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message 1: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
Every week I will choose a topic on what you guys want to write about and you'll all make your own individual stories and twists. They will always be on Percy Jackson or Heroes of Olympus don't worry. =D


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Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
The meeting of the Greeks and Romans... (I bet everyone has a story idea by now huh?)


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Savannah | 2093 comments oh dear. i can't think of anything......


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Savannah | 2093 comments oh okay!!!! wait for it....


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can I use the fanfic that I did last time.You gotta admit it was pretty cool


message 6: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
sure of course! =D


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Savannah | 2093 comments Annabeth:

Annabeth stared out of the window, searching through the sea of people, some looking up in wonder, anger or excitement. There was this one kid, he had straw blonde hair, and he was really skinny, but he radiated some kind of power, and his expression was pure hatred. Another girl with long black hair and calculating eyes was looking for someone, like Annabeth, but she was looking up, while Annabeth was looking down. Annabeth kept on looking for a glimpse of midnight hair or striking sea green eyes looking up but she didn't see Percy. Piper walked in and stood next to Annabeth, looking down with her.
"You'll see him soon," Piper reassured Annabeth.
Annabeth sighed. "I know, I'm just so- impatient!"
Piper laughed. "I know, I know." She paused. "Leo is going crazy."
Annabeth looked at her and smiled, asking her with eyes.
"'How am I supposed to land this thing? All those people aren't even moving! Didn't they KNOW a big mother warship was coming?'" Piper imitated in a squeaky voice. "Anyway, I told him that he was just the repair boy and he couldn't do everything and I suppose that didn't help his mood."
Annabeth laughed. The boat lurched and they got a little closer to the people. Annabeth could hear Jason yelling,
"Romans!!! It's Jason Grace, your praetor! Move back, so we can land!!!"
Piper sighed. "Guess I owe Leo an apology," she said, and walked out. Annabeth looked out of the window again and spotted that girl with dark hair. A small smile played on the girl's lips. The boat thudded and landed, and Annabeth ran to the deck. Jason walked off of the boat and looked at the crowd.
"I have been gone for a while, and that's because I have been with the Greeks," he told them.
Annabeth raised her eyebrows while the crowd murmured to each other.
"They have treated me very well, and I have now figured out that the Prophecy of Seven has started," he told them.
The prophecy of seven? Annabeth thought. Does he mean the Second Great Prophecy?
"The Prophecy of Seven is also known to the Greeks as the Second Great Prophecy, and we together have figured out that to fulfill this prophecy the Greeks and the Romans need to work together."
The straw-blonde, skinny boy yelled out, "How are we supposed to know if you are telling the truth? Even if you are, we don't need the Greeks help! How are we supposed to trust them?!"
Annabeth's hand instinctively went to her dagger, but Jason glanced her as if to say, "Don't mess with him, leave it to me." Reluctantly, Annabeth removed her hand and crossed her arms. Jason glared at the straw-blonde, skinny boy and said,
"Octavian, you can trust me. The Greeks have been my friends. They have treated me very well, and yes. The Prophecy of Seven has started. Why else would we come here? Why else would I have disappeared?"
The straw-blonde, skinny boy, Octavian, glared at him and Piper walked to the front.
"We need to work together, or else Gaea will take over, and the gods will fade, causing us all to die," she addressed them. Her voice was so convincing and Jason glanced at her, smiling a little.
"They are lying, can't you tell?!?" Octavian exclaimed. "That girl is trying to convince us to trust them, when really they are going to take over our camp!"
Annabeth tightened. "Well how are we supposed to trust you?!?" She burst out angrily. Octavian had a smug look on his face and yelled out,
"I told you! I told you that they wouldn't work with us!"
Whispers broke out in the crowd, most angry. Annabeth balled her hands into tight fists. A movement in the crowd caused everyone to be silent. All eyes went to the person making his way to the front, and Annabeth could tell without a doubt who it was. Percy.


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Savannah | 2093 comments do you guys like it? :)


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Yuman (yumnaep) | 480 comments testing, testing, One Two Three:

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Yuman (yumnaep) | 480 comments OhMiGosh!!


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Yuman (yumnaep) | 480 comments Nope, the test failed. NVM, PPl!


message 12: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
That was AWESOME Savannah! I'm getting mine in too. I've been writing it for the past four days in my little note book I luge around with me. The suspense is killing me!


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Savannah | 2093 comments haha! k, thanks!!!! :)


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I luv it, dude! Nice job!


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Savannah | 2093 comments YAY!!!!! annabeth is back :):):):):):):) im so happy.


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Savannah | 2093 comments ok I'm going to continue it... :)


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Savannah | 2093 comments well, actually, I'm going to do what happened through Percy's point of view, then continue with what he said.


message 18: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (last edited Dec 23, 2011 01:16PM) (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
I think I'll give another week to you guys before starting a new topic... we only had not even half the week and you guys have SOOO many ideas. Which is awesome!


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Savannah | 2093 comments Percy:

Percy walked outside with Hazel on one side of him and Frank on the other, and they all looked up at the flying warship. Percy thought he could see someone peering through one of the windows, but he couldn't tell. Quickly he looked back down and started to make his way to the front of the crowd, but one of the people on the boat with blonde hair started yelling,
"Romans!!! It's Jason Grace, your praetor! Move back, so we can land!!!"
He looked over at Hazel who was smiling.
"It's Jason," she whispered, and she gripped Frank's hand. Frank looked over at her and smiled. Hazel was smiling too, but it wasn't a love struck smile, it was a smile like when your brother comes back from camp. Not that I'd ever known that feeling, Percy thought.
The boat landed and Jason got off of the boat. Annabeth ran out and Percy's heart did a happy flip. She's here, and I'm here and this is the first time I've seen her in 8 months, he thought. Jason started talking,
"I have been gone for a while, and that's because I have been with the Greeks," he said. Everyone started whispering to each other, and Hazel and Frank both looked at Percy and smiled. Percy glanced at them and smiled back. He looked forward and watched Annabeth while Jason started talking again.
"They have treated me very well, and I have now figured out that the Prophecy of Seven has started."
The crowd was eerily quiet as they stared at Jason. Percy looked at Annabeth and he could almost see the gears in her mind working on what Jason meant. It was like Percy could read her mind. "The prophecy of seven? Does he mean the Second Great Prophecy?"
"The Prophecy of Seven is also known to the Greeks as the Second Great Prophecy, and we together have figured out that to fulfill this prophecy the Greeks and the Romans need to work together," Jason continued. Percy nodded, and then Octavian called out angrily,
"How are we supposed to know if you are telling the truth? Even if you are, we don't need the Greeks help! How are we supposed to trust them?!"
Percy wanted to go over and punch Octavian in the face, but he stayed still and watched Annabeth's reaction. Her face turned angry and she tightened up, then went for her dagger, but Jason looked over at her and slightly shook his head, so Annabeth removed her hand and crossed her arms. Percy smiled. He missed her so much and he wanted to go to the front of the crowd and hug her.
"Octavian, you can trust me. The Greeks have been my friends. They have treated me very well, and yes. The Prophecy of Seven has started. Why else would we come here? Why else would I have disappeared?" Jason said. Percy nodded at his words, and a girl with long brown hair walked to the front. Percy recognized her from his dreams.
"We need to work together, or else Gaea will take over, and the gods will fade, causing us all to die," she said with a voice calm and sweet. Percy recognized it as charm-speaking, but her voice was so convincing, Percy didn't care. Octavian however, didn't agree.
"They are lying, can't you tell?!? That girl is trying to convince us to trust them, when really they are going to take over our camp!" He exclaimed. Percy groaned, but the crowd seemed to connect with him and most of them started mumbling to each other, angry.
"Well how are we supposed to trust you?!?" Annabeth exclaimed angrily. Octavian yelled back out smugly,
"I told you! I told you they wouldn't work with us!"
Percy took that as his cue and walked to the front, trying to be calm. He could see Annabeth and a little smile blooming on her face. That gave him courage. He started walking faster, and when he got to the front, he yelled out,
"Romans! As I told you at the meeting, the Greeks are friends, not foes. If we can work together, then we can win. You saw how it was with the war here. We could barely survive, but with the Greeks, we will have much more help. We need to unite as allies and that will never happen unless we try. So let's try!"
The Romans started at him and Percy muttered,
"Man, that was so embarrassing."
Jason glanced at him and snickered.
"Watch this," he whispered. Then he yelled, "Let's try Romans!!!"
They all roared their approval and Percy rolled his eyes. The Romans then all started mingling and talking.
"That is so not fair," he mumbled, and Jason smiled at him, then stuck out his hand.
"Hey, I'm Jason Grace," he said.
Percy shook it. "Percy Jackson," Percy looked at him curiously. "Your last name is Grace?" Jason nodded. "I have a friend," Percy continued. "Her last name is Grace."
"Thalia?" Jason asked. Surprised, Percy nodded. "Yeah, I know her. She's my sister," Jason said. Percy's jaw dropped. Jason grinned. "We'll have to talk later," he said.
"Yeah," Percy responded, still in shock, and Jason walked away. Percy looked over and saw Annabeth staring at him. Happy tears were running down her face. They embraced each other.
"I was so worried," Annabeth whispered. Percy smiled.
"You know what?" He told her. She pulled back and looked at him as if trying to pull the thoughts from his head. "You were the only one I remembered." Annabeth smiled and they hugged again.
"Man, how is that fair?" A boy muttered. Percy looked at him, and recognized him yet again as Leo, the repair boy or Sammy with the curly hair and elfish features.
"What do you mean?" Percy challenged.
"You have a girlfriend!" Leo the repair boy/Sammy replied. Percy started laughing and he said,
"Leo the repair boy, right? Yeah, we got your message."
Leo scowled and glared at the girl with the long dark brown hair.
"Thanks a lot, beauty queen! I'm now known as the repair boy," he grumbled.
The 'beauty queen' rolled her eyes. "If I'm known as beauty queen, you can be repair boy," she answered, then she smiled at Percy. "Hi, I'm Piper."
Percy smiled back. "Nice to meet you," he responded.
He looked back at Annabeth. "This is a nice way to start the quest," he stated.


message 20: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (last edited Dec 23, 2011 05:19PM) (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
Oh my god I love it! Usually I'm a little negitive in the writing about 'the reunion' cause it's all blah blah blah oh I missed him sooo much and all that. Yours included everyone and a nice meeting with Percy and Annabeth. Great job!


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Aifos (theheirofErisHORTIQUE) | 117 comments Vinga tia, continua aixó és una passada!!!!!

If I had to write this chapter it would be depressing, in the french schools they don't show us how to imitate the style of writting of another author. :(

Well, we actually did once this year for the tragedy of Racine: Phèdre. Apparently my teacher had a great time correcting the essays.
GOOD JOB!


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Aifos (theheirofErisHORTIQUE) | 117 comments God! my English is getting awful!


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Savannah | 2093 comments Uh... I understood everything you said!


message 24: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (last edited Dec 24, 2011 09:36AM) (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
Aifos wrote: "Vinga tia, continua aixó és una passada!!!!!

If I had to write this chapter it would be depressing, in the french schools they don't show us how to imitate the style of writting of another autho..."


Well they don't in my school either. I think we all have different writing styles and that affects what happens sometimes. There ARE a lot of possiblilites for this meeting of the Greek and Roman...


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Savannah | 2093 comments there are SOOOOO many possibilities


message 26: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
Savannah wrote: "there are SOOOOO many possibilities"

Ikr!


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Savannah | 2093 comments you should type in yours!!!!

hurry :P


message 28: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
I'm still writing it in my little note book. I swear it's gonna be like seven pages long so be prepared. =D


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Savannah | 2093 comments Haha. I'm excited!!!!!!! :)


message 30: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
haha check the description for our group! =D


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Savannah | 2093 comments I know I saw it!!! I was like...

"THEME SONG????????? totes awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"


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Savannah | 2093 comments content sigh. happiness.


message 33: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
Yeah pone to all you other groups! They don't have that! =D


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Savannah | 2093 comments YEAH PONE!!!


message 35: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
Yeah peoples and yeah I know people is already plural but I like saying peoples, have a prob... oh gods first Aphrodite now Ares, these gods are killing me! =D


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that was soo funny!


message 37: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
you like it I take it? =D


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yeah i like it! who wouldn't?


message 39: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
=D thanks!


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It's creative and funny.


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R we actually writing?


message 42: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
Yeah


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No, like, a story.


message 44: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
Look at the first comment


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Aifos (theheirofErisHORTIQUE) | 117 comments i actually have an idea on my mind but it´s just after the meeting, much more like the night of that day, dunno if i can out it in, seing the topic of this week


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Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* wrote: "Look at the first comment"

I know, but no one's submitting anything...I myself dont really like to write, I just read.


message 47: by Isabelle *the face behind the crazy*, The Mark of Athena :3... I can destroy the world YAYYY!!!!- O_O (new)

Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
I'm going to in a bit but I still have to finish writing it... Oh gods its long! :)


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Aifos (theheirofErisHORTIQUE) | 117 comments so as I said it's out of topic :S
Anyway I hope you guys will read it anyway...


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Aifos (theheirofErisHORTIQUE) | 117 comments Percy didn’t need a dream to feel worse but of course he had to. After the war games ended with a duel between him and Jason; yeah, great ending; it was hard to sleep in his bunch of the Fifth Cohort, he felt like he had been put in a school for deaf, or more simply, an outcast. It was hard to hold the view of Dakota, and all the others, who still saw Jason as their leader, only Frank and Hazel comforted him. He hoped he would soon be able to make peaces with the son of Jupiter, or…leave?

He hadn’t thought about that option before but now, after dreaming of Gea there was that “And what if…” question that grunted like a thunderbolt in his mind. A pure nightmare.
He couldn’t sleep for a long time, and just stretch on his bunk with his eyes fixed on the ceiling. He didn’t need a dream. Watching Juno/ Hera (whoever) scowling at him with that snob look and saying: “Now, dear. You have done a greaaat job, with Jason. Seriously, PEER-FECT! That’s the thing we needed most, the two main leaders fighting against each other. Is there any way my brothers can avoid of complicating my life, oh, and of course, my quests?” and so on.
Finally, his eyes felt heavy and he saw the humid and warm atmosphere of a cavern. It might have been a cave or either a cell, there was no way of telling. The torches were distributed equally throughout the corridor. The water streamed, silently, almost invisible. And the atmosphere was cold, very cold, Percy moved forward, he didn’t knew what he was following or even where he was goin, he only knew that the air was getting cooler. He passed many monsters he’d never seen before; sadly they were as pretty as a forgotten sandwich and twice as smelly as a pair of socks left in some trainers in a locker of sport. The worst part was the aura of power each monster had, they were stronger, not like any monster he’d ever met before. Yup, Gea was finding the best and gentles monsters of the entire Tartarus.
Somehow he found what he wanted, a small boy, with dark hair, dirty black clothes and deep dark eyes of crazy. If it hadn’t been for his poor condition he would have jumped and strangle Nico di Angelo to the death. Nico seemed so vulnerable on his torn clothes and so sickly, shivering in the cold wind that came from somewhere in the cave. Two huge shadows appeared, the two monsters looked like a boar that had been, genetically united to a gorilla, plus a yellow lizard with pink spots that looked vaguely to a teddy bear, which didn’t suit at all with the axes on each hand of both. One of them groaned something like: “Aw, stupid winter goddess, we should cook her with potatoes, and heat her up a little, like we’re going to do with this demigod as soon as our patron gives us the permission.” Nico heard that part and shut a “give me a sec. and you’ll be back to Hades” look.
- Enjoying your dwelling, demigod?” A slipy voice chilled the back of his neck. Percy backed up to find himself nose to nose with Gea, she was stronger, seemed more alert and awake. He suddenly thought that he would be able to touch her and find solid rock. Right there, in Rome, she was the scariest immortal present in that cell and the most powerful living that Percy had ever faced. - I am waiting for a response. – Percy thought she was talking to him until she said – Son of Hades. – He turned to Nico, who had got up to his feet, the scowl of pure hatred darkened his features and even in chains he could feel the aura that he emmaned.
- You’re “highness”. – he said with distaste. The Earth goddess smiled with amusement, her closed eyes seemed to study his face. ( Don’t ask how).
- Ah, you should be grateful, Nico, that I did not let my pets devore you a few days ago, you know. You are going to be very useful to me and I am grateful for that. – Nico crossed his arms
- First, the ocean will have been frozen.
- Do you really think that you stand a chance, demigod? I am the Earth goddess, not even the olympians are able to control me. What will do a child of Hades do to me? Soon enough your friends from Camp Jupiter and from Camp Halfblood, will head towards Rome, they don’t know they’ve got a spy in their lines and Percy Jackson will not be able to save his friends this time. – Percy freazed, it was like if his terror had become liquid and had frozen with the air.
- He’s not alone. – Nico said. – There’s Anabeth, Hazel, Frank…
- His flaw will fail him this time. When he will get here he will see that he does not stand a chance. He has been lucky against my sons Alcydoneus and Polybotes, he had good allies…
- And you were quite slow, you should do some jogging to get back fit. – Nico noticed helpfully. Gea scowled in dreams
- Laugh and joke as you want, di Angelo, but tell me, what has he done to you? What has Zeus done for you and your father, are you not tired of trying to impress him? It would be better for you if you joined me. With your help we will bring them back, they will wake up soon. – Nico stared at her, anger, terror washed over his face for a second when he understood the lady’s plan.
- No way. – He stammered. The goddess laugh.
- You brought you’re sister, Hazel, back from the death. I do not see someone better than you to bring my sons back.
- I won’t betray them…
- Maybe, but you will not be able to stop me.
With amazing speed she reduced the space between Nico and her, Nico yelled covering his ears and closing his eyes as Gea tried to take control of his body. Nico fought back but Percy could sense that he was getting tired. He had to wake up, he had to warn the others. He struggle to leave the cave, but it was hard to leave, with Nico being possesed by a ten thousand years old goddess…
Nico fell down, breathing hard and shivering. The goddess seemed to be listening; Percy put all his attention on her.
- Percy Jackson. – She whispered, all his bones froze, it was like hearing a snake, she turned slowly towards him. – I thought you would never come to visit. – That cold smile on her face was blinding, exhausting. – My dear little pawn. So, you have listened to our conversation, hmm? Yes, bring your friends here to close the doors and you will see how they fall in front of you, one after the other. I will keep you and that upstart of Jason Grace, bring you to Olympus like my pets will be fun, oh, I can yet imagine the face of your parents, which would be brilliant. Unless, unless you leave your friends at their mercy, you go back to your dear camp, meet your mother and watch Olympus crumble without your sacrifice. Choose my dear pawn, but remember that whatever choice you make, you will lose.
Her laugh made the celling tremble, the rocks started to fall over him and he woke up shivering and sweating.


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Isabelle *the face behind the crazy* (bookmaniac1) | 6386 comments Mod
Fantastic! So new topic 'War Games with the Greeks'


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