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Salma (irock-) | 54 comments They went out at the beginning of the year. After a lot of nerve, he went and asked her out, asking her if she wanted to be his. She was happy with this and they kissed under the moonlight which lighted like cigarettes.

They loved each other for a long time that people called them the golden couple. Until their relationship started crumbling. No one figured out that it would end like this.

He loved her and his love for her made him blind. He didn’t realize her constant disappearance. The way her eyes didn’t show the love that it used to show. He followed her like a love sick puppy; he walked right at the edge of their love and fell down.
She started getting fed up, saying that he wasn’t good enough for her anymore. She brought this up to him one day, telling him that they weren’t working out.

Too much of her astonishment, he fell on his knees, begging her to stay. He told her she’s all he needs. That without her he was nothing.

She shrugged him off, telling him he wasn’t worth her love, that he’s made a mess of himself.
He calls out her name, as she leaves. He cries, tears falling down drying, before another one comes and takes its place. His heart was breaking and he felt like thousands of needles had poked him. He wanted to open his eyes and see her face even if he had to wait for a thousand days.

He knew he hadn’t always been where she wanted him to be. But now he was standing there, arms out, waiting for death to take him away.


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Salma (irock-) | 54 comments Firestormkittycat wrote: "*looks for a like button*"

Haha :) Thank you . I edited it and posted a second chapter . You can go and read it if you wanna :) http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...


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