Writers support discussion

Most of the errors I saw were capitalization. But other than that, well done!

When Luna got to the top of the hill she saw a herd of wild mustangs grazing, she saw several foals romping around together in the soft sunny grass, then she saw a dapple silver stallion walking around the herd very alert, she guessed that he was the lead stallion, Luna had heard of wild horses when Timothy talked to her. “Oh TIMOTHY!” she thought holding back tears. Then she gave a high pitch whinny, Twilight jerked around at the sudden noise, “who are you? Where are you from?” asked Twilight with the herd gathering behind him, Luna trotted down the hill toward him “I am Luna, I came from a neglected stable,” shuddering after she mentioned that.

This is the main paragraph I didn't understand. Mostly the Timothy thing. I didn't understand if he was actually there, she was imagining him, or she just thought of him.

Laurwhisker (Flame) wrote: "Yeah...I did this last year, when my grammar wasn't that good. See, it was meant for Timothy to be a young boy who owned her, but then had to sell her for some sad reason. I have to go through it a..."

No, I know who Timothy is. I just don't understand why she shouted out, "OH TIMOTHY!"

Lol, ditto. I always feel super mean.

Oh. I didn't see the "thought" part.

Where was the character you wanted me to write about?