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message 1: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) So, today is almost over, so I'm not giving a topic today, but starting tomorrow, I'll post a new writing challenge everyday (if possible). Have fun, you can put what you write on this thread, or in a journal. Whatever. JUST WRITE! Thanks! =)


message 2: by KB (new)

KB Love is our weapon (kaitybugs) | 881 comments Yay!


Christina *Cantarella* | 632 comments Woot Woot!


message 4: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) Todays topic, thanks to KB, is innocence. Write a story or poem. Have fun!


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

Another 3 minute poem....

I sit there in my corner
I softly start to cry
Innocent until proven guilty
But I have no alibis...
I never did this thing they said
But they don't believe my word...
But if you'd only listen!
It's really quite ubsurd...
I never killed my child...
I could never even try...
But now, without a trial...
I'm sent away to die...


message 6: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) This is for the child I aleays wanted:

I pray,
My darling,
That you may never feel The pain.
I pray you never know what it feels like to lose someone you love
I pray you never feel your heart break.
I pray that you innocence is never lost,
That you hold on to it through everything,
No matter what life throws at you.
I pray you never lose sight of your goals,
Never stray far from the path laid before you.
I pray your first memories will NOT be of pain,
Sorrow,
Hunger,
Neglect,
Or shouting and screaming.
I pray you only find happiness in this world.
I pray for you.


message 7: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) I can't have children. Or so I'm told. I don't usually listen to doctors, though, so I'm still praying to have my own some day.


message 8: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) Seventeen.


message 9: by KB (new)

KB Love is our weapon (kaitybugs) | 881 comments The inocents of a child
A beautiful thing
The sight of a child
See the good in everything
I wish I were young, strong and free
I wish that I could be all I could be
Innocence is beautiful
Graceful and elegant
One day I wish to have it again
But till then I cling to the memories
To a younger, happier me.


message 10: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) Hold on.
It may be too late for me,
But you can make it through.
You can grow up,
Grow old,
Have children and grandchildren,
The pain of yesterday has passed,
And the hope of tomorrow
Is within your reach,
Just ahead.
Keep reaching,
And you will find what you're looking for.


message 11: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) Thanks guys. For yiur thoughts and poetry =)


message 12: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) Too late to regain the innocence of a child. Not too late to live. It's never toolate to live.


message 13: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) I aged too early. Can't go back, but I'll be damned if someone tells me I can't go forward. There is life, and I intend to live it.


message 14: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) Thank you.


Christina *Cantarella* | 632 comments is innocence still the topic? Or has it changed to friendship? :3


message 16: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) Today's topic is friendship. It can be anything, friends lost, new friends, true friends.


message 17: by Christina *Cantarella* (last edited Jun 14, 2011 07:15AM) (new)

Christina *Cantarella* | 632 comments I will never be able to feel the pain the way you do.
But I still know what it feels like to be hurt.
And I will be there to help you through it every second of every minuet of every hour of every day of every week of every month of every year.
No matter how much I'm hurting,cause it would hurt me more to see you in pain.
So never let go.
I know you can do it.
And when all your pain is over,and mine is still going on,I'll still give you the happiest smile ever when you say,
"Thank you for being there for me always."

For Vatch,Krissy,Angele and Cheyanne


message 18: by KB (new)

KB Love is our weapon (kaitybugs) | 881 comments For you know who you are ;D

Thank You

You may have said some things that hurt
But we all
Live and learn
I hope one day you will see
Nothing means as much to me
As our friendship does today
And there's nothing I can say
But...
Thank you.


message 19: by KB (new)

KB Love is our weapon (kaitybugs) | 881 comments It's for you, originally written for Patar but it is for you.


message 20: by KB (new)

KB Love is our weapon (kaitybugs) | 881 comments Yay!


message 21: by KB (new)

KB Love is our weapon (kaitybugs) | 881 comments He talked about the girl he liked when I was totally in love with him.


message 22: by KB (new)

KB Love is our weapon (kaitybugs) | 881 comments He knew I liked him :(


message 23: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) I hate when that happens :/


message 24: by KB (new)

KB Love is our weapon (kaitybugs) | 881 comments No he just liked her a lot so he couldn't help talking about her. Oh well i just don't like him anymore :)


Christina *Cantarella* | 632 comments what's the topic today? ^-^


message 26: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) Well, because generally this group can get a little depressed, I figured today's topic could be the best thing that's ever happened to you. If this makes you uncomfortable for some reason, free write.


message 27: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) I was going to write a storty about when I met my closest friend, but now I want to write one about my sons and daughter. :/ ((just found pics of all them and I'm trying not to cry))


message 28: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) Nny wrote: "You have kids?!"

Not in that sense. But I see them as my kids. I raised them, basically.


message 29: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) Looking at Alex's picture, I remember the day we were running down the driveway playing tag. He was three, and I was five. He looked back at me, as I was 'it', and he tripped and fell. Instantly, he started to cry, and I knew what was going to happen next. He always called for Nicky or Sandy when he was injured. This time, though, he stood back up, and ran straight tome. His knee was banged up, and he had a scrapw on his arm. I picked that three year old up, and walked back to the house. I took him to the bathroom, and cleaned and bandaged him. After that anytime he needed anything, he came to me. Untilhe was adopted about five months later. ((He got luckyI was going down hill by then. You can see that in the picture. My smile is different, and my eyes are hollow, but I'm still holding him.))


message 30: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) I'll write Seth's story in a minute. His didn't end the same; I was adopted before him.


message 31: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) Cassie *Yes you get slapped if you're looking ho* wrote: "So much has happened, kind of hard to pin down one thing..."

I know. I just wanted us to reflect on some of the positives in our lives.


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

Ok, lets try this....

The moment in my life
When I truely had to smile
A breakthrough from the pain
Mile by mile...
I never knew my heart could hold so much emotion
I never knew my love could have this much devotion...
Now the way I feel...
It's something very new...
It was the moment in my life
I fell in love with you...♥


message 33: by [deleted user] (new)

Lol, nice....


message 34: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) =)


message 35: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) I would never criticize someone for how they feel. :/ ((not aimed at anyone on goodreads.))


message 36: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) Staring at the ceiling,
Worried about tomorrow.
What will a new day bring?
Will I see your smile again?
I live for that now.
The first day I met hou,
I knew you were the one.
Nothing could tear us apart.
I love you,
And that all I know.
Life without you?
Unbearable.

Now you know,
The happiest day ofmy life was the day I met you
<3

I miss her


message 37: by [deleted user] (new)

Nny wrote: "Btw nice poem! :)"

Thanx...


message 38: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) Yes.


message 39: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) ((Yesterdays topic?))


message 40: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) That's cool =)


message 41: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) Yuse my happy moment?


message 42: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) He meant "you see". Not important now :) hello


message 43: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) Yes!


message 44: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) Who doesn't? Except my ex-best friend. But whatever, I don't need her!


message 45: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) ((ex-girlfriend...))


message 46: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) Yeah... I had no idea until like two months ago. Broke them up, and she hates me. She stiil is friends with Drae, though. ((Had to explain that I wasn't theone in love with her. Can you spell awkward?))



On another note, I got called a butt cracker tonight. WTF is that?


message 47: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) Lol

You're welcome.


message 48: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) It's 10 here, also. Night!


message 49: by liz (new)

liz (liz272) You're still in schol? My school got out yesterday. ((I got out Tuesday!))


Christina *Cantarella* | 632 comments lucckkkyyy!
We have two and a half more weeks of exams,then we're freeeeeeeee!


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