We Write discussion

Ok, so I've finally gotten some of my stories on this site. I'd like to get y'all's opinion on them, ideas, editing tips, and etc.
My stories so far are:
'Duel' http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
'A Guava's Life' http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
'Jamie Bycarne'http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2..., and,
'Spring Daughter'. http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...
The first three are short stories, and 'Spring Daughter is a novel I'm working on, and I've put the first four chapters up.
So, if you'd take the time to read them, comment and/or give suggestions, I'd be SUPREMELY grateful.

Could you please post a link to each of your stories so that it is easier to find them. I would love to read them and give you feedback, but for some reason when I searched the writing I could not find the stories. Thanks:)

Ah, yes, thank you for mentioning that. Will do. ;)

Jen*Jello Monster* wrote: "Could you please post a link to each of your stories so that it is easier to find them. I would love to read them and give you feedback, but for some reason when I searched the writing I could not ..."

There you go! :)

Thanks! I have read and commented on your first two stories- I really liked them, good job! I will read the other two either later or tomorrow. Keep writing!