
Written by: Tiny

I'd trained myself for a lot of things, but falling in love with my mentor, wasn't one of them.

Yeah, I've fought a handful of Strigoi, and had my fare share of enemies, but love didn't compare to anything I'd come close to with so much fear that threatened to present in my life.It was fear and thrill both meshed in between.

But I couldn't deny the fact that if love gave you a chance, it'll give pieces of life reasoning, just as long as you lived it while you can.

I'd gone from 'love sucks' to 'love struck' in seconds, and I could definitely say I was struck with love with a lightening bolt just then as Dimitri held my gaze from across the room.

We were sitting mere foot stools away from each other, yet the proximity of his gaze seemed to distort and discourage the distance between us as if it was non-existent. His dark brown hair caught in a lose tie, with the few strands that never quite managed to stay put, and hit his cheeks as if caressing his face so tenderly. My heart bubbled at the sight of his eyes. Searching, devouring in words that were left unsaid. I'd struggled to find a meaning, yet every glint that sparkled in his eyes seemed to unravel as if he told me secrets in another language. It was mesmerizing. I could stare at him forever.

Then it hit my chest like an electric current waking up every nerve in my body. My heart swelling so big, I'd mistaken it for heart burn. The room caught in an abrupt spin, just as I watched his lips lift up to a half-smile, showing how perfect his pearly whites had gleamed in the fluorescent lighting. I knew, and forever, from this day forward, just then, that it had been the very first time I had been love struck...

(just something I made up on the spot lol, IDK where the setting is or what, it just was something that popped in my head when I seen the thread title lol sorry if its a bit too short, or long for that matter)

great stories so far :)

Regan, where is yours? :-)
I like the stories so far. Keep up the good work girls!!
I won't even try to write sth. I'm better off reading than writing or I might end up boring you all to death. I'm usually better at math, physics and... computers (yes... I know... nerd) :)

yeah!

Test Of A Leader
Christian Ozera
by Adam

God I hate the court, do this in your families name do that even thou they look down upon my family whats the point and now they summon me again, I swear if it wasn't for lissa I'd tell them to get bent gutless royals. Why the guardian training grounds, maybe its just rose getting attention.

Opening the doors to a dark gym covered in dirt with the torch's lit brightly and with wind blowing around the gym in a unnatural currant closing the doors behind me. "Something is wrong" as a sphere of water passes by in mid air into the darkness "Very much wrong" turning a pulling at the doors to open to no point, time to burn summoning up flames into a ball ready to strike "Stop, there is no need for that Christian, I didn't think you would scare so easy" turning around I can see a woman emerge from the darkness, I woman I know to well "Aunt Tasha?"

"I so proud of you Christian Ozera, you've made me so proud, Alberta gave me the gym for the night cause I told her like all students a graduation cermony most take place but first a last test" looking confused beyond all belief I notice then all the moroi that I've been training in the stands, that explains the elements scaring me to death, like a goddam nightmare. "What do you mean test aunt?" I can see her that same smile she has when she knows that I've already figured it out and words are no longer needed.

"Teacher vs Student my dear nephew" I can feel the heat in the air around me increasing, her doing "I am not your aunt tonight Christian, I'm your enemy" A giant flame erupts from her palms with me launching back as they collide at a stand point as the gym lights up. We stood there in place feeding this flame with our magic. Is this it just to see who passes out from loss of will and strength, theres more to this, what is it, we are both fire moroi this is going no where. Wait thats it, I am going no where got to move, I am the flame and I know what to do.

"NOW" letting go of the flame and letting mine surround me as a shield as I sprint into her flamethrower running into pure light and within a second coming face to face with my aunt in pure shock and grabing her with around the wrist and pinning her to the ground. I'm breathing hard god that was stress full and here she is laughing at me. "What is it aunt, what so funny" man I'm almost out of breath and she's laughing. "I never would have thought of that Christian, never, your like rose always thinking outside the box and just as crazy, congradulations Christian Ozera, I name you the first moroi Guardian"

I was thinking since all you girls doing all love and cuddles for stories, I would look at a different view, and I thought of the up rising of the moroi magic and with tasha busy with the royals, they need a leader, but like rose's test, this person should do the same.

Hope you like and thanks to everyone for the votes on the poem I made, cheers.

Regan ♥ wrote: "Milena wrote: "Regan, where is yours? :-)
I like the stories so far. Keep up the good work girls!!
I won't even try to write sth. I'm better off reading than writing or I might end up boring you al..."

Awasome. Bring it on.

Adam wrote: "I was thinking since all you girls doing all love and cuddles for stories, I would look at a different view, and I thought of the up rising of the moroi magic and with tasha busy with the royals, t..."

S'cuse me? There's nothing cuddling about my story! Hmpf!

Adam wrote: "I was thinking since all you girls doing all love and cuddles for stories, I would look at a different view, and I thought of the up rising of the moroi magic and with tasha busy with the royals, t..."

i didnt do a cuddle story.....did i?

yay!!!

is it too late to enter???

YYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...im happy

what do i get?

umm....can i still enter in my stoyry? i got my thing a little late.

Title: The Pain

''It's over.'' I told her. The hardest words ive ever had to say to anyone. She looked stunned. As if she thought this was a terrible nightmare. But, realization hit her face as she took in the words. The look on my face must of matched hers.
''What are you saying?'' she cried. Tears threatning to flow from her eyes. ''You dont want this! Y-you havent thought about this. Please, d-dont do this!'' Tears poured from her eyes, making me feel worse about this. ''You dont want this!'' she screamed again.
''Ive thought about this alot. Im sorry...I dont want this, but i cant let it go.''She flung her arms around me, holding me tight. ''I'm sorry! I'm so, so sorry!'' Her tears sank into my shirt, creating small dark spots. Hot tears flowed down my cheeks, dripping into her soft, blonde hair. I pulled away, but she only tightened her grip around me.
''Please, lets talk about this. You dont want this!'' She cried into my shirt. I pulled away, using my arms to push her off me. I looked at her face, her eyes red, and her cheeks wet. This was wrong...I didnt want this. But i cant let this go...everyone ive ever known has walked on me, used me until they threw me away, like i was nothing.
I couldnt stand here anymore, or I would forgive her, and then we would hug and kiss, and everything would be the same. I took a step back, looking at her face one last time. She reached for me, trying to hold me again. She cried the entire time. I took another step back and started to run. I ran through the grass, dodging students, and finally running into the woods.
The branches clung to my shirt, scraping my arms, tugging at me, as if they wanted me to turn around and go back to her. To forgive her, and to be with her again. Each tree representing my life. Ugly, sharp, jagged, and without life, leafless. The story of my life.
And then the cabin came into view. The ugly, old cabin, with dead plants clinging to its old wood. My favorite place, my sanctuary. The only place that was safe for me. The place where I could be alone.
The old doors creaked as I slung it open, stumbling through the room, until finally collapsing into the old, hard bed. Lissa....the best thing in my life was now gone....what would help me live now?

my old story was better than this one, but i my computer cut off and i had to rewrite the story. but, even if i dont win the contest, i hope you all enjoy mine.

the contest is over:(

its fine, just glad ppl cud read meh story :P

it was great christianozera

i liked your story:D

thanks :P but i hope horrorchick and danya write more short stories, i like them.

you do know who won the VA contest don't you......never mind, don't even answer that *tear*

um.....didnt it say that danya won? o.O

she won the first contest...*sigh* never mind:(

oh, there was another ?!

didnt know that! congrats Nerd(me just gonna call you....rose #2)

never mind its just making it akward!D:

Nerd ♥er(The New Cancer) wrote: "THE UNDEAD THOUGHTS
Dimitri
By:Kristin Olivas (nerdlover)

I walked out of the well secured room, not knowing if i could take
Rose's scent any longer. I thought
I could control the ache. I ached fo..."
OMGOSH!!!! that is AMAZING!!!

Can I make a story for the fun of it?

AWESOME!!!!!!!!!

Ok. I kinda need help with the scene. I want to do a story on Dimitri in one of these scenes;

when Rose sees him in his cell

The love fades scene

When they arrest rose

Any ideas?? Which ones do you like best??

i like the sound of THE LOVE FADES scen. :)

Ok. I already wrote some of it in my English notebook!!! Lol.

I'll posts what I got sofar

I just remembered that I wrote this in my English notebook... Is it okay if I post it and get some feedback?