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message 1: by Mikel (last edited Aug 22, 2008 01:40PM) (new)

Mikel (mikelsdever) | 40 comments Mod
This is where we actually talk about the stories we've writen.


message 2: by Kayli 500 (new)

Kayli 500 | 266 comments Mod
OK good idea


message 3: by Mikel (new)

Mikel (mikelsdever) | 40 comments Mod
I mean, it's just in the topic where we post our writing is getting crouded by us saying, "that's really good!" and stuff.


message 4: by Mikel (new)

Mikel (mikelsdever) | 40 comments Mod
Kayli, you're doing really good on your stories! Ever think of publishing any?


message 5: by Kayli 500 (new)

Kayli 500 | 266 comments Mod
I wanna publish the mile revenge


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

i haven't written any yet, well i wrote one. it is called the trouble my cell phones get me into. it is ok


message 7: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ ummm well i've written a lot of stories... most of which have failed miserably. but i have the good ones posted on my profile. i've written two books and i'm trying to get one of them published. ;D yay me!

here's a link to my writing, if you ever have some time to check it out... a lot of it is pretty long... haha. but u can just read like the first chapter of something or whatever. i don't really care as long as you read it. lol. ;D

http://www.goodreads.com/story/list/8...



message 8: by ♥ Rachel♥ (new)

♥ Rachel♥   (i_got_a_jar_of_dirt) i once wrote a poem in third grade and it was published...i just re-read it...i have absolutely no idea y it was published. it sucks.


message 9: by Veronica (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) Well, it was probably really good for a third grader...

I mean, I wrote something absolutely horrible in about 4th grade, but I thought it was amazing then, and I was really pround of myself for writing 8 pgaes in size 16 font. It had chapters and everything.

I actually "revisited" the main character in my head, and things were really messed up in his life. It was sad.

I think I have the beginning of the story on my profile...maybe. I might have deleted it. But if I didn't, it's called A New Life on Earth.


message 10: by [deleted user] (new)

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

I don't really think that I am a good writer but I love reading people's comments! PLEASE ADD! There are only 3...


message 11: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ umm i promise to get around to it... have to read a gazillion other things first. lol. ;D


message 12: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ ooh i'll have to read that...


message 13: by Kayli 500 (new)

Kayli 500 | 266 comments Mod
yea me too. Well you know what's cool?

Well I wrote this story called Riding the short bus and my 7th grade English teacher Mrs.Sparks gets to meet authors and she was able to set up a date where an author could come to school.

One of the authors was Pat Schmatz and Mrs.Sparks said if anyone had writing they were proud of, they could send their writing in and Pat Schmatz would write back. Well Many people had stories where Pat Schamatz wrote back. Well anyways my story is called riding the short bus and Pat Schmatz wrote me back and she really liked it enough to give me credit for it and it reminded her of a story she wrote called the bus. Yea she really liked my story and mentioned it on her blog!


message 14: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ that's awesome! ;D


message 15: by Kayli 500 (new)

Kayli 500 | 266 comments Mod
yea it is pretty awesome but now since both of my brothers are going to college in like a week then I'll be the only kid who lives at home apparently and then it's gonna be hard and different and quiet without my brothers being home. My brother Sam would be walking down to his friends house and coming home late at night and he is the humorous person in my family. I don't even fight with my brothers anymore.
I'm really going to miss Sam cause instead of being in Minnesota(where I live) for college, he'll be 4 hours away from home in Fargo, North Dakota. It takes forever to get there from where I live. My mom's in wisconsin for a week cause her best friend has surgery to be done.


Isn't this all sad?


message 16: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ very


message 17: by Kayli 500 (new)

Kayli 500 | 266 comments Mod
yea I miss my brother right now and my other brother Scott is older than Sam and it's going to be Scott's third year of college while it's Sam's first year of college away from home and that's sad. Yeah but Scott is going to college the same day I start 8th grade.


message 18: by Kayli 500 (new)

Kayli 500 | 266 comments Mod
yea I know and it's going to be WAY different.


message 19: by Karielle (new)

Karielle whoaaa
haha


message 20: by Kayli 500 (new)

Kayli 500 | 266 comments Mod
what???


message 21: by Karielle (new)

Karielle you guys talk so much!
i cant keep up!
gahhhhhhhhh!!!!
o well
update mi plz :)))


message 22: by Kayli 500 (new)

Kayli 500 | 266 comments Mod
update ur what???


message 23: by Karielle (new)

Karielle *sigh*


wats happenin, kayli?!


message 24: by Kayli 500 (new)

Kayli 500 | 266 comments Mod
nothing except my brother being in north Dakota 4 hours away from home. And yes I have to do Jamboree on Tuesday for school and I will go to the state fair and valleyfair


message 25: by Karielle (new)

Karielle okay
awww kayli tht sux!


message 26: by Kayli 500 (new)

Kayli 500 | 266 comments Mod
yea but I'll have to get used to it. THX Seoyoung!


message 27: by Kayli 500 (last edited Aug 24, 2008 02:16PM) (new)

Kayli 500 | 266 comments Mod
yea well both ways are sad and 12 hours away is too far from where you live 1/2 a day, that does suck!


message 28: by Karielle (new)

Karielle lolol i was kiddin, shesh!
lol jkjk




message 29: by Kayli 500 (new)

Kayli 500 | 266 comments Mod
what were you kidding about?


message 30: by Karielle (new)

Karielle ummm...idkkkkk

actually
i wasnt kidding about n e thing


message 31: by Kayli 500 (new)

Kayli 500 | 266 comments Mod
OK then why do you say you're kidding when you don't know what you're kidding about and you weren't kidding about anything?


message 32: by Karielle (new)

Karielle wat wat wat wat whaaaaaaat???


message 33: by Kayli 500 (new)

Kayli 500 | 266 comments Mod
OK since you weren't joking about anything you said you were kidding when there was no joke. Then I asked you what joke you said you were kidding about and you said you didn't know and that there was no joke.

If u still don't get it, that's what I meant


message 34: by Karielle (new)

Karielle okay since both of us r lost....(im hopin you r 2) lets just drop it

okay kayli i wasnt laughin!!!


message 35: by Kayli 500 (new)

Kayli 500 | 266 comments Mod
then OK sometimes I don't know why you post what you post


message 36: by Karielle (new)

Karielle lol


message 37: by Kayli 500 (new)

Kayli 500 | 266 comments Mod
yea everything is confusing because I'm confusing and so is Seoyoung


message 38: by Karielle (new)

Karielle im not confusing...im confused
lol


message 39: by Kayli 500 (new)

Kayli 500 | 266 comments Mod
yea but everyone is confusing sometimes


message 40: by Karielle (new)

Karielle yeaaa true..thts mi then!


message 41: by Kayli 500 (new)

Kayli 500 | 266 comments Mod
OK lol!


message 42: by Karielle (new)

Karielle :)


message 43: by Kayli 500 (new)

Kayli 500 | 266 comments Mod
:)


message 44: by Jada (new)

Jada Blah Blah Blah (jadsimone) | 1 comments I am working on a novel called The Red present but I am only on chapter 4.
It is about a girl who has powerful red eyes that help saves people and she ends up finding her mother.

What do ya'll think?


message 45: by Kayli 500 (new)

Kayli 500 | 266 comments Mod
sounds Awesome! I want everyone in this group to read and vote on my story the mile revenge and I'm not done with it and don't expect me to finish it any time soon.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/1...

plz read it cause I want ppl to read it and only 5 people have read this story.


message 46: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ three more chapters of Reborn!
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 47: by Veronica (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) my brother and sister are gone, and in a week, no, less than that, my other brother will be gone too, and I'll be the only one left at home...


message 48: by Kayli 500 (new)

Kayli 500 | 266 comments Mod
it sucks!


message 49: by ♥ Rachel♥ (new)

♥ Rachel♥   (i_got_a_jar_of_dirt) my parents were in norway 4 a week and left me all alone in wisconsin...and my mom just came back!!! yay!!!


message 50: by Call me Random (new)

Call me Random Here's my first story
http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
Not the best...but I'm working on it
PS If u think somethings need 2 be fixed Go ahead and state it! I'd be happy 4 advice! ^^


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