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I mean, it's just in the topic where we post our writing is getting crouded by us saying, "that's really good!" and stuff.
i haven't written any yet, well i wrote one. it is called the trouble my cell phones get me into. it is ok

here's a link to my writing, if you ever have some time to check it out... a lot of it is pretty long... haha. but u can just read like the first chapter of something or whatever. i don't really care as long as you read it. lol. ;D
http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/8...


I mean, I wrote something absolutely horrible in about 4th grade, but I thought it was amazing then, and I was really pround of myself for writing 8 pgaes in size 16 font. It had chapters and everything.
I actually "revisited" the main character in my head, and things were really messed up in his life. It was sad.
I think I have the beginning of the story on my profile...maybe. I might have deleted it. But if I didn't, it's called A New Life on Earth.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
I don't really think that I am a good writer but I love reading people's comments! PLEASE ADD! There are only 3...
I don't really think that I am a good writer but I love reading people's comments! PLEASE ADD! There are only 3...
yea me too. Well you know what's cool?
Well I wrote this story called Riding the short bus and my 7th grade English teacher Mrs.Sparks gets to meet authors and she was able to set up a date where an author could come to school.
One of the authors was Pat Schmatz and Mrs.Sparks said if anyone had writing they were proud of, they could send their writing in and Pat Schmatz would write back. Well Many people had stories where Pat Schamatz wrote back. Well anyways my story is called riding the short bus and Pat Schmatz wrote me back and she really liked it enough to give me credit for it and it reminded her of a story she wrote called the bus. Yea she really liked my story and mentioned it on her blog!
Well I wrote this story called Riding the short bus and my 7th grade English teacher Mrs.Sparks gets to meet authors and she was able to set up a date where an author could come to school.
One of the authors was Pat Schmatz and Mrs.Sparks said if anyone had writing they were proud of, they could send their writing in and Pat Schmatz would write back. Well Many people had stories where Pat Schamatz wrote back. Well anyways my story is called riding the short bus and Pat Schmatz wrote me back and she really liked it enough to give me credit for it and it reminded her of a story she wrote called the bus. Yea she really liked my story and mentioned it on her blog!
yea it is pretty awesome but now since both of my brothers are going to college in like a week then I'll be the only kid who lives at home apparently and then it's gonna be hard and different and quiet without my brothers being home. My brother Sam would be walking down to his friends house and coming home late at night and he is the humorous person in my family. I don't even fight with my brothers anymore.
I'm really going to miss Sam cause instead of being in Minnesota(where I live) for college, he'll be 4 hours away from home in Fargo, North Dakota. It takes forever to get there from where I live. My mom's in wisconsin for a week cause her best friend has surgery to be done.
Isn't this all sad?
I'm really going to miss Sam cause instead of being in Minnesota(where I live) for college, he'll be 4 hours away from home in Fargo, North Dakota. It takes forever to get there from where I live. My mom's in wisconsin for a week cause her best friend has surgery to be done.
Isn't this all sad?
yea I miss my brother right now and my other brother Scott is older than Sam and it's going to be Scott's third year of college while it's Sam's first year of college away from home and that's sad. Yeah but Scott is going to college the same day I start 8th grade.
nothing except my brother being in north Dakota 4 hours away from home. And yes I have to do Jamboree on Tuesday for school and I will go to the state fair and valleyfair
yea well both ways are sad and 12 hours away is too far from where you live 1/2 a day, that does suck!
OK then why do you say you're kidding when you don't know what you're kidding about and you weren't kidding about anything?
OK since you weren't joking about anything you said you were kidding when there was no joke. Then I asked you what joke you said you were kidding about and you said you didn't know and that there was no joke.
If u still don't get it, that's what I meant
If u still don't get it, that's what I meant

It is about a girl who has powerful red eyes that help saves people and she ends up finding her mother.
What do ya'll think?
sounds Awesome! I want everyone in this group to read and vote on my story the mile revenge and I'm not done with it and don't expect me to finish it any time soon.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/1...
plz read it cause I want ppl to read it and only 5 people have read this story.
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/1...
plz read it cause I want ppl to read it and only 5 people have read this story.



http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Not the best...but I'm working on it
PS If u think somethings need 2 be fixed Go ahead and state it! I'd be happy 4 advice! ^^