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Precisely At Dusk
by A.E. Connelly

Upon completing Precisely At Dusk I can honestly state that it was a tease. In a hyper-anticipatory, sexual suspence way. Translation: Well crafted with excellant execution.
A.E Connelly has written a story I had planned to read later and when sneaking a peek at the first few lines, just had to finish.
Without the need for third-person perspective, a foundation of a Dominates anticipation awaiting and satisfying their submissive was interesting in first-person, due to the mental imagery A.E. Connelly created. This leaving me satifyied as the female submissive's inital internal indecision was discribed in such a way I found myself breathing through her anixety with her.
No need for the leather, yet, not forgetting the necesary toys and leashes a D/s relationship desires, the male protagonist was clad in everyday attire while sporting more than everyday intent.
If granted one wish for Precisely At Dusk, it would be for it to find its feet and dig it's heels in for a full length novel in which I could enjoy the D/s relationship for the duration of their weekend they merely began and gratefully delve into the psyche of each character and the in-and-outs behind the need for the relationship.