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Point of View: First Person v. Third Person v. Alternating View
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I'm also interested in reading the final release of Midnight Sun by Stephenie Meyer to get Edward's POV, if she ever publishes it.



Also, I loved Stolen: A letter to my captor which was in second person!


LOVED this book. I had Stockholm Syndrome reading it. This was one of those books where I felt that just because the protag is a YA, that doesn't necessarily mean it should be targeted to YAs--I figured if it psychologically messed with my mind, it's probably not the best thing for an impressionable teen. :)
I'm not picky when it comes to POV, but I do tend to love 1st person, I think you just get so much more of a character when you get a front row seat inside their head. :)


Completely agree. I read it quite a while ago and I still think about it even now. For anyone who hasn't read it yet, GO AND READ IT NOW!! It is an incredibly intense and honest book and I don't know about anyone else but I had so many emotions throughout and was so confused by the end of it (in a good way) about what I felt. It's one of those books where nothing (or more specifically no one) is strictly black or white/good or evil and was just... whoa, pretty intense.




These are the only books listed. Anyone read Flyaway?



I hope you enjoy it! At the very least, it's one of those books that "stays with you long after you've turned the last page" lol
LethalLovely~I'll Wrap My Wire Around Your Heart wrote: "I enjoy most types of POV but I HATE present tense. It confuses the hell out of me & makes me feel disoriented."
I feel the same, don't really like present tense. Having said that though, I reckon it again depends on the book, because isn't Hunger Games present tense? And I loved that and didn't even notice the tense :)


And I agree Laura Lulu, I hate foreboding hints!

Regarding POV though... the drawback that I've seen for 1st person is character development of the lesser characters. It can be tougher to really get to know them.



Well it really didn't. I finished the book. I found myself having to flip back and forth to look at the timeline to see exactly where in time I was reading. It wouldn't be so bad if she just went from 2020 to 2045 but she went from May 2045 to August 2045 and back again. I wouldn't recommend the book. Not sad it's finished.


I really like it when the point of view shifts. Like in the Sugar Maple series by Barbara Bretton. It's always in 1st person but she changes whose view you see. Not necessarily every chapter. But a chapter or two will be in Chloe's point of view, then a chapter or two in Luke's etc..,


In the 3rd person narration you get a sense of the whole thing, so you are so to say, in control of the situation and it is harder to surprise the reader
In a 1st person narration, well, you are living as the main character lives. For me this is more exciting, I like being surprised.

For self-reading 3rd person, this is okay for me but I found that I prefer the 1st person to the 3rd. -- I have never listened to the audio books but I'd think it would be weird to listen to someone reading as the 1st person. So I guess, audio books make sense in the 3rd person narrative.
I don’t mind the alternate. As long as, it was only minimal thru out the book.

Even though, for the most part I don't enjoy first person POV, some of the best written books I have read are written in this style. Kushiel's Dart and the 5 subsequent books of this series are written in first person POV, and they are spectacular. Truly some of the best writing I have yet to encounter. They are labyrinthine reads, but well worth the effort. This only holds for very talented writers though. Diana Gabaldon is another who meets my standards here. Outlander is an exceptionally written and executed sereies. Serious reading again, but worth the time.
Third person POV can hide a multitude of sins so it is no wonder I tend to like it better. I want to love every book I read and whatever helps that along, gets my vote!
Dana wrote: "I think personally I enjoy third person POV more for much the same reason as other have listed here. You get a better picture of the 'whole' cast and don't get bogged down in one character."
I agree. I also think 3rd person POV is particularly useful for UF, given all the world-building that goes on. It always seems easier to slip into a world when it's not being presented by one view of it. And I feel that I, the reader, get to make more independent choices about the characters than if they're being presented by a first person narrator.
Of course there are always exceptions. I recently read Shiver, and I can't remember a better exercise in using first person AND alternating views simultaneously. The story was built so effortlessly through the narrative that I never felt pressured by the narrators. It's a great trick if you can pull it off.
I agree. I also think 3rd person POV is particularly useful for UF, given all the world-building that goes on. It always seems easier to slip into a world when it's not being presented by one view of it. And I feel that I, the reader, get to make more independent choices about the characters than if they're being presented by a first person narrator.
Of course there are always exceptions. I recently read Shiver, and I can't remember a better exercise in using first person AND alternating views simultaneously. The story was built so effortlessly through the narrative that I never felt pressured by the narrators. It's a great trick if you can pull it off.
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First-Person
The story is relayed by a narrator who is also a character within the story, so that the narrator reveals the plot by referring to this viewpoint character as "I" (or, when plural, "we"). First-person narrations may be told like third-person ones, with a person experiencing the story without being aware that they are actually conveying their experiences to an audience; on the other hand, the narrator may be conscious of telling the story to a given audience, perhaps at a given place and time, for a given reason. The first-person narrator also may or may not be the focal character.
Third-Person
Each and every character is referred to by the narrator as "he", "she", "it", or "they", but never as "I" or "we" (first-person), or "you" (second-person). In third-person narrative, it is necessary that the narrator be merely an unspecified entity or uninvolved person that conveys the story, but not a character of any kind within the story being told. Third-person singular (he/she) is overwhelmingly the most common type of third-person narrative.
Alternating View
Many stories, especially in literature, alternate between the first and third person. In this case, an author will move back and forth between a more omniscient third-person narrator to a more personal first-person narrator.