Caitlin Crowley, First time author discussion

wow thts rele good!!

I'm not in love with WHAT you write, as far as subject matter, but do have to tip my hat at the skill with which you do it. I could learn a few things from you, stylistically.

Caitlin, I think you have a serious writing career ahead of you. I love your use of words and expressions like "playing poker with the devil." You write with such feeling and I can see that the story flows right from your inner being. We only get to see that in a natural born writer. You're looking at what might be a bestseller even a movie. But I have only three small suggestions to make. 1) Edit, 2) Edit, and 3) Edit. Don't let your haste to tell the story force you to make mistakes like using "there" as a possesive pronoun when you mean "their" or things like "I still refusal to believe." Sorry, it's the professor in me. So don't hate me for telling you the truth. You have a huge talent but the devil in in the details. Val

Then I was right, you are a natural born writer. Anyone who accepts constructive criticism has to be! My compliments to you. Now I understand how an 18 year old is mature enough to write the way you do. Keep on doing it!

I think you and I may have a cosmic conection. I am exactly the same way. When I have a lot going on and can't write, I get ... almost constipated. I know that's gross, but it's the best graphic I can think of at the moment. And I can see the passion in your writing. I'd like to do a short story with you sometime.

Then we'll have to talk after the holidays. I'll get together a couple of starters.

Valentine wrote: "Caitlin, I think you have a serious writing career ahead of you. I love your use of words and expressions like "playing poker with the devil." You write with such feeling and I can see that the st..."

I agree with Val :)

i thought it was good if you relese it i will be sure to pick it up from the store.