Every Little Thing discussion

Here is where you are going to post a link to your story if you want to be rated. On a scale of one-five.

I or one of the other Mods will go back and post a link to your poll where the reader can rate your story and leave feedback if they choose.

*To the Readers, if you do this please obey all group rules!* Honest but polite.

Okay, I'll post one of mine first.
Wish, I Never
Summary:
Jenna, a girl who doesn’t believe in anything supernatural. She has enough trouble believing that her crush will ask her to prom. But it changes one day when her mother gets the idea to have a “girls day out.” Only her mother would take her antiquing, not something Jenna considers a good time. She is way too clumsy to be around fragile things; that is why she isn’t surprised when she trips, falls, and cracks her head.
The good news is; she doesn’t go blind. The bad news, now she has a boy in front of her saying, "I will grant you three wishes. No more, no less." Jenna has to make three wishes or be stuck to him forever

Link to the story:
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

Link to the poll: http://www.goodreads.com/poll/show/41...

Good idea! :) I love it! Now I have to figure out how to do the poll...

Timeless

Summary:

17 Year old Ariel St Clair has a normal life. She works at a museum filled with artifact from ancient times, mostly about American past, she relaxes and lives in what she calls a dream.

But Ariel has a gift. A gift that could become a great nightmare.

With the sight of having dead spirits encounters in her dreams, she is confronted with the mysteries of a dead Marine in World War II, and the truth of why he is dead, that may lead Ariel into a dangerous territory. Including the most dangerous, Love.

Will Ariel solve the case? Or fall into victim of one of the most puzzling cases in history?

Link to the story: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

And here is the poll! http://www.goodreads.com/poll/show/41...

all of these stories are awesome.

My story, The Color of Sin
story: http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/5...


Link to poll: http://www.goodreads.com/poll/show/41...

wow! cool! how will you know that i rated your stories?

You can post a comment under the story and like it and vote on the poll on how good you think it is.

Bristol Danvers has always been a follower, hoping to just get lost in the crowd and disappear with it. Her life is a mess and she hasn’t know it to be any other way. The only solace she has is her boyfriend Derrick.
Golden Boy Derrick. He is perfect, he makes her feel perfect until he tells her she isn’t. He not only says the words no girl ever wants to hear, he tells her in the cruelest way.
“I can’t stand dating you anymore, it's not me it really you. I don't want to date the fat.”
Bristol soon learns that if the Golden boy is against you, half the school isn’t nice to you. She goes from being a wallflower to the center of attention. She is hereby dubbed “the fat girl.” This is her story


I only have the first chapter up but I would love to know what you guys think.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...