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message 1: by Seth (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) | 57 comments Mod
For a while now I have been thinking about continuing this story ... Do you think that I should? Here is a link if you haven't read it:


http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


message 2: by [deleted user] (new)

ok


Hylian Princess  (hylianprincess) I read your story. I liked it. I think that if you really like that idea you should continue with it.


message 4: by Seth (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) | 57 comments Mod
The thing is, the new plot would be about her while she is dead...


 ☠☼Serena☼☠ | 7 comments it rox man!
but dont kill her..
let her wake up in some far-off hospital, and talk about Chase's search for her, and the battle to get her back
sthn like that anyways.


message 6: by Seth (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) | 57 comments Mod
I try not to do stories that are not fantasy. So, I am not srue. But I will sureely consider your advice


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

I realized why I put "have no write". My computer was jacked up, and it was only random numbers and letters. I really like it though. Sorry. Maybe it wasn't the computer, maybe I was brain dead and forgot how to read.


 ☠☼Serena☼☠ | 7 comments okee :P
lol bells!!!!


Hylian Princess  (hylianprincess) Wait, did you say you don't write fantasy or stories that are NOT fantasy? Because if its like a fantasy then she could die and if you really wanted have something bring her back to like. Or she can stay dead.


 ☠☼Serena☼☠ | 7 comments hmmm..
but i hardly think that a search for a girl who survived a plunge many have survived is fantasy..

it's probably happened be4..


message 11: by Seth (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) | 57 comments Mod
i dunno what to do. How about I post TWO second chapters?


message 12: by Seth (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) | 57 comments Mod
Then you guys can see which ones you like


message 13: by Margaret (new)

Margaret | 7 comments hey, that would be pretty cool. You could post the first chapter under two different stories, and continue one with her dying and the other with her not dying. something like that.


message 14: by Brigid ✩ (new)

Brigid ✩ hmm. interesting


message 15: by Seth (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) | 57 comments Mod
maybe I will . . .


Hylian Princess  (hylianprincess) Well, is it a fantasy or not? That could change the whole outlook of the plot.


message 17: by Seth (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) | 57 comments Mod
both :)


Hylian Princess  (hylianprincess) oh. Cuz if you want she can die- MUWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAH- and then come alive again. That's part of the fantasy. Or she can just die. MUWHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAHA!


message 19: by ♥ Rachel♥ (new)

♥ Rachel♥   (i_got_a_jar_of_dirt) | 10 comments hurry up and post the other 2 chapters!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLZ!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lolzes


*luv of ur life* (aka caitlin) | 37 comments did you guys read any of the runaways graphic novels


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