Relaxing Fun discussion

Please share some of your writing if you are a writer (at any level). Thanks.

http://www.goodreads.com/story/show/2...

titled Mall Suicide. tell me what I need to change.

I Am

I am a wolf
running through the night
with the stars shinning on my back
I am the very stars themselves
lighting up the sky forever
I can touch the moon if i want to
I sing with the sun and wake the world from its sleep.

By:Samantha Renee

-Splash-

Splash tears fall
peace never comes
longing it never fades
ashamed of everything in me
slashes on my wrists
heart break has done all this

By:Samantha Renee

nice!