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message 1: by T.O.L.I., ~the ruler, and dictator......not really~ (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 410 comments Mod
I know I do! so one suggestion I have is just write constantly even if they are short stories, and eventually things will lengthen out, that happened with me, so any othe suggestions.

or problems with writing longer we could help with


message 2: by Leiko (new)

Leiko Xantara (arrogant_protector) What is the problem?


message 3: by [deleted user] (new)

I can't write short stories. I can only write long ones.


message 4: by T.O.L.I., ~the ruler, and dictator......not really~ (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 410 comments Mod
lol opposite of my problem


message 5: by [deleted user] (new)

i know. wierd huh?


message 6: by Veronica (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) Eh, don't worry. I'm not so good with long ones either. I mean, I prefer writing short shorts anyhow. Usually they have a lot more impact than something long, and people are more willing to read it because they only have to dedicate five or ten minutes to reading.


message 7: by [deleted user] (new)

lol, i like long books, guess i'm just wierd that way.


message 8: by T.O.L.I., ~the ruler, and dictator......not really~ (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 410 comments Mod
i like reading long books but short stories do pack a punch and I know eveything I write has some really deep hiden moral-even if i didnt mean it to, it justa lways happens


message 9: by [deleted user] (new)

yeah, i'm with Cali, can only write long, not short, don't know why.... Guess that's just me


message 10: by Kenzie (last edited Dec 16, 2008 12:32PM) (new)

Kenzie I'm now more of a long story writer. I can't write short anymore, it's just not possible. Essays and stuff for school ... six ... seven ... eight paragraphs, what's the problem? Everyone hears, "Five paragraph essay, due January 8th!" as they leave the room, groaning. Me? "Five paragraphs? That's it! I could write that in my sleep!"

Short writing just doesn't work for me anymore.

And then now I have the problem of starting sentences with 'and' and 'because' since I do that so often in my writing. And then short sentences! I'll write something like, "Tightly" for an effect, you know?, and I'll get points taken off for it being too short.


message 11: by Madeline (new)

Madeline i only end up writing long stories cause i put in to much details and what i call back stories


message 12: by [deleted user] (new)

I know how you feel Kenzie! It happens to me so often!


message 13: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie I know! You tell them that you write like that all the time, and that Microsoft Word didn't have a problem with it, and they give you the, "You did not seriously just talk back to me, did you?" look.


message 14: by T.O.L.I., ~the ruler, and dictator......not really~ (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 410 comments Mod
My english teacher is just like that!!!!!!! and it bugs the heck out of me!


message 15: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie LOL. I know.

My 8th grade Literature teacher knew that I knew the material better than her, so she put me in charge of the class ocassionally! If they had a question the had to come and ask me, not her. It was awful.

Have your teachers ever done that?


message 16: by [deleted user] (new)

nope, because none of them no quite yet that i absolutely love to write, except my creative writing teacher's getting the hint . . . she loved how I recreated the Goldilocks story.
I think I need to tell my english teacher though. I'm sick of relearning stuff I already know. like plot . . . etc.


message 17: by Daisy (new)

Daisy I tend to write more short stories i have issues writing long stories. I can only write long stories when I have just the perfect idea and even then it takes FOREVER for me to finish.


message 18: by Jade (new)

Jade I agree with Kenzie!!!!! It has happened before. I hate it. I know I am not gonna be a teacher. Lol


message 19: by Jade (new)

Jade I am working on a chapter book. I haven't been able to work on it for a while....... It bugs me like heck!!!!!!!!! I know I am only 12 but I can't stand not writing!!!!! I got another idea, so I now have three. It is gonna be hard to write three books.............



message 20: by Jade (new)

Jade When I write long I begin to run out of ideas..... can anyone help? :D


message 21: by Daisy (new)

Daisy well you can take a break
or you could take your music player of choice lay down on your bed with a pen and peice of paper and if you get an idea from the music.
OR: talk about it in any writing group when you get stuck they can give seggestions or you could get an idea from one of there stories.


message 22: by Jade (new)

Jade thanks it helped a lot i am writing again. boy am i glad i joined this group



message 23: by Daisy (new)

Daisy I love writing but its hard sometimes. And really annoying for me because I'm only 11 and our teacher just started teaching us about things that can help us write a couple of months ago, but I refuse to accept that I'm just learning and can't write nearly as well as any of you guys!


message 24: by [deleted user] (new)

lol, i just learned that when you write a sentence with Dialogue, such as:
"Mary went to the ocean," said Frank.
That's how you do it.
But usually I do it like this!! My whole freaking story has sentences like this!!
"Mary went to the ocean." Said Frank.
GAH!!!


message 25: by Daisy (new)

Daisy I know!!I learned that like two days ago!! Oh and before last week I never put in a new paragraph everytime I had diolouge unless i didn't put the person who was saying it!


message 26: by [deleted user] (new)

lol, it used to bug me just to do dialogue, now it's like I can't write without it!!


message 27: by Daisy (new)

Daisy I used to have the same issue. When I was like 6 or something I used to write a picture book series about two astronauts. I wrote three of those things without diolouge and i only wrote four!!


message 28: by Leiko (new)

Leiko Xantara (arrogant_protector) I have the same problem. I think of too long plots. Heck, I can't write anything less than a series.


message 29: by [deleted user] (new)

:D that's not bad, i think it's the same with me.


message 30: by Seth (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) I knew that you were supposed to write like taht since before i started really writing.


Xerxes Break(Vivian Ephona) (ephona) Same here XD I like have to have a series!


message 32: by [deleted user] (new)

yeah, me too!


message 33: by Seth (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) hee hee well i was talking about the diolauge but i guess thats true for me too ^^


message 34: by *JUHI* (new)

*JUHI* | 1 comments i like writing in short periods of time like 300 or 400 hundred words every night


message 35: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie I can't seem to do series (yet) there's not enough for me to write about. When a story tells itself to me it HAS to be put in one book, I can't make it drag on just because I want a series.


message 36: by Seth (new)

Seth (ninjaaaaaofwritingbooks) lol i c


message 37: by T.O.L.I., ~the ruler, and dictator......not really~ (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 410 comments Mod
Kenzie said: My 8th grade Literature teacher knew that I knew the material better than her, so she put me in charge of the class ocassionally! If they had a question the had to come and ask me, not her. It was awful.

Have your teachers ever done that?



not this year but in the past constantly!!!!! and this year in my science class....which is kinda weird b/c uisually its one of my worst subjects but this year its my best...



message 38: by Veronica (new)

Veronica (v_a_b) Well, science has a whole bunch of different branches, from physics to earth science to astronomy!


message 39: by T.O.L.I., ~the ruler, and dictator......not really~ (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 410 comments Mod
were doing life science


message 40: by Jade (new)

Jade i love life science!!!! right now we are learning about genetics, and we're getting to that part........
anyways, it is really easy


message 41: by Kenzie (new)

Kenzie Ugh, I despise science. But not really the material, just the teacher. XD


message 42: by T.O.L.I., ~the ruler, and dictator......not really~ (new)

T.O.L.I. (taleoflostink) | 410 comments Mod
lol kenzie


message 43: by Chandani (last edited Dec 22, 2008 02:11AM) (new)

Chandani  (milkduds920) Haha! Im doing Earth science. They jedi mind trick you with phrases like "Celestial Objects"


message 44: by Jade (new)

Jade LOL, dats funny


message 45: by Chandani (new)

Chandani  (milkduds920) XD


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