Let's All Write STORIES!!! discussion

Any ideas for poems?

how would we do this, adding onto a poem? it could b like a greek myth poem, about some sort of hero like Heracles or Thesus.

Yeah, like one person writes a line, and another person writes another line. Let's choose a good topic...maybe, springtime? I'll start:

Green fronds of grass, waving a light breeze

For the first time you find your heart at ease

Glistening raindrops, dancing on bright leaves

And the stars comfort you.

Lying down, on the pillow-like ferns

While the river churns

Drink in the sweet-scented breeze

Stare up at the tall, shady trees

And watch the moon rise.

The hard cold part inside you dies

You smile, then sleep.

And dream of a great Keep.

In an hours time, you awake

Smile a smile you can't fake

and wait for a new day where you see the morn's rise.

(end of poem? It sounds like it. Bravo!)

Ha ha! that was brilliant everyone!! congrats!! :D

wow, holy cow that's good! Here, let me put it all together. . .

Green fonds of grass, waving a light breeze
For the first time you find your heart at ease
Glistening raindrops, dancing on bright leaves
And the stars comfort you
Lying down, on the pillow-like ferns
While the river churns
Drink in the sweet-scented breeze
Stare up at the tall, shady trees
And watch the moon rise
The hard cold part inside you dies
You smile, then sleep
And dream of a great Keep
In an hours time, you awake
Smile a smile you can't fake
And wait for a new day where you see the morn's rise.

Brilliant!!

Want to start another one?

Sure Sure!

Darkness srirls

Light about it twirls

But in the deep of these to ways

Is a secret.

Deep in the damp cave, water drips

It falls upon my tingling lips

Where I hide in both.

The secret stings my mind

With the passage of time

(Hey I have a question, when this poem is done, can we write one for my story? Cause I am not good at poetry, and I need a poem for it. I can't think of anything.)

(sure)

((Sure!))

I think only one thought

More important than everything

'I have all the time in the world'

((You guys? Mind if we have the secret be something funny, like 42? Anyone read Hitchhiker's Guide to the Galaxy?))

(lol good idea)

(hmm, i'll let you guys work that out. Poetry's a bit too complicated for my mind.)

My mind curls

Around the secret most have forgot

So precious

It's a weight that only you can carry

(It's long . . .)

I whisper it to me, and you.

Fourty-two......

((yay!))