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His eyes shone brightly in the dark surroundings, like two jade jewels hanging from invisible strings. I take small, slow steps toward his still, broad body, my hand outstretched trying desperately to reach him.“Please..” I whisper, wanting to say more but knowing my voice won’t hold if I do.
He stepped from the shadows, the moonlight illuminating his light brown hair, turning it a shade of honey golden. It lay ragged around his flawlessly sculptured face making his high cheekbones and chiselled jaw stand out.
“Please.” I repeat, tears sliding silently down my pale face and landing weightlessly onto my black tank top.
This time he takes my hand, entwining our fingers as one as his thick, pink lips curl at the edges. I gasp as strokes of warm waves run through my veins and spread throughout my fragile body.
“I never meant to do it Adrian; I never meant to kill your great aunt.” He brushes a loose strand from my flushed cheek and slowly brings his face towards mine. My arms snake around his neck,
“Sorry.” I whisper. Our lips meet, soft and delicate in sync with each other until finally they melt as one. His hands hover lightly above my shoulders and rest gently on my small hips, making me shiver, yet I’m too warm to feel the cold that surrounds us.
He pulls away reluctantly, staring intently into my eyes, passion burning within them. My hand rests on his firm chest, his breathing steady, his heart beating rapidly in rhythm with mine.
“We have to get out of here Rose!” He yells, his hands gripping me tighter, pulling me hard against him, like somehow I am going to disappear at any moment.
What about Lissa, Dimitri? I can’t leave them Adrian.”
“Time changes Rose. You chose me over Dimitri, your bond with Lisaa is gone! They will forget about you, either way you will be lost from their lives forever because you will be executed from killing my aunt! You can’t win Rose.” Fresh tears dwell, spilling from my raw eyes. “We can run away together, just you and me. We can have it all and we will never be caught. Just you and me Rose, just you and me.”
My mind races as those words circle round and round, pushing past the small thoughts and blocking out the rest; just you and me.
I look up at the sky, the stars staring back at me, like a big blanket protecting us from the cold. The world seems to move in slow motion as two words escape my chattering lips.
“Let’s go.” I can feel my legs moving, can hear the trees rustling, can feel a branch crack under my weight as my foot accidentally makes contact with its rough surface.
“I love you.” Adrian whispers.
“I love you too.” I hear my voice say distantly as each step takes me farther away from my school, from the people I love and into a new future; a future filled with freedom and relaxing. Nothing can go wrong from here.
Daiiii…
Well done Daii! I would have really liked to read more..... that was excititng.
(Narrows eyes) Really well written but... Pfft that would never happen. Rose and Dimitri belong together!
A few weeks after where the book actually ended.
Dimitri and I broke apart. His eyes stared into mine, clouded with love and passion. With me seemed to be the only time he could relax like that. I snuggled my sweaty body closer to his again and he slipped his warm, solid arms around me.
“Roza.” His soft dark velvet voice whispered into my ear. His warm breath sending chills down my body. “I love you.”
“I love you too. Comrade.” I smile into his chest and close my eyes, the happiest I’d felt in ages. I was allowed another week off my guardian duties. The hole in my chest still hurt a fair bit, but it was getting better. Soon Lissa and Christian would be going separate ways, which also meant that Dimitri and I would be parting. We decided, with a bit of coercing on my part, to spend it doing something we both enjoyed. A rarely seen devious smirk had lit up Dimitri’s face when I got to the point of how I wanted to spend the week; a smirk that went right along with a sparkle that was now constantly present in his eyes. This man that I love had changed; he's quicker to laugh and smile. He went on the hunting trip Abe suggested, he came back almost bent double with the weight of the ducks he was carrying as he walked in the door of our apartment, the two men had bonded and I think that Abe likes him a lot more than what he liked Adrian. At one point he said to me.
“That new boyfriend of yours. He’s a damn good shot.” His voice was gruff and appreciative. He was serious. Adrian. I sighed and felt Dimitri tense but let it go. Adrian still hadn’t talked to me, and I could understand why. What I did to him was wrong; I'm still disgusted with myself. I always start to kick myself further then remember Dimitri and realise I wouldn’t take it back. I would do it again. Dimitri is who I belong with. I drifted to sleep to feel the familiar pull of a spirit dream. I immediately think of Victor but dismiss it, I murdered him. Lissa maybe? That thought barely passes through my mind when warm hands brush down my spine and run up the sides of my body to my neck; tilting my head up to begin to meet warm lips. I begin to sink into those familiar lips before I jolt. Dimitri can’t do this! Dimitri is a dhampir, he can’t use spirit! I slam my elbow into Adrian’s gut and dance away; immediately stepping into a defensive pose.
“Get out of my head!” And the hot sexy Dimitri standing in front of me changes to a hot, sexy, crazy Adrian. I look at his eyes fearing the worst when I realise they are still the green they were, I also realise what an idiot I’d been. If Adrian was a strigoi he would have lost his power with Spirit. I nearly thwacked my head against a tree. We were in the room where we had almost had sex, where I had let him drink my blood. A shiver worked its way down my spine.
“Adrian.” I looked back up and he was walking closer to me, the familiar strut was there but it was hiding something, a darker, scarier more, spirit orientated side; a side his eyes let shine through.
“Rose? Please come here? I just want to, to... Just one more time.” Adrian’s eyes darted nervously from side to side. “Please?” His voice so pleading made me look into his eyes. I wanted to, do everything for him. I wanted to live by his side, adhere to his every whim. I was his...
“GET THE FUCK OUT OF MY HEAD ADRIAN!” I flew at him but before I could get far those crazy green eyes sharpened and I flew backwards hitting the wall; hard. I don’t know but have I ever said that when things happen to you here they feel real? Well it’s true. Pain flickered along my body but I pushed myself up. He had developed the whole throw things around the room with brain thing that I could never remember the word for. But in other words, I was fucked, literally. Adrian walked further towards me.
“I won’t hurt you Rose. Please?” His voice was almost childish and I almost agreed but I fought back.
“NO! Don’t you dare touch me Adrian Ivashkov.” My voice low, deadly, pure venom. “You will be hurt. I don’t care if you have telekinwhatever on’t care if I once loved you. You will never touch me like that again.” He looked taken aback but he recovered though, instead of the childish nervousness and need,his eyes were filled with a very adult, very scary hate.
He laughed. “I’ll let you go this time but...” He chuckled again, the crazy light in his eyes shone even brighter. “But next time.” His finger came up, pointing demanding... something... something I wouldn’t and couldn’t give him. “Next time, you’re dead.” A snarl spread across his features and the dream snapped out.
“ROZA! ROZA!” Strong hands were on my flailing limbs. My eyes snapped open and I was staring into a very anxious, very brown pair. The world went hazy and I felt something run down my cheek. Dimitri wiped it away; the tear glistened on the end of his finger. He looked at it, then at me and wrapped his arms around my suddenly frail body.
“Dimitri.” I whisper, hoping that that one word would take away my anxiety and my guilt over what I had done. It didn’t. Dimitri held me at arm’s length studying me. Realising I neededomentary oblivion he leant forward and pressed his lips to mine. His hand ran through my hair.
“Roza, Roza, you’re okay don’t worry. Shh.” I didn’t realise I was sobbing until he pulled back. I looked at him, incredulous.
“It’s not okay Dimitri! You don’t know what I just went through! It’s not okay. I don’t know whether it’ll be okay again ever.” My voice loud and angry at the start became quiet and sad. I looked at Dimitri hoping he would understand, and, he did. He nodded and pulled me onto his lap waiting for the story. His hand running through my hair, I told him; even the start where Adrian tricked me into kissing him. I looked up into his eyes hoping for forgiveness; I found that and more. Worry, pity and horror ran alongside it.
“So in other words?” His voice trembled, showing just how hard this had hit him.
I looked at him, scared. “So in other words... I’m being hunted.” Again, again a tiny voice whispered in the back of my mind.
Dimitri and I broke apart. His eyes stared into mine, clouded with love and passion. With me seemed to be the only time he could relax like that. I snuggled my sweaty body closer to his again and he slipped his warm, solid arms around me.
“Roza.” His soft dark velvet voice whispered into my ear. His warm breath sending chills down my body. “I love you.”
“I love you too. Comrade.” I smile into his chest and close my eyes, the happiest I’d felt in ages. I was allowed another week off my guardian duties. The hole in my chest still hurt a fair bit, but it was getting better. Soon Lissa and Christian would be going separate ways, which also meant that Dimitri and I would be parting. We decided, with a bit of coercing on my part, to spend it doing something we both enjoyed. A rarely seen devious smirk had lit up Dimitri’s face when I got to the point of how I wanted to spend the week; a smirk that went right along with a sparkle that was now constantly present in his eyes. This man that I love had changed; he's quicker to laugh and smile. He went on the hunting trip Abe suggested, he came back almost bent double with the weight of the ducks he was carrying as he walked in the door of our apartment, the two men had bonded and I think that Abe likes him a lot more than what he liked Adrian. At one point he said to me.
“That new boyfriend of yours. He’s a damn good shot.” His voice was gruff and appreciative. He was serious. Adrian. I sighed and felt Dimitri tense but let it go. Adrian still hadn’t talked to me, and I could understand why. What I did to him was wrong; I'm still disgusted with myself. I always start to kick myself further then remember Dimitri and realise I wouldn’t take it back. I would do it again. Dimitri is who I belong with. I drifted to sleep to feel the familiar pull of a spirit dream. I immediately think of Victor but dismiss it, I murdered him. Lissa maybe? That thought barely passes through my mind when warm hands brush down my spine and run up the sides of my body to my neck; tilting my head up to begin to meet warm lips. I begin to sink into those familiar lips before I jolt. Dimitri can’t do this! Dimitri is a dhampir, he can’t use spirit! I slam my elbow into Adrian’s gut and dance away; immediately stepping into a defensive pose.
“Get out of my head!” And the hot sexy Dimitri standing in front of me changes to a hot, sexy, crazy Adrian. I look at his eyes fearing the worst when I realise they are still the green they were, I also realise what an idiot I’d been. If Adrian was a strigoi he would have lost his power with Spirit. I nearly thwacked my head against a tree. We were in the room where we had almost had sex, where I had let him drink my blood. A shiver worked its way down my spine.
“Adrian.” I looked back up and he was walking closer to me, the familiar strut was there but it was hiding something, a darker, scarier more, spirit orientated side; a side his eyes let shine through.
“Rose? Please come here? I just want to, to... Just one more time.” Adrian’s eyes darted nervously from side to side. “Please?” His voice so pleading made me look into his eyes. I wanted to, do everything for him. I wanted to live by his side, adhere to his every whim. I was his...
“GET THE FUCK OUT OF MY HEAD ADRIAN!” I flew at him but before I could get far those crazy green eyes sharpened and I flew backwards hitting the wall; hard. I don’t know but have I ever said that when things happen to you here they feel real? Well it’s true. Pain flickered along my body but I pushed myself up. He had developed the whole throw things around the room with brain thing that I could never remember the word for. But in other words, I was fucked, literally. Adrian walked further towards me.
“I won’t hurt you Rose. Please?” His voice was almost childish and I almost agreed but I fought back.
“NO! Don’t you dare touch me Adrian Ivashkov.” My voice low, deadly, pure venom. “You will be hurt. I don’t care if you have telekinwhatever on’t care if I once loved you. You will never touch me like that again.” He looked taken aback but he recovered though, instead of the childish nervousness and need,his eyes were filled with a very adult, very scary hate.
He laughed. “I’ll let you go this time but...” He chuckled again, the crazy light in his eyes shone even brighter. “But next time.” His finger came up, pointing demanding... something... something I wouldn’t and couldn’t give him. “Next time, you’re dead.” A snarl spread across his features and the dream snapped out.
“ROZA! ROZA!” Strong hands were on my flailing limbs. My eyes snapped open and I was staring into a very anxious, very brown pair. The world went hazy and I felt something run down my cheek. Dimitri wiped it away; the tear glistened on the end of his finger. He looked at it, then at me and wrapped his arms around my suddenly frail body.
“Dimitri.” I whisper, hoping that that one word would take away my anxiety and my guilt over what I had done. It didn’t. Dimitri held me at arm’s length studying me. Realising I neededomentary oblivion he leant forward and pressed his lips to mine. His hand ran through my hair.
“Roza, Roza, you’re okay don’t worry. Shh.” I didn’t realise I was sobbing until he pulled back. I looked at him, incredulous.
“It’s not okay Dimitri! You don’t know what I just went through! It’s not okay. I don’t know whether it’ll be okay again ever.” My voice loud and angry at the start became quiet and sad. I looked at Dimitri hoping he would understand, and, he did. He nodded and pulled me onto his lap waiting for the story. His hand running through my hair, I told him; even the start where Adrian tricked me into kissing him. I looked up into his eyes hoping for forgiveness; I found that and more. Worry, pity and horror ran alongside it.
“So in other words?” His voice trembled, showing just how hard this had hit him.
I looked at him, scared. “So in other words... I’m being hunted.” Again, again a tiny voice whispered in the back of my mind.
Cool Beans!!!I Really really like the couple of last sentences!!!!
Dudeeeeeee!!! That was soo good wat a mad idea to create another book in the series...lol I wanted to read more! Go u bro!!!!! Such a good writer!
:D
Wait what name? When are we gonna get three entries????????
Wait what name? When are we gonna get three entries????????
No...
Yeah you have time! :D YAY!
Yeah you have time! :D YAY!
It was gooooood. I liked it. A few gramatical problems... And the fact that this was for Last Sacrifice. :D But it's still really good!.
I would like you to write a chapter long, short story/ending/wind-up in what way you would ensure for Last Sacrifice to end.
Only members in this group can enter! I will create either a poll at the bottom of this group otherwise a section in this group providing that you all can VOTE for your favourite ending/wind-up.
Your chapter requires a tag/title and you must write your name down at the bottom of your story.
Dates -
Start: 7th April 2011
End: (when there are at least three competitors then I will post up the end date.)
Reward: Winers name will be posted up in the Hall of Fame!
P.S. Only the stories are allowed to be published here. If you have any questions or are confused about something or have an idea for a different contest then you can tell/ask them in the Question section. I will be looking forward to your stories and how you will end Last Sacrifice.