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July 2010 - Transubstantiate
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Jun 30, 2010 08:59AM

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Not sure what I should post up here. Don't want to spoil anything.
Jacob-reluctant hero.
Marcy-femme fatale Eve.
Jimmy-everyman, on the mainland.
X-larger than life, spirited.
Assigned-ghost in the machine.
Gordon-killer with a lust for vengeance.
Roland-bitter teen, son of Marcy.

http://www.goodreads.com/list/show/50...
it might get an article written about it

a small excerpt from Transubstantiate:
T-shirt in my hand, stained with blood that isn’t mine, dirty rivulets of sweat run down my back, an excruciating river of itchy salt. Bug bites and grass cuts fight for my attention. But my burning lungs are winning. It’s too far, I can’t run any further. The clearing is coming to an end and I have to think. What to say. She won’t believe me. I have to show her. How will I get her away from work? Water. We’ll make a trip to the Artesian well. We always need more water, we all do. She’ll think it’s a good idea, that I’ve come around finally, that I’m chipping in, helping again. Then I’ll take her to the cave. Show her the body. Bodies. And the bones. The stack of bones, piled high to the ceiling. What does it mean? Are we safe?
Stopping at the edge of the high grass, hands on knees, chest heaving, a strand of drool hangs to the ground. In and out the hot air moves, my face flushed, bloodied knees like lipstick kisses. Regaining composure will be tough, but there is no time. Just a sip of water, then inside.
