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message 1: by Cale_Steps (new)

Cale_Steps | 198 comments PROLOGUE: Perry has never been the most ordinary girl. She has a normal life with weird events occuring. Perry seems to be in the middle of something bad almost everyday, and now as she seemingly has to turn away from her family, friends and home forever. What could possibly be the explanation?


message 2: by Cale_Steps (new)

Cale_Steps | 198 comments Perry stared at the reflection in her mirror. After contemplating for about five minutes, she slid her hair into a perfect bun and tied it off with a silver bow that circulated the edges of her blonde hair. She crossed the room and entered the bathroom. As carefully as possible, she took out her black eye liner and red shadow. It would look perfect with her light blue eyes and red satin dress. Quietly, she flung herself into her huge closet and pulled out a pair of red and silver heels. She crept down the stairs and exited through the front door. Little did she know that she really didn't have to look that good for her worst nightmare. As she trudged along the silver crescent bay, perpendicular to her triangular house, she whispered goodbye. And as she stepped onto the dew filled grass, she added a soft little whisper that triggered her night with events that will never be forgotten, "Goodbye, forever," She managed to mustle out, not even worrying about the streaming tears that fell onto the grass below. Eye make up seemed like a dumb idea now.


message 3: by Koori no hi (new)

Koori no hi ((Sounds cool but i wouldn't know how to continue it))


message 4: by Cale_Steps (new)

Cale_Steps | 198 comments ((let me try and clear it up!))


message 5: by Cale_Steps (last edited Sep 07, 2008 10:20PM) (new)

Cale_Steps | 198 comments As perry walked off into the cool night, she sobbed quietly, thinking about the two months that had happened just before. She had gone from being a nerdy but overall normal person to a supernatural creep with powers that put her family and friends in danger. As she reached the corner of Lawrence Streer and Badger, the new Ambassador of her Special school met her.
"Hello Perry. I know this is all very hard to take in, but you must leave New York." He said. Perry gulped and pulled back her tears that were on the edge of bursting over.
"If its safest for my family, Mr..." Perry choked back searching fro some kind of name tag on the old decrepid man standing across from her, wrinkles lining his forhead, his hand clutching a cane twisted with ancient script.
"Please call me Feyshis." He answered with a worried tone. "Now you must come now, the Rising is upon us."
Perry shook her head in complete bewilderment, but took what he said seriously. As she stumbled after him, she yearned for her home. After Feyshis walked for about five minutes in complete silence he turned to Perry with a very worried expression. "They are closer than I expected. I will have to summon the Flourians." He said in a complete nonchalant tone.
Perry nearly lost it. She needed answers! But, as if Fey could read her mind he simply added, "Once we get to the academy, where you will be safe." And with that Fey leaped up onto a huge white stallion that glowed in the dead of the night. Perry shook her head and was pulled up without question. As they galopped towards some unfamiliar academy, Perry let it out and started to sob.


message 6: by [deleted user] (new)

(awesoooome)

The ride to the academy was peaceful for perry. Fey left her alone, allowing her tears to spill without regret. He kept up conversation only when it was started by Perry, but otherwise remained silent, leaving Perry with plenty of time to think.
First she thought of how Fey was a wonderful traveling companion. But then she immediately remembered why and to where they were traveling and her mind wandered back to home. Mom, Dad, Kelsey, her darling kitten, and all of her friends at home. She would possibly never see Hailey, or Keith, or Robin, ever again. Never.
It was too strong of a word for Perry and her sobs broke out harder than before. she buried her face in the horses mane, wishing it all away.


message 7: by Cale_Steps (new)

Cale_Steps | 198 comments Perry must have fallen asleep, for when she awoke she was shivering and stripped bare. The only thing that covered her was a plaid blanket, layered with a sheet of snow. Fey was gone, and she was in some type of tepee. Perry got up slowly and remembered she was stripped clean of her clothes. She quickly sat down with a yelp of surprise, and covered herself back up with the blanket. Fey heard her yelp and came through the door.

"Clothes?" he guessed with a broad smile. "Sorry, I had to. The lobos smelled you." He explained.




message 8: by Koori no hi (new)

Koori no hi "lobos?" she gasped out trying to cover herself better


message 9: by Cale_Steps (new)

Cale_Steps | 198 comments "Well, the wolves are their ancestors. They run like a pack with a heart of steel, ripping and tearing the humans that get in their way. They can disguise as anyhting they wish, and have some of the most vigorous defense and offense moves in history. Each century they choose One. It really depends who they choose and what power they have, but the lobos, or wolf-men, always slaughter the one with power."

Perry whimpered at the thought and gulped as tears ran down her cheeks. Fey gave her a sympathetic look and then layed a pair of fresh jeans and a teashirt on the floor at the door. Without a word, he left her to absorb.


message 10: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) | 855 comments ((Awsome story!!!!!!!!But the lobos thing was unclear.:/))


message 11: by Cale_Steps (new)

Cale_Steps | 198 comments Perry took a few seconds to come out of the horrid trance she was in, and when she overcame her fear, she thought about what Fey had said. The Lobos, a pack of wolf-men, were after her. But why? She still didn't understand. What was so special or powerful about her?? Knowing almost nothing about the force that was after her, Perry changed into the new clothes and stepped out of the tee-pee and into her new life. Little did she know, that her name was no longer Perry, her hair was no longer blonde, and her feelings were no longer personal. She had an identity...and her life and the lives of others depended on how well she could keep her identity.


message 12: by Cale_Steps (new)

Cale_Steps | 198 comments ((Hope i cleared it up...although...i hav a feeling i made it more confusing...i tend to do that... hehe :) if you dont get it anyone, i will change it just let me know. thanks! ))


message 13: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) | 855 comments ((I just read the entire thing. Grea,t but I don't know how to continue it. Acutally, it sounds like the sequel to something. You should have done a recap or something. g2g.))


message 14: by === (new)

=== | 10 comments freakin awasome


message 15: by Cale_Steps (last edited Jan 28, 2009 06:53PM) (new)

Cale_Steps | 198 comments ((ya..i think I might just kill of this story but write it on my own and post so others can read it..its kind of one of those stories u need to operate by yourself cuz u hav a set plan for it...if u know wut i mean.))


message 16: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) | 855 comments ((Yes, I know!))


message 17: by Koori no hi (new)

Koori no hi ((I understand that completely, ant 2 tell the truth, I think that what you have here would be hard for anyone to add on to without messing it up))


message 18: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) | 855 comments ((totally))


message 19: by Cale_Steps (new)

Cale_Steps | 198 comments (mhm i agree!)


message 20: by Janeen-san (new)

Janeen-san  (misswannareadalot) | 855 comments Cale_Steps wrote: "((ya..i think I might just kill of this story but write it on my own and post so others can read it..its kind of one of those stories u need to operate by yourself cuz u hav a set plan for it...if ..."

((Do that!))


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