Calling all Demigods! discussion

Name:
Age:
Appearence:
Personality:
Weapon:
Other:
Alexiares or Anicetus:

Name: Olive Anne Snoim
Age: 18
Appearence: The sharp, pointed pixie like figures of her face goes along with her quick small body. She's short for her age, somewhere around 5'3'. But don't let her tiny frame fool you, she's extremely fast, and a hard fighter. She usually wears her hair up in a messy bun.
Personality: Sweet to the eye, sour to the taste. She might look nice, but once you talk to her you'll realize she doesn't give in easily and can be very cold at times. Though she's also very instinctivfe and sticks up for what she thinks is right. She's also sorta immune to the cold weather, she loves it and usually doesn't wear anything heavier then a hoodie. She doesn't make friends easily, and you have to earn her respect. She loves a challenge, and can laugh along with the joke when the comedian is someone she's close too.
Weapon: A small dagger that requires her to get close to the enemy, it's a difficult weapon to wield, but once you master it you can be extremely dangerous which mirrors her perfectly.
Other:
Alexiares or Anicetus: Alexiares

Name: Leeanne

Age: 15

Appearence: Her hair is dark brown in the shadows and redish in the moonlight and the sunshine. It comes to her chest in curly locks. Her hair is usually in a bun or a braid[s]. Her eyes are greyish- blue with a look of gentleness. Her figure is really thin because she eats only when she is hungry- which is not often- and trains more. Her skin is deeply tanned in the summer and pale in the cold winter. In the summer, she prefers shorts and a t-shirt. In the winter, Lee prefers a sweater and sweat pants. Her sneakers are forever on her feet. Her eyes often gentle and kind.

Personality: Anne is not very proud. She is peaceful, gentle, supportive, and quiet most of the time. Leeanne is very energetic and fast. She is not that strong, but she is strong at heart. Lee has suffered more than people know, but handles it very well despite what she has been through.

Other: Leeanne is almost always carrying her weapons or sports equipment.

Her mother died during child birth- so Lee is a year-rounder. She was sent to an orphanage in New York City and stayed there for nine years before she ran away. The orphanage was filled with both mortals and monsters. Many of them got her in trouble and challlenged her. She wandered for some time before a satyr found her. She stayed at camp as an undetermined half-blood for about four years. During those years, she believed her mother and her father Anicetus- at the time she did not know that- abondoned her. She was sad and lonely until her fourteenth birthday when her father claimed her. That was the happiest day of her life.

Her main weapons are a spear and sword. She is alright with a bow and arrow. She loves her ice skates, soccer ball, and volley ball over most of her sports equipment.

Alexiares or Anicetus: Anicetus

(Tie-in Character for Cammie Morgan)

Name: Zachary (Zach) Jameson

Age: 16

Appearance: [image error] Zach has dark brown short hair, shockingly handsome features, and dark blue eyes that seem to draw people in. He usually dresses casually, in t-shirts and khakis. He always has a brooding look to him, probably due to his usual pained expression.

Personality: Zach is a very mysterious person. He outwardly doesn't like to show what he is feeling, but inside he feels everything deeply. He acts cold around others to dissuade them from trying to be his friend. When he loves someone, he would sacrifice the world for them, and do anything for them. Overall, he is a very caring compassionate person, who enjoys sports and is exceptionally good at swordfighting.

History: Zach grew up with Cammie and spent most of his childhood with her, until she was taken away. He didn't know that she was a demigod, or that he was a demigod either. His mother died when he was young and he was raised by the neighbors of Cammie, who were also his godparents. After Cammie left, he was taken by a saytr to camp after a monster attacked him at school one day. Zach still doesn't know that Cammie is a demigod, and he is constantly thinking about her and trying to find a way to search for her.

Weapon: His trusty sword that he always keeps sheathed at his side.

Alexiares or Anicetus: Anicetus

Other: He is in love with Cammie Morgan, daughter of Nike.

I'd advise changing the name a little more so the reference isn't as burningly obvious. Otherwise, it should be better organized, as in the "Other" should be at the end and the paragraph after "Other" should be categorized as "History". Few little things after that. You need to describe the picture a bit, and I'm not sure why satyrs would be randomly in the neighborhood, as I seem to remember that the Mist, the one that obfuscates the identity of demigods and such, also works on satyrs, though I need a citation. Otherwise, he is perfectly acceptable.

Is that okay? I was trying to put the saytrs it wouldn't be such an astounding coincidence that they were neighbors and they were both demigods, but I do understand what you're saying about the mist, I didn't really think about that. Also, I totally understand about the name, it's a tie in for Guardian's Cammie Morgan so it's a blatant reference to Gallagher girls, but I tried to make him a bit different from the Zach from the books.

It looks fine now. Don't worry about the satyrs thing, and I got what you were going for. I just wanted to send you a quick tip. I'm fine with the name as well, I just usually try to hide my references (which, coincidentally, are in all my charries xD). And he is different from the charrie in the books, and thanks for changing the name. Maybe suggest that Guardian change her charrie's last name as well, because I didn't see it otherwise I would have brought it up xD

Thanks! I really appreciate the tips! And yeah I'll suggest that to her. :)

No problem :-) It looks like a fine charrie, I'm pretty certain he'll be approved.

Approved.